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1、一、写作内容一、写作内容1.age，sex，birth-place，background(概况概况)2.appearance，character(外表、性格外表、性格)3.education(教育背景教育背景)4.big events in his or her life(in order of time)(经历、生平经历、生平)5.evaluation(评价评价)二、写作技巧二、写作技巧1.介绍概况：同位语结构、分词结构，使文介绍概况：同位语结构、分词结构，使文章简洁。如：章简洁。如： Sun Shuwei，a world champion in diving (一位跳水的世界冠军一位跳水的

2、世界冠军)，is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.(同位语同位语) Born in Maryland，USA in 1985 (他他1985年出生于美国马里兰州年出生于美国马里兰州)，Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.(分词短语分词短语)2.描写外貌：描写外貌：巧用巧用with短语。如：短语。如：My history teacher is a beautiful woman，with long hair and big eyes (她长着两只大她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发眼睛，留着长发).3.生平事迹：生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非尽

3、量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如：谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如： In his life，he got many honours，one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award (其中包括获得其中包括获得“2005感动中国年感动中国年度人物度人物”的称号的称号).(定语从句定语从句) In 2006，having broken the world record and got the gold medal (在他打破世界纪录在他打破世界纪录并获得金牌之后并获得金牌之后)，he became the idol of th

4、e youth.(分词短语分词短语) Not only does he show interest in science (他不但对科学极有兴趣他不但对科学极有兴趣)，but also he has a gift for music.(倒装句式倒装句式)4.评价：评价：尽量运用短语。如：尽量运用短语。如：Lei Feng set an good example to us(给我给我们树立了一个良好的榜样们树立了一个良好的榜样)，so all the people show great respect to him (很敬很敬重他重他).即时练习即时练习假设你是李华，正在美国参加学习，课堂上老师

5、要求你假设你是李华，正在美国参加学习，课堂上老师要求你简要介绍我国的名人，你选择了姚明和刘翔，两位体育简要介绍我国的名人，你选择了姚明和刘翔，两位体育明星，他们的基本情况如下：明星，他们的基本情况如下：姓名姓名姚明姚明刘翔刘翔出生出生1980年，上海年，上海1983年，上海年，上海事迹事迹世界著名篮球运动员，世界著名篮球运动员，现在美国现在美国NBA火箭队效火箭队效力，球队主力队员之一，力，球队主力队员之一，多次进入美国全明星队。多次进入美国全明星队。多次获得世界多次获得世界110米栏米栏冠军，冠军，2004年雅典奥年雅典奥运会冠军，不久以后运会冠军，不久以后还打破了世界记录。还打破了世界记录

6、。爱好爱好听流行音乐听流行音乐唱歌唱歌 写作要求写作要求 只能使用五个句子表达全部内容只能使用五个句子表达全部内容(开头已开头已经为你写好经为你写好)。 参考词汇：火箭队参考词汇：火箭队 Rocket；110米栏米栏110-metre hurdling，雅典奥运会，雅典奥运会 the Athens Olympic Games Hi，everyone.I would like to introduce two famous sport stars，Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Thats all.Thank you! Hi，everyone.I would like to in

7、troduce two famous sport stars，Yao Ming and Liu Xiang.Yao Ming，born in Shanghai in 1980，is a world famous basketball player.He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA，and he has been in AllStar Team for several times. Liu Xiang，who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than

8、Yao Ming，is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdle.He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music;Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.Thats all.Thank you!简介一个地方，常常会用到以下一些表达：简介一个地方，常常会用到以下一些表达：位置

9、：位置：be located/lie；in the center of/in the east of/to the east of/on the west of.历史：历史：have/with a long history of 人口：人口：have/with a population of 面积：面积：cover/have/with an area of.环境：环境：with green hills and beautiful rivers气候：气候：neither too cold nor too hot，the climate varies from place to place 物产：

10、物产：be rich in/be high in，a place rich in，a city with much industry，mainly grow crops，keep sheep特色：特色：be famous/well known for名胜景观：名胜景观：mountainous areas，a place with many tourists attractions，places of interest即时练习即时练习请根据下图及下表所给的信息，用英语介绍请根据下图及下表所给的信息，用英语介绍斐济。斐济。国名国名: 斐济群岛共和国斐济群岛共和国(The Republic of T

11、he FiJi Islands)地理位置地理位置: 太平洋的中心，新西兰的北部，太平洋的中心，新西兰的北部，澳大利亚的西北部澳大利亚的西北部陆地面积陆地面积: 1.8万平方公里万平方公里首都首都: 苏瓦苏瓦(Suva)人口人口: 大约大约86.1万万官方语官方语: 言英语言英语气候气候: 气候温和，阳光充足，年平均气温为气候温和，阳光充足，年平均气温为2230国庆节国庆节: 每年每年10月月10日日交通交通: 水、陆、空便利，太平洋群岛的交通水、陆、空便利，太平洋群岛的交通中心中心写作要求写作要求只能使用只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。个句子表达全部内容。评分标准评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完

12、整，篇章结构连贯。句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 Located in the heart of the Pacific Ocean，the Republic of The FiJi Islands is situated to the north of New Zealand and northwest of Australia with a land area of 18，376 square kilometers. Fiji，whose capital is Suva，has a population of 861，000 and the official language

13、is English.It has a warm climate with plenty of sunshine and the average temperature ranges from 22 to 33.National day falls on October 10th every year.With the convenient sea，land and air transportation，it is the traffic center of the Pacific islands. 指音乐、舞蹈、表演、体育运动、指音乐、舞蹈、表演、体育运动、游戏游戏(包括网络游戏包括网络游戏

14、)、集邮、阅读、集邮、阅读、烹饪、看电影、看电视、听收音广播、烹饪、看电影、看电视、听收音广播、欣赏戏剧、音乐会、观光旅行、招待欣赏戏剧、音乐会、观光旅行、招待客人、访问博物馆、饲养宠物等。客人、访问博物馆、饲养宠物等。必备语汇必备语汇 surf the internet上网上网 chat online 在线聊天在线聊天 enjoy popular music 喜欢流行音乐喜欢流行音乐 be fond of/be keen on喜欢喜欢 have some hobbies有一些爱好有一些爱好 be interested in对对感兴趣感兴趣 take an interest in对对感兴趣感兴

15、趣 be crazy about.对对着迷着迷 come to like.越来越喜欢越来越喜欢 develop a great liking for渐渐爱上渐渐爱上(11)I prefer watching a TV show to going to a concert.我宁愿看电视表演，我宁愿看电视表演，而不愿去听音乐会。而不愿去听音乐会。(12)He goes for playing on-line games.他喜欢玩在线游戏。他喜欢玩在线游戏。(13)Shopping is my favorite hobby in my spare time.购物是我闲暇时最喜欢购物是我闲暇时最喜欢的

16、爱好。的爱好。(14)I hate visiting museums，for I think they are boring.我讨厌参观博物我讨厌参观博物馆，因为我觉得它们让人感到无趣。馆，因为我觉得它们让人感到无趣。即时练习即时练习 任务写作：任务写作：该不该迫使孩子学习他们不该不该迫使孩子学习他们不感兴趣的才艺感兴趣的才艺 培养孩子的兴趣爱好是非常必要的，但培养孩子的兴趣爱好是非常必要的，但现在有很多家长一味地追求子女的多才多艺，现在有很多家长一味地追求子女的多才多艺，迫使孩子学习他们不感兴趣的才艺，请你以迫使孩子学习他们不感兴趣的才艺，请你以大约大约120个词谈谈对这种现象的看法，内容个

17、词谈谈对这种现象的看法，内容包括：包括： 你是否赞同上述家长的做法；你是否赞同上述家长的做法； 以你或你朋友的经历说明你的观点；以你或你朋友的经历说明你的观点； 呼吁家长们要尊重孩子的意愿。呼吁家长们要尊重孩子的意愿。 Todays chilren are lucky to have many opportunities to develop their talents.But on the other hand，a lot of parents push their children too hard. In that case，I dont envy them. It is true th

18、at good hobbies make life more colorful and enjoyable.However，things are different if children take no interest in the “hobby” that their parents choose for them. Without interest as motivation，they find it as a burn rather than a hobby. My 6-year-old neighbour often cries while practising the piano

19、. She is busier on weekends than on weekdays because she has to attend many extracurricular activities. Her mother complained that she even slept in class. Therefore，parents should see the bad effects from their over-effort to cultivate childrens talents. Parents are supposed to help children learn

20、what they are interested in.Only in this way can they learn well and be happy! 人际关系指人与人之间的交往与友人际关系指人与人之间的交往与友谊，与家人、朋友、邻居、亲戚或他谊，与家人、朋友、邻居、亲戚或他人之间的情感交流或沟通，如师生关人之间的情感交流或沟通，如师生关系、父子关系、同学之间的友情等；系、父子关系、同学之间的友情等；对他人的感谢、感恩、宽容、道歉、对他人的感谢、感恩、宽容、道歉、赞扬、微笑等，请求他人同意和帮助、赞扬、微笑等，请求他人同意和帮助、解决问题、处理矛盾冲突、和解，等解决问题、处理矛盾冲突、和

21、解，等等。等。必备词句必备词句 learn from each other 互相学习互相学习 promote the friendship 增进友谊增进友谊 improve the relationship改善关系改善关系 show love and concern for sb.爱护和爱护和关心某人关心某人 Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.善于倾听使我们彼此走善于倾听使我们彼此走得更近。得更近。 A good relationship between teachers and students i

22、s of great importance for our studies.良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重要。要。 To build a good relationship，we should trust each other.要建立良好的关系，我们要建立良好的关系，我们应该彼此信任。应该彼此信任。 Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship.只有这样我们才能享有平等的只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系。关系。 They find it easy to communicate with their teach

23、ers.他们发觉很容易和老师沟通。他们发觉很容易和老师沟通。 With their help，I tried my best to study hard and succeeded in entering a key university.在他们的帮助下，我努力学习，在他们的帮助下，我努力学习，成功地被一所重点大学录取。成功地被一所重点大学录取。(11)We should value this harmonious relationship between teachers and students.我们应该珍惜师生之间这种和谐的关系。我们应该珍惜师生之间这种和谐的关系。(12)With th

24、e encouragement and support of my father，I have overcome many difficulties in our life.在父亲的鼓励和支持在父亲的鼓励和支持下，我克服了生活中的许多苦难。下，我克服了生活中的许多苦难。(13)A good relationship will make learning and teaching enjoyable while a bad one can make them unpleasant.良好的关系可以使良好的关系可以使教与学变得愉快，不好的关系令人不高兴。教与学变得愉快，不好的关系令人不高兴。即时练习

25、即时练习任务写作：以约任务写作：以约120个词就个词就“父母与子女的良好关系父母与子女的良好关系”发表你的看法，发表你的看法，包括如下要点：包括如下要点： 良好的父母与子女的关系的重要性；良好的父母与子女的关系的重要性； 你希望你与你的父母之间的关系是怎样你希望你与你的父母之间的关系是怎样的；的； 如何才能建立这种关系？如何才能建立这种关系？ An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth. They always show love and concern for us.T

26、hey are our good listeners，advisers and supporters.With their help，we can overcome many difficulties in our life. In my opinion，the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love，care and understanding，in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange i

27、deas freely. To build a relationship of this kind，parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children. 节假日活动是指春节、新年、国庆节

28、、节假日活动是指春节、新年、国庆节、植树节、教师节、重阳节、圣诞节、复活植树节、教师节、重阳节、圣诞节、复活节、情人节、母亲节等各种中西方节假日节、情人节、母亲节等各种中西方节假日的起源、发展、庆祝方式和假日活动安排，的起源、发展、庆祝方式和假日活动安排，还有生日、周年纪念日、毕业典礼等各种还有生日、周年纪念日、毕业典礼等各种庆祝活动，以及参加这些活动的经历和感庆祝活动，以及参加这些活动的经历和感受等。暑期、寒假等的活动、社会实践活受等。暑期、寒假等的活动、社会实践活动或者青年志愿者的活动安排及感受等等。动或者青年志愿者的活动安排及感受等等。必备语汇必备语汇1.中国节日名称中国节日名称 The

29、 Spring Festival春节春节 The Dragon Boat Festival端午节端午节 The Middle Autumn Festival中秋节中秋节 New Years Day元旦元旦 National Day国庆节国庆节 International Labor Day五一劳动节五一劳动节 Teachers Day教师节教师节 Childrens Day儿童节儿童节 Womens Day妇女节妇女节 Tomb-sweeping Day清明节清明节(11)Double Ninth Festival重阳节重阳节(12)Lantern Festival元宵节元宵节2.西方节日名称

30、西方节日名称 Christmas day 圣诞节圣诞节 Thanksgiving Day 感恩节感恩节 Valentines Day 情人节情人节 April Fools Day 愚人节愚人节 Halloween Day 万圣节万圣节 Easter Day 复活节复活节 Mothers Day 母亲节母亲节3.相关句子相关句子National Day is coming.国庆节快到了。国庆节快到了。National Day falls on Monday this year.今年国庆节是星期一。今年国庆节是星期一。We celebrated the New Year with a dance

31、party.我们举行舞会来庆祝新年。我们举行舞会来庆祝新年。即时练习即时练习 读写任务：先请阅读下面一篇读写任务：先请阅读下面一篇150字左字左右的文章：右的文章： Today is Mothers Day.Maybe everyone wants to do something for their mothers.I know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework，while others are going to buy some flowers for their mothers.

32、I want to say to her that I love her very much.But as a boy，it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart.I think only girls can do that. In fact，my mother is very kind to me. She takes care of me all day and all night. She herself spends little money，but buys anything for me that I need.This time I

33、 am determined to show my love to my mother.I am going to give her a card and write like this，“I love you，mother!” I want to give her a pleasant surprise.I am going to put it under her pillow quietly.写作内容写作内容1.用大约用大约30个词概括短文内容要点；个词概括短文内容要点；2.然后以大约然后以大约120个词发表你的观点，包括个词发表你的观点，包括如下要点：如下要点： 你是否认为只有女孩才能向

34、父母表达爱；你是否认为只有女孩才能向父母表达爱； 回忆今年的母亲节，你做了什么；回忆今年的母亲节，你做了什么； 你今后应当如何做。你今后应当如何做。写作要求写作要求1.可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。得直接引用原文中的句子。2.标题自定。标题自定。Love our mothers On Mothers Day，the author found it hard to say “I love you” to his mother.However，thinking of

35、 the kindness of his mother，he is determined to give her an unexpected card with love. What the writer did this time is very dutiful.In my opinion，boys can show their respect to their parents as well as girls.They both can express their appreciation to them，because，after all，each parent has paid out

36、 too much for their childrens growth. To celebrate Mothers Day this year，I bought a bunch of pretty flowers with a card on it，reading，“You are the best mom that a daughter ever had.I love you，Mum!” From now on，to express my love to my mother，I am going to do more housework for my beloved mother，cook

37、ing，washing，cleaning and shopping，which seem to be endless.By doing these，I will come to realize that，as a matter of fact，mum is very toilsome all the time. 指各种食物食品、汤水饮料的介绍、指各种食物食品、汤水饮料的介绍、健康饮食、绿色食品、饮食文化、快健康饮食、绿色食品、饮食文化、快餐、饮食习惯与喜好、订餐与供给；餐、饮食习惯与喜好、订餐与供给；健身与锻炼、保健、个人卫生、各种健身与锻炼、保健、个人卫生、各种疾病与防治、意外事故、医疗保险

38、，疾病与防治、意外事故、医疗保险，财富与健康等等。财富与健康等等。必备语汇必备语汇 suffer from 遭受，患上遭受，患上 near-sighted 近视的近视的 physical and mental condition 生理生理和心理状况和心理状况 feel weak(well，terrible，sick)感感觉虚弱觉虚弱(健康健康/很糟很糟/恶心恶心) feel stressed/depressed 感到紧张感到紧张/沮丧沮丧 have a pain in . 某处疼痛某处疼痛 mentally unhealthy 心理不健康的心理不健康的 relax oneself 自我轻松自我

39、轻松 relieve pressure 缓解压力缓解压力 be optimistic/pessimistic about 对对乐观乐观/悲观悲观(11)face difficulties/setbacks with courage 勇敢面对困难勇敢面对困难/挫折挫折(12)go on diet 节食；节食；proper diet恰当的饮恰当的饮食食(13)take three meals on time 按时吃三餐按时吃三餐(14)eat much junk food 吃很多的垃吃很多的垃圾食品圾食品(15)(un)healthy eating habits(不不)健健康的饮食习惯康的饮食习惯

40、(16)be high/low/rich in .含量含量高高/低低/丰富丰富(17)An apple a day keeps the doctor away.每天一只苹果不用看医生。每天一只苹果不用看医生。(谚语谚语)(18)Early to bed and early to rise，make a man healthy，wealthy and wise.早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。(英英国谚语国谚语)即时练习即时练习 读写任务：阅读下面的短文，然后按照读写任务：阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。 With

41、 up to a third of Chinese college graduates unable to get a job the number of suicides is soaring. Chinese student Liu Wei who，consumed with guilt about her parents financial sacrifices，took her own life. For Miss Liu，the daughter of poor farmers，a degree was to be her passport out of a life of pove

42、rty，a way to escape working in the fields，or toiling as a humble migrant worker in a far-off factory in southern China. But her dream will never become reality. Deeply depressed and ashamed about her failure to find a job，Miss Liu brought her studies and her life to an premature end by drowning hers

43、elf in freezing ditch water. Miss Lius reaction to her predicament (困境困境)was extreme，but not unusual.In April，suicide was listed as the leading cause of death among students.And with one in three of this years graduates unable to get a job，Miss Lius anxiety about finding work is shared by most stude

44、nts. The government has tried to calm rising anger by offering graduates positions as teachers and low-level government officials in rural areas.But few seem keen to return to the countryside from which their degrees were supposed to guarantee an escape.写作内容写作内容1.以约以约30词概括所阅读短文的主要内容；词概括所阅读短文的主要内容；2.

45、以约以约120词就词就“面对挫折面对挫折(setback)时如何时如何保持心理健康？保持心理健康？”发表看法，内容包括：发表看法，内容包括： 请举例描述你遭遇过的挫折；请举例描述你遭遇过的挫折； 你是怎样看待挫折的？你是怎样看待挫折的？ 请就面对挫折如何保持心理健康提出请就面对挫折如何保持心理健康提出一些建议。一些建议。 写作要求写作要求 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。得直接引用原文中的句子。 评分标准评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连概括准确，语言规

46、范，内容合适，篇章连贯。贯。 Despite the efforts made by the government，many college graduates failed to get a good job this year and felt depressed and ashamed.Whats worse，some of them committed suicide，just like Miss Liu in this report.(37 words)主要内容主要内容 I came across many setbacks in my study and life. For exa

47、mple，I failed in my math final exam when I was in Senior One.Knowing the result，I cried hard.I analyzed the situation and studied harder. With all my efforts and the help of others，I finally became good at math and passed many exams. In my opinion，setbacks are harsh teachers，but the lessons we learn

48、 from them can be invaluable.When setbacks happen，we should be brave and stay optimistic.It is a good way to relieve the pain to turn to our trusted ones for comfort，see a funny movie，listen to music，or visit a beautiful place.After we cool down，maybe we can gain something out of this painful experi

49、ence.(127words) 指对人口增长指对人口增长(popu1ation growth)、土地土地(land)、粮食、住房、粮食、住房(housing)、污、污染染(pollution)、环境保护、环境保护(environmental conservation)等问题发等问题发表意见。就公共场所吸烟、随地吐痰、表意见。就公共场所吸烟、随地吐痰、随地扔纸屑、课本资料回收等发表意随地扔纸屑、课本资料回收等发表意见。珍惜水资源、使用再生资源、实见。珍惜水资源、使用再生资源、实现经济等的可持续发展、创建绿色学现经济等的可持续发展、创建绿色学校。校。 必备词汇必备词汇 plant trees 植树

50、植树 sort rubbish 垃圾分类垃圾分类 protect the ecology 保护生态保护生态 save energy/water节约能源节约能源/水水 go green生产或使用绿色产品生产或使用绿色产品 protect the environment 保护环境保护环境 ride bicycles to work 骑自行车上班骑自行车上班 develop renewable resources可再生可再生资源资源 fight against pollution 与污染作斗争与污染作斗争 sustainable development 可持续发展可持续发展(11) eco-frie