浙江省台州市天台县2016年高三英语新高考复习课件高考新题型之概要写作（共23张PPT）.ppt

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1、My temporary teacher Rose from Yuying-Middle School,who.is looking forward to our cooperation and perfect performance.SummaryRosechen陈慧娇 育英中学普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数词数少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的，从从总分中减去总分中减去2 2分分评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档(21-25)理解准确,涵盖全部要点。能

2、准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的言语。completecorrectcoherentconcise:no copyingcompletecorrectNarration （记叙文）（记叙文） Exposition （说明文）（说明文）Forms of LiteratureArgumentation (议论文）议论文）Writing Steps for narration summary?What form of passage is it? My name is Hua Fei and I am a sporting robot

3、 of the 23rd century. I am an expert A. ArgumentationA. ArgumentationB. A self-introductionB. A self-introduction（NarrationNarration）C. ExpositionC. ExpositionWriting Step 1: Read for form，key informationPara 1：Basic information about the robot Name: _Name: _ When: _ When: _ Occupation: _Occupation:

4、 _ Ability: _Ability: _ Prize won: _Prize won: _Hua FeiHua FeiIn the 23In the 23rdrd century centuryA sporting robotA sporting robotAn An expertexpert at ., . turn, dive . at ., . turn, dive .Silver medal in the Silver medal in the 7878thth Olympics OlympicsWhoWhenWhat Name: _Name: _ When: _ When: _

5、 Occupation: _Occupation: _ Ability: _Ability: _ Prize won: _Prize won: _* Basic information about Hua Fei:Hua FeiHua FeiIn the 23In the 23rdrd century centuryA sporting robotA sporting robotAn An expertexpert at high flying exercises at high flying exercisesSilver medal in the 78Silver medal in the

6、 78thth Olympics Olympics* main idea (Para 1) : Hua FeiHua Fei is is a sporting robota sporting robot of of the 23the 23rdrd century century. . He is He is an expertan expert at high flying exercises. He at high flying exercises. He took took part inpart in the the 7878thth Olympics and Olympics and

7、 won a silver medalwon a silver medal. .Tips:Tips: 1) write it in the third person. 2) focus on the main points and leave out examples. Reasons for the failure: Reasons for the failure: _ _ _ _ _ _para2-3：The 79th Olympics that Hua Fei took part in:Frightened; not confident;Frightened; not confident

8、;Programmer fell ill;Programmer fell ill;A problem with .A problem with .WhyWriting Step 1: Read for form，main idea* main idea (Para 2-3): BeforeBefore the competition, his programmer fell _. the competition, his programmer fell _. KnowKnowinging this, Hua Fei was _ and this, Hua Fei was _ and no lo

9、ngerno longer felt _. felt _. InIn the day of the competition, there the day of the competition, there was a problem with the parachute. He fell from thewas a problem with the parachute. He fell from thesky and landed _ on a mountain.sky and landed _ on a mountain. Reasons for the failure: _Reasons

10、for the failure: _* His failure in the 79th Olympics:Frightened; not confident;Frightened; not confident;ill illfrightenedfrightenedconfidentconfidentheavily heavily Programmer fell ill;Programmer fell ill;A problem with .A problem with .para4：The treatment of Hua Fei Where: _ Where: _ What happened

11、: _What happened: _ Treatment: _Treatment: _Two broken legs and a Two broken legs and a fragilefragile head headlying in hospital bedlying in hospital bedTwo new legs and a bigger headTwo new legs and a bigger headHowWritingStep 1: Read for form,key information whoHua Feiwhen of the 23rd centurywher

12、e78th Olympic, 79th Olympicwhat win a silver medal failedwhy his programmer fell ill No longer confidenta problem with parachutehowget treatment(with two new legs and even bigger head)Writing Step 2: Make a summary(narrations 6factors) Writing Step 2: Make a summary(narrations 6factors) Writing Step

13、 3:Polish the sentences to meet 4cs to be concise(5 skills) I no longer felt so confident that I would win. 同义词替换同义词替换I no longer believe myself that I would 反义转换feel nervous/worried/anxious that I would be defeated/lose/fail.I am lack/short of confidence that I would win. 改变词性Writing step 3: Polish

14、 the sentences to meet 4cs to be consise 句型转换句型转换 The fact that I might be defeated worries me. It is the possibility of losing that makes me anxious. I was so nervous that I might lose the competition复合句、简单句的互换复合句、简单句的互换Para1Para1：Hua FeiHua Fei is is a sporting robota sporting robot of of the 23th

15、e 23rdrd centurycentury. He is . He is an expertan expert at high flying exercises. He at high flying exercises. He took part intook part in the the 7878thth Olympics and Olympics and won a silver won a silver medalmedal. .Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century, who is good at high flying, go

16、t a silver medal in the 78th Olympics.Writing Step 3: Polish the sentences to be concise,meet4csPara 2-3Para 2-3：BeforeBefore the competition, his the competition, his programmer fell ill. Knowprogrammer fell ill. Knowinging this, Hua Fei this, Hua Fei was and was and no longerno longer felt confice

17、nt. felt conficent. InIn the the day of the competition, there was a day of the competition, there was a problem with the parachute. He fell from problem with the parachute. He fell from the sky and landed heavily on a mountain.the sky and landed heavily on a mountain.Huafei was defeated in the 79th

18、 Olympics for his progmmer s illness,which makes him nervous.Whats the worse, his parachute went wrong .Writing Step 3: Rewrite the sentences in other waysWriting step 3: Polish the sentences to be conciseHua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century, who is good at high flying exercises got a silve

19、r medal in the 78th Olympics. He is now in hospital with two broken legs and fragile head while he is still looking forward to next success.Add two linking words to make the passage coherentWriting step 4: Make the summary coherent Huafei was defeated in the 79th Olympics for his progmmer s illness,

20、which makes him nervous.Whats the worse, his parachute went wrong .However/But/While/ThoughAs a result/Thus/Therefore/SoWriting step 5: Revise( 68 words)Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century, who is good at high flying exercises got a silver medal in the 78th Olympics. Huafei was defeated in

21、 the 79th Olympics for his progmmer s illness,which makes him nervous.Whats the worse, his parachute went wrong.he is now in hospital with two broken legs and fragile head while he is still looking forward to next success.4 “C” : complete, correct, concise, coherent Writing Step 6: Clearly copy your draft to the paper1.Read 2.Make a summary based on 6 elements of narration3.Polish to be concise and to meet 4cs 4. Make it coherent5. Revise (4C)6. Neatly copy