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1、三段十句作文法三段十句作文法银川一中魏凤玲英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大提高作文成绩。需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文200字下面的句子数量都在8至12句之间以句子长短和构造不同而变化。如按每个句子平均1015个单词计算，用812个句子便能完成一篇要求在120150词的作文。其基本形式为：第一段开始主题句+扩展句第二段正文主题句+扩展句+扩展句+扩展句+扩展句根据内容确定扩展句的多少第三段结尾结尾句第一段为开始，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主体；第二句为扩展句，进一步讲明和支持主题句。

2、另外，可以将两句顺序倒过来，由第一句讲明情况，第二句提出问题。第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主体，它应与第一段的主体相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，讲明和支持本段的主体。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。第三段为结尾，简化为一句，使对全文的总结，并讲明作者本人的观点。三段之间的衔接要灵敏运用“启、承、转、合的过渡手段。范例：高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因而，做一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“HealthandSports为题完成一篇短文。能够围绕主题适当展开，词数100120。HealthandSportsSomestudentssaythattakingspo

3、rtsisjustawasteoftime.Atschool,therearesomanysubjectstolearnandsomuchhomeworktodothattimeisprecioustothem.Tousseniorthreestudents,everyminutecounts.Asaconsequence,thereisnotimeavailable,especiallyforstudentstotakeoutsidesports.However,Ishouldutterasonorousvoicethatsportsareessentialtous.Asanoldsayin

4、ggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy.Concentratingonstudyforalldaylongwithoutanyrelaxationisnoteffectiveanddoharmtoourhealth.Takingsomeexercisesafterclasscanrelivethepressureoftakingexaminations.Ofcourse,itisimproperforstudentstooverdosports.Asawhole,weshouldmakeabalancebetweensportsandstudy专家点评：

5、本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文章围绕“HealthandSports这一主题展开，两种观点陈述清楚。文中运用大量的词组和短语，语句变化多样，过渡自然，结尾表明本人的观点，也显得落落大方英语写作常用句型模板一段首句1.关于人们有不同的观点。一些人以为Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto_.Somepeoplesuggestthat_.2.俗话讲常言道，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即便在今天，它在很多场合仍然适用。Thereisanoldsaying_.Itstheexperienceofourforefathers，however，iti

6、scorrectinmanycaseseventoday.3.如今，它们给我们的日常生活带来了很多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是。Today,_,whichhavebroughtalotofharmsinourdailylife.First,_Second,_.Whatmakesthingsworseisthat_.4.如今，很普遍，很多人喜欢，由于，另外而且。Nowadays，itiscommonto_.Manypeoplelike_because_.Besides，_.5.任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everythinghastwosidesand

7、_isnotanexception，ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.6.关于人们的观点各不一样，一些人以为讲，在他们看来，Peoplesopinionsabout_varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplesaythat_.Tothem,_.7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。Manisnowfacingabigproblem_whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.8.已成为人的关注的热门话题，十分是在年青人当中，将引发剧烈的辩论。_hasbecomeahottopicamongp

8、eople，especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebatesarerightontheirway.9.在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了很多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。_hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.ithasbroughtusalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？According

9、tothefigure/number/statistics/percentagesinthe/chart/bargraph/line/graph，itcanbeseenthat_while.Obviously，_，butwhy?二中间段落句1.相反，有一些人赞成，他们相信，而且，他们以为。Onthecontrary，therearesomepeopleinfavorof_.Atthesametime，theysay_.2.但是，我以为这不是解决的好方法，比方。最糟糕的是。ButIdontthinkitisaverygoodwaytosolve_.Forexample，_.Worstofall，

10、_.3.对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，也是非常重要的。首先，。而且，最重要的是_isnecessaryandimportanttoourcountrysdevelopmentandconstruction.First，_.Whatsmore,_.Mostimportantofall,_.4.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们能够。Thereareseveralmeasuresforustoadopt.First,wecan_5.面临，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来。一方面，另一方面，Confrontedwith_，weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeas

11、uresto_.Foronething，_Foranother，_6.早就应该拿出行动了。比方讲，另外。所有这些方法肯定会。Itishightimethatsomethingwasdoneaboutit.Forexample._.Inaddition._.Allthesemeasureswillcertainly_.7.为什么？第一个原因是；第二个原因是；第三个原因是。总的来讲，的主要原因是由于Why_?Thefirstreasonisthat_.Thesecondreasonis_.Thethirdis_.Forallthis,themaincauseof_dueto_.8.然而，正如任何事

12、物都有好坏两个方面一样，也有它的不利的一面，象。However,justlikeeverythinghasbothitsgoodandbadsides,_alsohasitsowndisadvantages,suchas_.9.尽管如此，我相信更有利。Nonetheless,Ibelievethat_ismoreadvantageous.结束段落1.Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论2.Takingintoaccountallthesefac

13、tors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论3.Therefore,wedbettercometotheconclusionthat因而，我们最好得出这样的结论4.Allinall(Inaword/Insummary/Tosumup),wecannotlivewithoutButatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.总之，我们没有是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的问题。5.I

14、tishightimethatweputanendtothetrend.该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。6.Itistimetotaketheadviceofandtoputspecialemphasisontheimprovementof该是采纳的建议，并对的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。7.Thereisnodoubtthatenoughconcernmustbepaidtotheproblemof毫无疑问，对问题应予以足够的重视。8.Obviously,ifwewanttodosomething,itisessentialthat显然，假如我们想做某事，很重要的是9.Onlyinthisway

15、canwe只要这样，我们才能10.Itmustberealizedthat我们必须意识到11.Obviously,ifwedontcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat,whichwillleadusintodanger.很明显，假如我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能，进而使我们陷入危险之中。12.Itisurgentthatimmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopthesituation.很紧迫的是，应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。句式供略?要捉住英语高考作文得高分的关键点,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。下面是增

16、加句子复杂性的常见方法：?1句式要有变化。改变句子的开始方式，不要一味地以主语开始，接着是谓语，宾语，最后再加一个状语。能够把状语放在句首，或用分词作状语等。?原文Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.?修正Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.?原文Theyoungmancouldnthelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.?修正Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldnthelpcry

17、ing.?(2)在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵敏运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。?强调句?原文MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.Ithadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.?修正MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.?由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文中的“所，有很强的概括，如：?原文Wehadtostandheretocatchoffender.?修正Whatwehadtodowas(to)st

18、andthere,tryingtocatchtheoffender.由with或without引导的短语。如：Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.分词短语如：Satisfiedwiththeresult,hedicidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.?倒装句?Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.?NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.?省略句?Ifso,victorywillbeours.?Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary

19、.?比照，这在中文中也是常使用的方法如?Failureisnotacrime,butfailuretolearnfromfailureis.?WhenIplay,Ifeelexcited,andafteritIfeelrelaxed.?(3)通过分句和合句，加强句子的连贯性和表现力。?原文Hestoppedusanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.?修正Hestoppedusanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.?原文Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesangan

20、ddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.?修正Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.即时练习：IV.书面表达25分对当前正红红火火的“网上购物是有人欢喜有人忧，请你用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，谈谈本人的看法。文章须包括下面要点：1.网上购物已很普遍；2.网上购物的好处；3.网上购物的缺点。Shoppingonline附：作文中常用句型32个(供参考训练和背诵)1.Themosteffectivemeanstosolvethisproblem

21、isthat_.Inthatcase,_.2.Everythinghastwosides,noexceptionwith_.Foronething,_.Foranother,_.3.Judgingbythefigures,wecandrawaconclusionthat_.4.Inaword,closeattentionshouldbepaidtotheproblemof_.Onlyinthiswaycan_inthefuture.5.Inmyopinion,weshouldplacemuchemphasisontheimportanceof_.6.But_and_havetheirownad

22、vantages.Forexample,_,while_.Comparingthosetwo,however,Ipreferto_.7.Inmyopinion,_isjustascommonas_.If_,itmaybeveryuseful.Whatever_,thekeypointliesin_.8.Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright.Whenwe_,weshouldtakeintoconsiderationallaspectsoftheproblems,andthenmaketherightdecision.9.Personally,Ibelievert

23、hat_.Consequently,Imconfidentthatabrightfutureiswaitingusbecause_.10.Peoplearecomingtorealizetheimportanceof_.Theyhavebeguntotrytheirbestto_.Webelievethat_.11.Allinall,wecannotlivewithout_.Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystodealwithproblemsthatwouldarise.12.Whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesay

24、ing-_.Ifyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,youlldefinitelybenefitalotfromit.13.Itisessentialthateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentoendthesituation.14.Thereisnodoubtthatspecialattentionmustbepaidtotheproblemof_.15.Itishightimethat_.Herearesomeofthemeasuresthatmightbetakenimmediately.16.Althoughit

25、isaffectedbymanyfactors,stilltherearecertainwaysthatcanmakethesituationbetter.Themostimportantis_.Anotherwayis_.Stillanotheroneis_.17.Wemayhavealongwaytogobeforewereachthefinalgoal.Butonceweareontheway,thechancetoreachitisgreater.18.Butforme,Iwouldratherthinkofthematterinanoptimisticway.BecauseIbeli

26、eve_.19.Weallknowthestoryof_.Thislessontellsusthat_,weshould_.20.Myownpointofviewisthat_isanormalbehaviorinoursociety.Thereisnodoubtthat_.Asanoldsayinggoes,_.21.Fromallthereasonsabove,weknowthatgreatchangeshadtakenplacein_.AndIbelievethat_.22.Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusio

27、nthat_.23.Forthereasonsgivenabove,Istronglyrecommendthat_.24.GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined,Ibelievethat_.25.Therefore,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusionthat_.26.Recognizingthefactthat_shouldleadustoconcludethat_.27.Inshort,Isupportthestatementthatitisbetterto_because_.28.Mypointofviewin_largelyr

28、esultsfromthefactthat_.29.Nowaftercloseexamination,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusionthat_.30.Inmyopinion,tosolvethisproblemtheremightbetwoways.Onewaytosolvethisquestionis_.Anotherwaythatisworthadoptingis_.31.AsfarasIamconcerned,Itrusttheadvantagesmentionedaboveratherthanthedisadvantages.32.Forme,_isagloryanditisthemostimportantthingIhavetotakeintopracticalconsideration.