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1、高三英语高三英语图画作文指导图画作文指导2009年江苏高考题年江苏高考题 2010江苏高考题江苏高考题2011年江苏高考题年江苏高考题 你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么注意：1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。范例：范例：.下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。Overview:090910101111guided writingunguided writing英语图画作文英语图画作文观点类观点类Focus of this

2、class:南通一模南通一模 你的短文应该包括以下内容：你的短文应该包括以下内容：1简述照片内容，如情景、简述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；人物、动作等等；2结合自身实际，谈谈你结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；的感想；3举例说明你将选择什么举例说明你将选择什么样的志愿者活动并陈述原因。样的志愿者活动并陈述原因。 下面这幅照片展现了志愿者活动的情景。请根下面这幅照片展现了志愿者活动的情景。请根据你对照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。据你对照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。Volunteers make a difference!观点类图画作文观点类图画作文Step 1. observe the pictur

3、e to locate the topic and the themePre-writingStep 2. read the Chinese requirements to get the outlineStep1、observe（读图）（读图）to locate（定位）（定位）1.图画的图画的画面画面2.图画的图画的文字文字who, what,where,whentopic, theme（caption 文字、字幕、说明）WhoWherewhat Volunteers make a difference!topic : theme: two volunteers, a disabled ma

4、non stairshelpingvolunteersMistake 1: wrong topic/themepara.2/1 picture descriptionStep 2. read to organize(谋篇谋篇)你的短文应该包括以下内你的短文应该包括以下内容：容：1简述照片内容，如情简述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；景、人物、动作等等；2结合自身实际，谈谈结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；你的感想；3举例说明你将选择什举例说明你将选择什么样的志愿者活动并陈述么样的志愿者活动并陈述原因。原因。 para.3 personal viewpara.4 personal experienc

5、e or action Mistake 2: poor organizationThe picture shows us a touching moment when two volunteers help a disabled man in a wheelchair This picture reminds me of the significance of volunteersI would be happy to be a volunteer, toopara2 picture descriptionpara3 personal viewpara4 personal actionInte

6、rpersonal skills;A lifelong lessonLets practiseLets practise! !下面这幅照片是老师给高中某班级作一次演讲，内容是中学生如何与人交往。根据你对这幅图片理解用英语写一篇短文。 你的短文应该包含以下内容： 1、简述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等； 2、结合中学生与人交往的现状和自身实际，谈谈你的感想 3、举例说明你是怎样与他人进行交往的。 As senior high students, we should not only focus on our studies but also learn how to communicate an

7、d get along well with others. However, we ofter ignore the latter and often feel at a loss when dealing with such a thing.Para.1Task 1 OutlinePara.2_ Para.3_ Para.4_The picture shows us a touching moment when two volunteers help a disabled man in a wheelchair This picture reminds me of the significa

8、nce of volunteersI would be happy to be a volunteer, toopara2 picture descriptionpara3 personal viewpara4 personal action1.Develop a paragraphWhile-writing2. Write effective sentences3. Choose proper wordsWhat is a good paragraph?This picture reminds us of the great value and significance of volunte

9、ering. There are many of them in my school, my community and our country, helping not just the disabled, but also those who cant find their way around, or those who suffer from misfortune. Volunteers make a difference to these people when they bring them warmth, comfort and relief.Ts-Ss-Ss-Concludin

10、g s/Linking s1、develop a paragraphMistake 3: no TS, SS, CSmessyno CsHow to develop a good paragraph? By listing facts and examples By cause and effect (因果因果) By comparison and contrast(对比比较对比比较) As is shown in the picture, volunteers make a great difference. Some help the disabled with their daily l

11、ife. Others offer to help in the Senior house. Many a little makes a mickle. Why do we need volunteers in society? For one thing, they bring warmth to those living in trouble. For another, the burden of government is relieved to some degree. Furthermore, their own life is enriched.Task 2 Lets write

12、a paragrahTask 2 Lets write a paragrah2、结合中学生与人交往的现状、自身实际，谈谈你的感想_By listing facts and examplesBy listing facts and examplesBy causes and effectsBy causes and effectsBy contrast and comparisonBy contrast and comparisonYou can choose fromYou must have Ts-Ss-Ss-CsWhile-writing2. Write effective sentenc

13、es句式多样，长短相间定语从句，名词性从句，状语从句强调句，倒装句双重否定句，反问句We hope in future if disasters come, there will be volunteers.We do hope in future where there are natural disasters, there are volunteers. Volunteers provide us with convenience and they also make the whole society more harmonious for people to live in.Not

14、only do volunteers but they also With more and more peole involved in voluntary work, we wonder how harmonious the world will be.With , it is hard not to wonder how harmonious the world would beWhile-writing3. Choose proper words用词准确，富于变化，善用短语, 非谓语动词动词-动词词组-名词-形容词-副词It makes you happy and satisfied

15、when you are involved in voluntary work.Your involvement in voluntary work willBe involving in voluntary work will Fully involved in voluntary work, you willBe involved in voluntary work, and you willWe should work hard to do voluntary work.devote ourselves to voluntary work be committed to spare no

16、 effort to There are many kinds of voluntary activities now, for example helping the old man and serving the public. If I have spare time, I will choose to take part in some voluntary actities I choose to help the old or disabled people because they have many problems in their daily life.of whichare

17、 admirable ones.With more spare time,prefer towhoLets improve a paraLets improve a paraIn a word, volunterers make a great difference.Lets read the paraLets read the parasuch as helpingsentence/wordTask3 Lets improve our paragragh.Sentence structurechoice of wordsCheck contentPost-writingCheck gramm

18、arDouble-check：1. 保证三要素体裁保证三要素体裁(style)、人称、人称(personal agreement)、时态、时态(tense)正确正确. 避免图画类作文的一些常见错误避免图画类作文的一些常见错误 话题、话题、 主旨错误主旨错误. 控制字数（没话说控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）太啰唆）. 不能没有结尾！不能没有结尾！人称混乱！人称混乱！Too Too longlong! !Handwriting1 全文分布合理，留足天、地、边；全文分布合理，留足天、地、边；2 字母大小均匀，圆润适当；字母大小均匀，圆润适当； 3 不能歪歪斜斜，有小又挤；不能歪歪斜斜，有小又挤； 不能该大写不大写，该小写则龙飞凤舞不能该大写不大写，该小写则龙飞凤舞.Not good!Worse!Neat! 一篇一篇好好的英语图画作文的英语图画作文 Right topic and theme Good organization Well-structured para Effective sentence Proper words Neat handwritingHomework: Homework: Write the whole articleWrite the whole article