高三英语提高句子的档次2.ppt

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1、如何提高书面表达句子的档次如何提高书面表达句子的档次 Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular. But I

2、 think that its better to help other people. We know that its important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because youve helped them and youll be happy学生作品（学生作品（1 1） 学生作品（学生作品（2 2） 学生作品（学生作品（2 2）1. 1. 要点齐全要点齐全2. 2. 较多的语法结构和较多的语法结构和高级高级词汇

3、词汇 3. 3. 全文结构紧凑全文结构紧凑 1. There was an accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. (典型病句）典型病句）There was an accident that happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. (定语从句）定语从句）An accident occurred to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.（高级词汇）（高级词汇）A

4、n accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.2. Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school. They were talking and laughing loudly. (学生学生)Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school, talking and laughi

5、ng loudly. （用分词合并）（用分词合并）3. The traffic lights turned red. They found it was too late to stop the bikes.The lights turned red, but they found it was toolate to stop their bikes. (学生学生) ) （用连接词连接）（用连接词连接）Seeing the red traffic lights, they tried to stop but it was too late. （用分词合并）（用分词合并） 4. Ones lef

6、t arm was hurt and the others leg was hurt too. (学生学生) ) Ones left arm was broken while the others leg got hurt. (避免用相同结构和词汇）（高级连词）避免用相同结构和词汇）（高级连词）One had his left arm broken while the other gothis leg hurt. /the other was badly hurt in the leg.)( (高级结构）高级结构）They were knocked off their bikes, one w

7、ith theleft arm broken, and the other with one leg hurt.( (高级介词短语高级介词短语/独立主格结构）独立主格结构） ( (学生学生) )5. If we dont obey traffic rules, we might die.a. If we go against traffic rules, we might lose our lives.b. If we go against traffic rules, we might end up in hospital.c. Going against traffic rules mig

8、ht cost us our lives.d. Dont risk our lives going against traffic rules. (多种表达）多种表达）6. He got up at 7 oclock.（ ）It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.(强调句）强调句）（倒装句）（倒装句）He didnt get up until 7 oclock.1. I had a good idea.a. A good idea occurred to me.b. I came up

9、with a good idea.2. Dont worry . Well try to help you.make every effort to, make great efforts tospare no efforts to, try every means todo all we can to, do what we can to多种表达多种表达&高级词汇高级词汇Practice: 1. There are 80% of the population live on farming. 2. At 8 this morning, there were about 50 American

10、 students came to visit our school.80% of the population live on farming.At 8 this morning, about 50 American students came to visit our school.Practice: （用分词合并）（用分词合并）1. He had finished his homework. He went out to play football. 2. I was moved by his words. I decided to lend him a hand.Moved by hi

11、s words, I decided to lend him a hand.Having finished his homework, he went out to play football. Practice: （用连接词连接）（用连接词连接）1. The police searched everywhere. The missing boy could not be found.The police searched everywhere, but the missing boy could not be found. Though the police searched everywh

12、ere, the missing boy could not be found.Practice: (避免用相同结构和词汇）避免用相同结构和词汇）1. I like sports. I like music, too.a. I like sports and music as well.b. I like sports as well as music.2. My favorite subject is English while my sisters favorite subject is history.a. My favorite subject is English while my

13、sisters is history.b. My favorite subject is English while my sister likes history best.My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa. He had a book on his knees.Practice: （用介词短语）（用介词短语）My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa with a book on his knees.提高句子档次的小结：提高句子档次的小结： 1. 1. 用分词用分词短语短语合并句子合并句子 用用介

14、词短语介词短语合并句子合并句子 用用独立主格结构独立主格结构合并句子合并句子 用连接词连接句子用连接词连接句子2. 2. 用用高级结构和词汇高级结构和词汇3. 3. 用用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句4. 4. 用用不同结构不同结构和词汇和词汇 An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. School was over. Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were going home by bike. They were tal

15、king and laughing happily. When they saw a car which was passing by, they started to run after it. They thought it was very interesting. The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red. The two students were very close to the bus and they couldnt stop their bikes in time. They fell off the bikes.

16、Tianli broke his left arm and Dunkai hurt his leg. (学生作文）学生作文）An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. School was over. Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were going home by bike. They were talking and laughing happily. When they saw a bus which was passing by, they starte

17、d to run after it. They thought it was very interesting. The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red. The two students were very close to the bus and they couldnt stop their bikes in time. They fell off the bikes. Tianlis broke his his left arm and Dunkai hurt his leg. An accident happened to

18、two students in our school yesterday afternoon. School was over. Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were going home by bike. They were talking and laughing happily. An accident occurred to two students in our schoolyesterday afternoon.After school was over, Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were on their w

19、ay home by bike, talking and laughinghappily. When they see a bus which was passing by, they started to run after it. They thought it was very interesting. The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red. Seeing a passing car, they started to chase it, thinking it great fun.Unfortunately, the bus

20、stopped the moment the traffic light turned red. The two students were very close to the bus and they couldnt stop their bikes in time. They fell off the bikes. Tianlis broke his his left arm and Dunkai hurt his leg. The two students were so close to the bus that theywere not able to stop their bike

21、s in time. As a result, they were knocked off the bikes, one with his left arm broken and the other with his leg hurt. An accident occurred to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. After school was over, Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were heading home by bike, talking and laughing happily

22、. Seeing a passing bus, they started to chase it, thinking it was great fun. Unfortunately, the bus stopped the moment the traffic light turned red. The two students were so close to the bus that they were not able to stop their bikes in time. As a result, they were knocked off the bikes, one with h

23、is left arm broken and the other with his leg hurt. (95 words) Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too an

24、d it is becoming very popular. But I think that its better to help other people. We know that its important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because youve helped them and youll be happyImprove this composition, try!Improve this composi

25、tion, try! ( 1) Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. (2) Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party.（用（用where定语从句）定语从句）(3) They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes.（和并句子）（和并句子）(4) Sometimes, people send short messages too and it i

26、s becoming very popular （用（用which定语从句）定语从句）. (5) But (替换）替换） I think （替换）（替换） that its better to help other people.(6) We know that its important to learn to help others. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. (7) People will help you in return and youll be happy （用（用For one thing, For anothe

27、r 替换）替换）.Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.Usually, a party is held where best friends as well as relatives can get together and have fun.They usually buy a small gift with which to express their best wishes.Sometimes, people send short messages too, which is becom

28、ing very popular .However, as far as Im concerned, its better to do something for others.As is known to all, its of importance to help others. Helping others on ones birthday can be not only meaningful but also do you a lot of good.For one thing people will help you in return; for another, youll get

29、 happiness out of that. Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways. Usually, a party is held where best friends as well as relatives can get together and have fun. They usually buy a small gift with which they express their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages

30、 too, which is becoming very popular . However, as far as Im concerned, its better to do something for others. As is known to all, its of importance to help others. Helping others on ones birthday can be not only meaningful but also do you a lot of good. For one thing people will help you in return;

31、 for another, youll get happiness out of that. In short, the best way to celebrate our birthdays is to help others.基础写作基础写作 Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Different students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom an

32、d have little chance to get in touch with society, which makes them unable to fully develop their interests and hobbies and therefore, lose interest in their studies. However, others believe school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Lacking the abil

33、ity to control themselves, once out of school, some students may lose control and do something that will influence/affect their studies. Personally , it is necessary to keep students at school, but at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.(I dont agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests. Thank you!