高三英语写作指导全.ppt

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1、u Were tough.u Were strong.u We can endure anything.高高 三三 英英 语语 写写 作作 指指 导导陕西省丹凤中学陕西省丹凤中学TasksTasks1. To learn about some requirements for an excellent composition2. To know how to write a good open-ending part3. To know how to write a good essay五档作文评分标准五档作文评分标准: :u完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆

2、盖所有内容要点。点。u应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。u语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。言运用能力。u有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。紧凑。u完全达到预期的写作目的。完全达到预期的写作目的。Main points of a beautiful composition:Main points of a beautiful composition: 1. 要点要点齐齐全全 2. 词词

3、句句优优美美 3. 开放部分思想深刻，内容丰富开放部分思想深刻，内容丰富 4. 过过渡恰当渡恰当 5. 书书写写认认真真Steps of writing a composition:Steps of writing a composition: 1 审题审题 体裁，人称，体裁，人称，时态时态； ； 篇章框架篇章框架 2 写点写点 6-10个得分点，千万不可个得分点，千万不可遗遗漏；漏； 写出写出动词动词短短语语 3 连词连词成句，成句，连连句成文句成文 4 用短文改用短文改错错的精神修改作文的精神修改作文疏于审题，随意动笔，涂改严重，等于自杀疏于审题，随意动笔，涂改严重，等于自杀How to

4、write good sentencesHow to write good sentences1. 使用较高级词汇使用较高级词汇She doesnt like sports. She cares nothing for sports.She cares nothing for sports.When he heard she died, he went pale with sorrow.At the news of her death, he went pale with sorrow.At the news of her death, he went pale with sorrow.She

5、 cant pronounce the word correctly.She has difficulty in pronouncing the word. She has difficulty in pronouncing the word. 2. 运用较复杂结构：运用较复杂结构：被动语态，非谓语动词，从句，被动语态，非谓语动词，从句，倒装句，强调句，虚拟语气等倒装句，强调句，虚拟语气等People suggest that the conference be put off. It is suggested that the conference be put off. It is sug

6、gested that the conference be put off. She walked out of the room and many students followed her.Followed by many students, she walked out of the room Followed by many students, she walked out of the room To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things. What surprised him was that the little gi

7、rl knew What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things. so many things. 被动语态被动语态非谓语动词非谓语动词 从句从句The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.倒装倒装So curious was the couple about wild plants that So curious was the couple about wild plants that

8、they decided to travel to the forest.they decided to travel to the forest.Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.强调句强调句It was not until in 1920 that regular radio It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. broadcasts began. Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of f

9、irefighters.虚拟语气虚拟语气But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.would not have been saved.How to use linking wordsHow to use linking words表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also.and, as we

10、ll as, together with, not onlybut also.表示转折关系表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, whilebut, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while表示对比关系表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand.other hand.表示因果关系表示因果关系

11、so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end, for one thing . for anot

12、her, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系 besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, above all above all表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance, such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on in other words, and so on表示结论表示结论

13、in short, in brief, in a word, in general, in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion on the whole, in conclusionHow to use linking wordsHow to use linking wordsWhat is an open-endingWhat is an open-ending？ 也就是要干什么，用什么措施来解决以上也就是要干什么，用什么措施来解决以上问题问题得分亮点得分亮点自然情况自然情况1. 1. 位于长

14、江边、风景优美、气候宜人等。位于长江边、风景优美、气候宜人等。19791979年以来的成就年以来的成就2. 2. 经济发展迅速，人均经济发展迅速，人均GDPGDP约约30003000美元。美元。3. 3. 新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。存在问题存在问题4. 4. 水、空气污染等。水、空气污染等。5. 5. 能源消耗高、交通拥挤等。能源消耗高、交通拥挤等。市政府对江城发展的十市政府对江城发展的十一五规划（内容由考生一五规划（内容由考生自己拟定）自己拟定）6. 6. 7.7.8.8.Open-endingOpen-ending： Yet problems have a

15、ppeared as well. Yet problems have appeared as well. Water and air Water and air have been polluted.have been polluted. Too much energy has been wasted. Too much energy has been wasted. Traffic Jams often happen during the rush hours.Traffic Jams often happen during the rush hours. Facing the proble

16、m, our city government has decided Facing the problem, our city government has decided to take some measures according to the 11th Five-to take some measures according to the 11th Five-Year Plan. Year Plan. Some factories which cause serious Some factories which cause serious pollution will be close

17、d. More trees and flowers will pollution will be closed. More trees and flowers will be plantedbe planted andand more roads will be built or widened.more roads will be built or widened.尽量一一对应尽量一一对应How to write open-endingsHow to write open-endings1. 要要紧紧扣主扣主题题， ，首尾呼首尾呼应应，使文章有一定的完，使文章有一定的完整性。整性。2. 思想

18、健康思想健康， ，积积极向上。极向上。“ “建建议议” ”和和“ “意意见见” ”不要不要混淆。混淆。3. 逻辑逻辑清晰清晰，用，用英英语进语进行思行思维维, 语语言准确。言准确。 4. 字数要合理，一般是字数要合理，一般是五句五句话话， ，50个个词词左右，左右，过过多了多了显显得得罗嗦罗嗦，太少了又无法表明意思。，太少了又无法表明意思。 严严重偏重偏题题不知所云不知所云观观点不明点不明有有观观点点, 有思想有思想An exampleAn example假如你是高中三年级的学生张明假如你是高中三年级的学生张明,在学校组织了一项在学校组织了一项“有烦恼向有烦恼向谁说谁说”的调查活动。请用英语给

19、校报编辑写一封信，反映相关的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、持相应想法的理由情况。内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的建议、看法。及你对调查结果的建议、看法。61% turning to friends and schoolmates61% turning to friends and schoolmatesThe majority of the students surveyed select their friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when t

20、hey have troubles and want to get away from them.u同龄人容易交流和理解同龄人容易交流和理解22% 22% going to teachers and parentsgoing to teachers and parentsAnother 22% choose their teachers and parents to talk to.u阅历丰富阅历丰富,有生活和教育经验有生活和教育经验17% 17% keeping to themselveskeeping to themselvesThere are 17% who dont share th

21、eir troubles at all. They either think that their troubles are none of others business or find it hard to communicate with others.u不愿与别人说自己的事或难以与别人沟通不愿与别人说自己的事或难以与别人沟通假如你是高中三年级的学生张明假如你是高中三年级的学生张明,在学校组织了一项在学校组织了一项“有烦有烦恼向谁说恼向谁说”的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、持相反映相关情况。内容

22、包括：调查结果（如图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的建议、看法。应想法的理由及你对调查结果的建议、看法。A sampleA sample From my point of view, students should share their troubles with their friends and schoolmates since they are of the same age and can understand each other well. Besides, they can also benefit from turning to their teachers and

23、 parents who should care for teenagers and help them in their life and studies. However, if one shuts himself away from others, he will find he has more and more troubles.PracticePractice人类已经进入一个崭新的世纪，不同的人有不同的幸福感。人类已经进入一个崭新的世纪，不同的人有不同的幸福感。某期刊正在中学生中进行幸福感的调查，请你根据下表的提某期刊正在中学生中进行幸福感的调查，请你根据下表的提示，用英语写一篇标

24、题为示，用英语写一篇标题为“Happiness”的短文，表达自己的短文，表达自己的观点的观点。Students Possessions Benefits Some Money Buying and doing anythingSome Health Enjoyment Some Wealth from parents Free from work注意：注意：1、不能照抄表中的内容；、不能照抄表中的内容； 2、注意行文流畅；、注意行文流畅； 3、必须阐明自己的观点或看法；、必须阐明自己的观点或看法； 4、词数、词数150左右。左右。How to express your ideas or mak

25、e your commentsHow to express your ideas or make your comments:I agree/disagree thatI think/dont think its proper toIn my opinion, From my point of view, So far as Im concerned, HappinessHappiness means different things to different people. For example, some students believe that if they have a lot

26、of money or large possessions, they will be happy. They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money. Some students think that they should be in good health, and do whatever they like. Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way, they

27、dont have to work hard, and they can own everything.A A samplesampleI dont quite agree with the above points. I dont think money means happiness. We cant buy everything with money, such as health, love and knowledge. I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can make great contributions to our

28、society with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, my “wealth” of happiness is in my study.HomeworkHomework假设你是李华。最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论太空探险的意假设你是李华。最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论太空探险的意义。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况。请你用义。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况。请你用150字左右给该报字左右给该报写一封信，客观地介绍讨论结果，并简要地表达你自己的观点。写一封信，客观地介绍讨论结果，并简要地表达你自己的观点。 一些同学赞同一些同学赞同一些同学反对一些同学反对你自己的观点你自己的观点获得新的知识获得新的知识耗资巨大耗资巨大？从太空取得新资从太空取得新资源源宇航员的安全宇航员的安全问题问题扩大人类的生存扩大人类的生存空间空间太空垃圾问题太空垃圾问题