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1、托福写作话题分析：open托福写作话题分析：open-mindedopen-minded是思想开通的的意思，此类话题曾出如今托福写作题目中过，为了方便大家备考，下面我给大家带来托福写作话题分析：open-minded。托福写作范文：要想获得成功必须接受新观点2016年托福写作真题题目：6月18日托福独立写作真题回首Tobeasuccessfulperson,onemustbeopentonewideasandwillingtochangehisorhermind.(160618大陆)6月18日托福独立写作点睛：题目大意：要想获得成功，人们必需要接受新的观点并且愿意改变本人原有的观点。此题目选择

2、同意比拟好写，在去想分论点时，有两种方式能够用：第一种就是去想why,理由一：接受新的观点能够更好地适应变化的环境;理由二，接受新的观点能够与别人建立良好的关系。第二种去拆分举例，拆分职业：第一种职业IT行业的人;第二种职业教师。6月18日托福写作真题-独立写作此次试题出现了A,B卷A:A/D:Tobeasuccessfulperson,onemustopenuptonewideasandwillingtochangehisorhermind.B:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:peopleshouldbeopentonewideas

3、andchangehisorhermindtobesuccessful.A卷题目是绝对词类话题;B卷题目为建议类话题/二选一话题).注意区别处理这两类题目。以A卷题目为例：处理此类文章需要弱化绝对词，并给出其他合理的方式。关于此题，能够按下面方式组织文章：1)开始段-主题段一(去绝对词做让步段处理，写我方的好处)-主题段二(要成功的因素1)-主题段三(要成功的因素2)-结尾段;2)开始段-主题段一(优点一)-主题段二(优点二)-主题段三(优点三)-结尾段(小让步+综合其他能够使人成功的因素)。托福写作模板及参考答案：托福写作范文参考一:6月18日托福独立写作范文如下：Underthecurre

4、ntsocietyfullofintensecompetitions,howtoachievesuccesshasneverfailedtoarousedeepconcernandinterestamongthegeneralpublic.Thereof,agooddealofaccomplishedbusinessmenandelitesarestrongbelieversoftheclaimthattobeasuccessfulperson,onemustbeopentonewideasandwillingtochangehisorhermind.Towardssuchacomplicat

5、edissue,Iaminfavoroftheaboveclaimforthefollowingreasons.Inthefirstplace,beingreceptivetonewideascanhelppeopletobetteradapttotheconstantlychangingenvironmentandthusbecomesuccessful.Asiscommonsense,nomatterwhatfieldsorareasyouareengagedin,changehasbecometheperpetualtopic,whichmeansthatwhatyouheldfirml

6、yontobeforemaybecomeoutdatedandevenmisleadingovernight.Inotherwords,onlythosepeoplewithopenmindtowardsnewthingscankeeppacewiththechangesoftimeandaremorelikelytoachievesuccess.Bycontrast,rejectinganynewideasandneverchangingonesmind,peoplewillbegraduallysurpassedorevenreplacedbyothercompetitors.Agoodc

7、aseinpointisthecollapseofNokiaCompany,theoncemostfamouscellphonebrand.OnaccountofshowingnoacceptancetothenewoperatingsystemAndroid,theNokiahasannouncedbankruptcyandhasbeenacquiredbyMicrosoftCompany.Thesamelogiccanapplytoanyindividualswhoarestubborn.Besidesthat,embracingnewideascanhelppeopletobuildha

8、rmoniousrapportwithmorepeople,leadingtothehigherlikelihoodofbecomingsuccessful.Morescrutinyhasmadeitconspicuousthatanattitudeofopen-mindednessisstronglycorrelatedtoonespopularityamongothers,especiallyinaworkteam.Theunderlyingreasonisthatanyonewhohasawillingnesstolistentonewthoughtstendstoleaveagoodi

9、mpressionandthereofgainshelporassistancefromotherswhenfacedwithtroublesinthepathtosuccess.Also,beingopen-mindedhelpsyouworkthroughinterpersonalorintra-teamconflictsthatarisewhenpeopleworkinclosequarters.Bycontrast,insistingononeownviewstubbornlyusuallynotonlybuildabarrierforestablishingthefriendship

10、butalsoservesastheoriginofquarrelorconflictswithotherpeople.Putitanotherway,peoplewithoutaspiritoflisteningandcooperationhavedifficultyincompletinganyprojects,letalone,becomesuccessful.Indeed,acceptingnewideasmaymakepeoplefeeluncomfortable,becausetheyareforcedtogetouttheircomfortzone.However,theabov

11、ereasoningdoesnotbeardeepanalysis.Toillustrate,itisanindisputablefactthatsuccessreliesonnothingbutinnovationdrivenbyconstantlytakinginoriginalandcreativeideasandthoughts.Consequently,factoringwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecanconcludethatshowingacceptancetonewideasandchangingonesmindaccordinglyareofgre

12、atnecessityforthesakeofachievingsuccess.托福写作写作参考二:Everyoneislongingforsuccess;therefore,everyoneeagerlysearchesforeverymethodtoreachthatend.Havinganinclusiveandopenwoulddefinitelyserveasagoodpanaceaforeveryonewhowantstoachievesomethinginthelife.Nevertheless,itisnottheonlywaytowardonesheyday,foroness

13、uccessderivesfromthecombinedfactors,liketenacityandresilience.Admittedly,amanwithanopenmindfornewideasishalfwayforsuccess,fortheseinnovativeideasandphilosophiesofferonewithanotheroutlookwhenfacingadeadlockordilemma.Whatsthemostimportant,newideabringsaboutcreationtoourlife.Themodernsocietyhaswitnesse

14、dtherapidandpervasivechangesoftechnologiesalongwithsubtlesocialreforms.ItisthenewideasfromotherpeopleandotherplacesthatleadJamesDyson,theinventorifG-forcevacuumcleaner,toagreatsuccess;itisembracingthenewmethodfromtheexcellentathletesthathelpsJimmyLicreatehisspecialset“JimmyLiJump.Furthermore,changin

15、gourmindandlisteningtothenewideasfromothersisconducivetocooperatewithotherpeople.Amancannotsucceedwithouttheassistancefromothers.Anopenmindfornewideasandthoughtsareeasyforpeopletosharedifferentideas,therefore,itisbeneficialforcooperatingwithincertaingroupsorteams.Acooperativepeoplewouldcertainlygetm

16、orehelp,thustosucceedinamoreearlierway.However,anopenmindforoutsideideasissurelytheonlywayforonetosucceed,fortherearealotofotherpeoplegainingsuccessthroughotherways!Beingtenaciousandpersistentrepresentacontinuouseffortinonesspecificcareer.Thesecrettohappinessishardworkandeffort,not“quick-fixes.Great

17、ideasonlycannotguaranteeoneseffortsandactions.Onlybythedown-to-eartheffortsandhardworkcanthefinalsuccessgained!IfJamesDysondidnotexperimentforover5200timesafterhegotanewideafromothers,wewouldnothavewitnessedthebirthofthisnewandhighlyefficientvacuumcleaner.Therefore,tenacityandpersistenceprovideasure

18、waytoonessuccess.Furthermore,apositiveandoptimisticattitudetowardsfailurecanalsoserveasafacilitatorforonessuccess.Alotofpeoplefailedbecausetheyfearedthenewchallengesorfearedtofailagain.Peoplewithnegativeattitudesmaybeloathtotakeactioneveniftheyembracenewideasfromothers.Apositivemindsetcanserveasacat

19、alystforonessuccess.IfJamesDysondidntholdhopesforhisproductionpromotionandgiveupduringhisexperiment,wewouldhaveseenhisproductsprevailtheglobalmarket.Thus,asoundmindsetandpositiveattitudepropelsonetosuccess.Inanutshell,asuccessfulpersonisnotmadejustinoneday.Alotoffactorscontributetoasuccessfulpeople,

20、likenewideas,tenacityandapositivemind,tonamejustafew.Onlyinthiswaycanapersonexpectsuccessassoonaspossible!托福独立写作范文:失败后的乐观态度比成功更重要独立写作题目：Toremainhappyandoptimisticwhenyoufailismoreimportantthanachievingsuccess.托福独立写作范文：Modernsocietyplacesalotofemphasisonsuccess.Thoughsuccessisclearlydesirable,Ithinko

21、urintensefocusonsuccessisunhealthyandcounterproductive.Peoplewouldbebetterservedbylearninghowtoadoptapositiveattitudetowardsfailure.Firstofall,thiswouldallowthemtolivemorefulfillinglives.Studieshaveshownthatthefulfillmentbroughtbysuccessisveryfleeting.Whileyoumayfeelgreatforalittlewhileafter,yourmoo

22、dwillquicklydropbacktonormallevels.Theroadtosuccessispavedwithsetbacks;evenifyoudoeventuallyachieveyourgoals,ifyouareunabletoexperiencethefailurespositively,youwillhaveactuallyexperiencedanetdecreaseinhappiness.Itisthusimportanttoremainhappyandoptimisticthroughfailure,becausewhilefailurecomesinevita

23、blyandoften,successdoesnot.Secondofall,focusingtoomuchonsuccesswillhurtyourrelationshipswithothers,whereaslearningtoenjoyfailurewillactuallyimproveyourrelationshipswithothers.Thisisparticularlytrueofworkinginateam.Foroneclassproject,Ihadtoworkinateamledbysomeonewhoonlycaredaboutsuccess.Wedidntpursue

24、anyunusualideas,andmistakeswerecriticizedharshly.Theteamdidfairlywell,butbytheendeverybodyhatedworkingontheassignment.Theleadersattituderubbedoffonallofus:nobodywantedtotakerisks,andsetbacksweighedheavyonallofus.Thiswasincontrasttomyfriendsgroup,whichhadamuchmoreopen-mindedleader.Sheencouragedthetea

25、mtotestunconventionalideas,andanytimetheyhitaroadblock,theytookitasanopportunitytorethinktheirapproach.Aftertheprojectwasovertheyallremainedfriends,andtheyevenreceivedabettergradethanus.Thisleadsmetomyfinalpoint:enjoyingfailureandde-emphasizingsuccesswillparadoxicallymakeyoumoreapttosucceed.Thisisbe

26、causesuccesshingesonconsistentprogress,andconsistentprogresscanonlycomefromcontinuouslychallengingyourabilitiesandriskingfailure.MichaelJordanoncesaidthathissuccesscamefromfailingoverandoverthathehadmissedthousandsofshotsonhispathtogreatness.Hewasabletogetbetterbecausehewaseagertoseewherehisdeficien

27、cieslayandfigureouthowtoaddressthem.Thisisthecommonthreadweseeinallsuccessfulpeople:theyareallhappytofail,becausefailuresopenupopportunitiesforimprovement.Mostpeoplefailmoreoftenthantheysucceed.Thus,inordertoliveafulfillinglife,weshouldlearntoapproachfailurepositively.Thiswillnotonlyimproveourrelati

28、onships,butalsomakesuccessmorelikely.托福写作两大重点要知道1.托福写作重点一：学会用词在托福写作考试中，考生获得的分数的高低和考生使用的词汇是有很大的关系的，因而，当大家备考经过里，应该学会用词。在选择本人所用的词汇的时候，考生要遵循三个标准。写正确：不管考生想使用哪个词，在使用这个单词的时候，一定要保证这个单词中拼写的正确性，假如考生记不清这个单词了，宁愿不用这个单词也不要凭着本人的感觉去拼写。恰当：当大家用词经过里，把要保证拼写的正确除外，还要保证搭配的恰当，比方wait和await，wait指的是等候等待，指的是在某个事情发生之前停留在原地，不采取行

29、动，通常这个单词是作为不及物动词和for连用的，而await固然也有等候的意思，但是它特质的是对断定必来的人或者事情的不断等待，后面往往跟着宾语，是及物动词。有变化：在大家所参加的托福写作考试里，用词必需要富有变化，一个单词最好只出现一次，第二次或者后几次出现的时候，能够使用其它的方法来进行替换，比方考生能够用同义词，语法构造等等来替换。比方同样是表达老年人的含义，考生能够使用theold，可以以用theelderly,theaged,agingpopulation,theretired,seniorcitizens等等来替换。2.托福写作重点二：加强语法实力在大家参加的托福写作考试里，考生除

30、了要学会用词之外，还要打好托福语法基础，很多考生在考试的时候只知道使用一些相关的单词，但是不知道该如何把它们组合在一起，也会造成考试的失败。因而，考生在备考托福写作的经过中，一定要加强本人的语法实力，学会用不同的语法知识，比方定语从句，非谓语动词，强调句，倒装句，虚拟语气等等表达本人的观点，让本人的论证愈加充分有力。托福写作规律总结及温习策略1.独立写作最常见话题类型仍为教育话题：几乎每年托福独立写作考题中三成以上的题目都跟教育相关，同时在政府和成功话题中也会涉及到教育。不用多讲，教育话题真的是官方最爱。2.每年都会有一定比例的新题：从近几年考试新题情况来看(15年出现7道新题、16年12道、

31、17年3道，而18年已出10道)，平均每年会有近两成的新题出现，所以总的来讲还是以出旧题为主，尤其是16年题目。下面两道题，Tracy教师课上必讲呢。3.综合写作常考学科仍为考古和生物。先来看看今年综合写作涉及到的学科主题：Brendanthenavigator能否去过美洲、欧洲人到没到过澳洲、欧洲人到达北美大陆比我们所知的更早、Etruscan人到底是不是从土耳其到意大利的、一种恐龙脖子是直立的还是水平的、两只白海豚能否同一只、控制thespreadofweevils、植物晚上合其叶的原因、海龟保护措施的建议、owlparrots数量减少的原因、whales的beaching假讲，以及控制f

32、latworn在欧洲的扩张。当然还有很多，不再逐一列举，官方真的是太爱关于“谁去过哪儿和各种动植物相关内容。因而，备考经过中相关学科词汇的学习尤为重要。1.政府职能及工作成功相关话题有增加;二选一和三选一类型增加。相比去年考试而言，今年在话题方面涉及到了较难类型(政府和工作)，这类话题有相当多的同学在考场上才思泉涌，“为万世开太平上价值仍然开不了挂，只因政府相关素材和话题表达积累太少;当然还有完全想不到从什么角度来写的情况，一路尬写到出考场都不知道本人写的是什么。题型方面，2选1考题较多，对于此类题型，不少同学会把一道“考雅思还是考托福的题目写成“考托福的单一话题，在内容方面较为偏题。2.综合

33、写作现象题和方案题增加：这两类考题对于一套模版走“四方(各大托福考场)的同学来讲无疑是一种挑战，假如用Bycontrast,inaccordancewiththeprofessor,thisviewdoesnotholdwaterbecause这样一套一成不变答题思路来写“听力指出浏览当中的假讲不能解释现象，方案完全不能解决问题这样的反驳方式，也太过于买家秀了。3.压分：考过试拿到成绩单的同学，在成绩反面解读部分一定能看到写作评分表格，分明good对应的是24-30分。很多同学考完发现两篇文章双good也到不了24分，所以能否压分呢，同学们自有判定吧。2020年托福写作备考建议1.话题素材积累

34、好的文章离不开充实的内容，想要本人的文章充满论证细节而非言之无物、内容详细而非抽象难懂，离不开相关话题表达的积累。同时大家可以以通过学习范文，不仅能将好的语言表达收入囊中，可以以通过归纳文章思路，在切题、观点展开和连贯性的三个维度进行学习。2.重视历年机经从近年的考题情况来看，多数考题还是在重复历年机经题。建议大家在考前大量刷题写提纲;同时也推荐同学们关注考前机经预测，调整备考状态。3.练习加上批改言而不行假把式，但是光练不改真的就容易practicemakesmistakesfossilized，练了七八遍的错误，本人都会觉得“没缺点啊;所以写完记得一定要批改呢，写一篇有一篇的收获，祝大家越写越好。托福写作话题分析：open-minded