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1、托福独立写作思路解析：Gapyear托福独立写作思路解析：Gapyear在托福写作部分中，出现关于高中生能否应该经历间隔年的题目，需要同学们对间隔年有一定的了解与认识，包括对间隔年相关方面的单词积累，今日我将为同学们整理关于这个问题的托福写作思路解析！托福独立写作思路解析;GapyearDoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Studentsshouldtakeatleastoneyeartoworkortravelbeforetheygotouniversities.根据题目，我们能够总结为该不该利用Gapyear去工作或者旅游?什么是Ga

2、pyear?Agapyearisayearbeforegoingcollegeoruniversityandafterfinishinghighschoolortakingayearoffbeforegoingintograduateschoolaftercompletingabachelorasaundergraduate.Itisalsoknownasasabbaticalyear.Duringthistimestudentsmayengageinadvancedacademiccourses,extra-academiccoursesandnon-academiccourses,such

3、asyearlongpre-collegemathcourses,languagestudies,learningatrade,volunteerwork,travel,internship,sportsormore.思路拓展：Gapyearhasnumerousbenefits,buttypicallythetwomostcommonlycitedreasonsfortakingagapyearareadesireforincreasedself-awarenessandtoaddressacademicburnout.当然，大家还能够从下面几个方面汲取所好，展开论证1.travelthew

4、orldanddiscovernewcountriesandcultures2.enjoyaonceinalifetimeexperienceandarealpersonaladventure3.stepoutsideonescomfortzoneandgetanewperspective4.meetnewpeopleandmakefriendsoflifetime5.takeabreakandreturnrefreshedandrefocusedonwhatapersonwantstodoinlife6.adduniqueexperiencetoCVtohelponetobeadmitted

5、toauniversityorgetadreamjob托福写作范文素材：gapyear托福写作范文素材：gapyearTheProsofTakingaGapYearAfterhighschool，studentstypicallychooseoneoftwopaths：schoolorwork.However，athirdoptionexiststhatveryfewevenconsider：takingagapyear.ItmaynotbethenorminNorthAmerica，butgapyearsarequitecommonandhighlyrecommendedintheUK，Au

6、straliaandNewZealand.Justlikeattendinguniversityorbeingintheworkplace，takingagapyearisnotrightforeverybody.Ittakesalotofresearchandseveralfactorsshouldbeconsideredbeforedecidingonthenextstep.Pros：Itsachancetoregroupandrediscover.Afterbeinginschoolforseveralyears，youcanfeelburntout.Goingtouniversityw

7、hileyouarentintopshapementallywillonlyleadtopoorperformance.Usethetimetogetsomewelldeservedrestandrelaxation.Especiallyifyoufeeloutoftouchfromyourselfandtherestoftheworld，agapyearwillonlydoyougoodasyoureflectonyourfuturegoalsandaspirations，aswellasspendsomemuchneededtimewithfamilyandfriends.Moststud

8、entstaketheiryearofftotravel.WhetheryourebackpackingthroughEuropeormeditatinginanashraminIndia，youllrevelinyournewfoundrespectfordifferentcultures，customs，beliefsandlanguages.Youwillendyourgapyearwithseveralstoriesandmemoriesthatwilllastalifetime.Somestudentsalsotaketheopportunitytowork.Themoneysave

9、dupfromworkingisputtowardsfutureendeavorsandpurchasessuchasahome，acaroraneducation.Othersworktogainanedgeinanoverlycompetitivecareermarket.Bytakinginternshipsorjobopportunitiesrelatedtotheircareerpath，theygainvaluableexperienceandachancetonetworkwithindustryexpertsthatwillhelptheirresumesshine.Itsal

10、soatimetopursueotherpassions.YoumightwantthetimetowriteyourOscar-winningscreenplayorcreateastart-upcompanyinyourgarage.Youmightevendiscoverthatyouwanttopursueadifferentcareerpath.Itsachancetogetinvolvedinsomethingyoureallybelievein.Releasethehumanitarianinsideyouandvolunteerlocally，nationallyorinter

11、nationally.托福写作素材重点搭配和句子摘抄：feelburntout：感觉筋疲力尽arentintopshapementally：不在最佳的心理状态leadtopoorperformance：导致糟糕的表现getsomewelldeservedrestandrelaxation：获得应得的休息和放松feeloutoftouchfromyourselfandtherestoftheworld：感觉跟本人和世界脱节了reflectonyourfuturegoalsandaspirations：反思你的将来目的和志向backpackingthrough_x：在_x背包旅行revelinyo

12、urnewfoundrespectfordifferentcultures，customs，beliefsandlanguages：沉醉于对不同文化、风俗、信条和语言的无限敬重中;isputtowardsfutureendeavorsandpurchasessuchasahome，acaroraneducation被用在将来的事业或者购买上面比方：房子、车子或者教育gainanedgeinanoverlycompetitivecareermarket在过渡竞争的人才市场获得优势gainvaluableexperienceandachancetonetworkwithindustryexpert

13、s获得有价值的经历和跟业界专家沟通的时机careerpath：职业道路helptheirresumesshine：帮助他们的简历发光writeyourOscar-winningscreenplay：写一个能够获得奥斯卡奖的剧本createastart-upcompany：创立初创公司getinvolvedin_x：投入_x新托福写作素材适用题目：2021年3月23日大陆托福写教育类Studentshouldtakeatleastayeartoworkortravelbeforetheygotouniversities.托福写作语料库关于高中生能否应该经历间隔年真题如下：Studentsshou

14、ldspendatleastoneyearworkingortravelingbeforetheygotouniversity?Doyouagreeordisagree?高中生应该在上大学之前至少工作或者旅行一年，能否认同?(2016年3月13日)托福写作背景介绍Thegapyear=theGrandTour“间隔年，也叫“壮游年或者“断档年。是指从前英国贵族子女的遍游欧洲大陆的教育旅行。托福写作立场：成长中的年轻人应该被鼓励去经历间隔年，这是最佳的方式让他们拓宽视野，性格成长，尽管我们不能忽视其潜在弊端。间隔年的优势兼职工作能够帮助年轻人积累工作经历，获得自己成就感，使他们对于社会有了愈加深

15、入的洞察，为将来的择业打下坚实基础。旅行能够开拓视野、丰富知识、结交新友，锻炼独立性，这些对于将来的发展是有利好的。工作和旅行提高了人的社会意识，丰富了人生的阅历，成熟了人的心态。间隔年的弊端很多孩子可能沉迷工作和旅行不再回归校园，假如这样，间隔年就失去了它的初衷。青春期是人的求知欲望最强，也是学习能力和记忆力最强的珍贵时期，高中生不应该耽搁一年的时间远离校园而去打工或是闲逛，否则，学业就会被耽搁。高中生没有构成核心竞争力，很难找到工作。即便是找到，也很容易被欺骗和剥削。托福范文赏析：首段Suchishumannaturetoexploretheunknownandseetheoutsidew

16、ord，thatiswhyagreatmanyhighschoolgraduatesarekeenontravelingorworkingforaperiodoftimebeforeattendingdreamuniversities.ConflictingideasclashindeterminingwhetherornotitisawiseideatoinspirehighschoolleaverstoexperiencetheGrandTour.AsIseeit,themeritsofexperiencingthegapyearoutshineitspotentialdemerits.第

17、二段Themostimportanteducationalbenefitoftakingayearoffbeforestartinguniversitylifeisthattravelingexposesyoungadultstostunningplacesandexoticcultures.Itisonethingforteenagerstoreadaboutdistantcountries,butitisevenbettertoenrichtheexperienceoftheworldononesown.Whatonelearnsbyassociatingwithstrangersanda

18、bsorbingdiverseculturesissomethingheorshecouldneveracquireintheclassrooms.Forexample，Imademanycongenialfriendsbyself-traveltoTibetafterfinishingmyschooling.Thisfantasticjourneynotonlyexpandedmymindbutalsoalleviatedmystresstriggeredbytightacademicstudy.Feastingmyeyesonthestunninglandscapereallysweete

19、nedmylifeandliftedmyspirit.第三段Virtually,youngsterscanalsobecomethebeneficiariesofworkingaspart-timerstoo.BythatImean,earningalivinghasakeyroletoplayinhelpingoneaccumulaterelevantworkingexperience,trainonescrisis-solvingabilitiesanddeepenonesinsightintothesociety,whichwilllayasolidfoundationforonesfu

20、turecareerladder.Toillustrate,viaembarkingonpart-timejobs,Iknewthatmoneydoesntgrowontrees.Then,Istudiedevenharderwhencomingbacktocampus.第四段Notwithstandingallthat,wecanneverignorethepotentialdownsidescausedbyexperiencingthegapyear.First,thestudymightbedelayed.Someschoolgraduatesaretooimmaturetodrawon

21、theirgapyear,sotheyjustwastetimeduringthatperiodandharvestnothing.Evenworse,itishighlypossiblethatsomeyoungstersmightendupneverreturningtocampus.However，sinceacademicqualificationisextremelyindispensabletoeveryindividual，myconcernmightseldomhappen.尾段Inclosing,mystandisthattoinspireyoungadultstotakea

22、yearoffbeforegoingtocollegeisatwo-edgedsword.Yetyoungstersshouldbeencouragedtochallengethemselves.Thisisoneofthebestwaystomaturetheirthoughtsandchastentheircharacters.托福写作语料：1.gotouniversity=startuniversitylife=attenduniversity上大学2.earnaliving=workaspart-timers谋生3.dosomesightseeing=tobewell-traveled

23、=totravelononesown本人旅行4.Suchishumannaturetoexploretheunknown探索未知是人之本性。5.Themeritsofexperiencingthegapyearoutshineitspotentialdemerits经历间隔年的利大于弊。6.toexperiencethegapyear体验间隔年7.takeayearofftoworkandtravelbeforeattendingdreamuniversity升入理想大学之前，用一年的时间去工作或旅行8.feastingmyeyesonthestunninglandscape尽情欣赏迷人景色9

24、.reallysweetenedmylifeandliftedmyspirit使我快乐，精神振奋10.addspicetothedullroutineofeverydaylife增加枯燥生活之情趣11.layasolidfoundationforonesfuturecareerladder为将来事业打下坚实基础12.moneydoesntgrowontrees赚钱很辛苦13.notwithstandingallthat尽管如此14.endupdoingsth以为结局15.beledastray被引入迷途16.Sinceacademicqualificationisextremelyindispensabletoeveryindividual，myconcernmightseldomhappen.由于学历对于每一人都很重要，我的担忧很少会发生。17.isatwo-edgedsword是一把双刃刀18.Thisisoneofthebestwaystomaturetheirthoughtsandchastentheircharacters.这是成熟他们的思想，磨练他们的性格的最佳方式之一。托福独立写作思路解析：Gapyear