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1、雅思写作7分开头技巧雅思写作7分开头技巧 雅思写作题目中的观点类，我们通常以认可或者不认可来进行作答。并且这类题型中的观点也只有一个，考生也无需担忧选错哪一个。考官在乎的是论证的过程，就是考生是否有足够的例子证明自己观点的对错。小站君认为开头应当遵循第一句是题目中的背景。其次句是对观点进行选择，一般同意的话可以进行转述题目，不同意的话可以用让步状语从句改写，例如although，if等。第三句是说明自己的观点。我们从下面的例子进行分析一下。 例子：Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health. Do you ag

2、ree or disagree? 根据上述的方法，我们选择同意的话，就第一句就是背景句“These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities.”其次句则是对观点进行同意，那么可以写成“ But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on peoples health. ”最终一句就是表述自己的观点“ Personal

3、ly, I agree with this idea. (个人观点)”。考生若想要一个引人关注的开头，最重要的就是对背景和题目的改写，切记不要干脆照抄题目。 雅思写作题目其次种就是探讨类，通常这种的重点就是探讨两方的观点，然后表明自己的观点。这种题目的开头只须要写出探讨话题的背景以及用用自己的话陈述双方的观点。对于个人的观点，无需放在开头。考生若要出彩的开头，还是须要落脚在改写上面，可以通过一些模板的套用，和语句的转化进行改写，侧重点就是双方的观点是什么。 雅思写作题目第三种就是优劣势类，通常是题目会给出一个背景或者趋势，让考生进行比较分析优劣之别。往往考生认为此类题目须要陈述背景，其实是不用

4、的，只须要表达考生的分析结果，认为是好处大于坏处，还是相反。这时候开头就不比过于累赘，只须要一句话进行表达。我们看下面例子： Shopping online is replacing shopping in stores. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 依据上述方法，我们不须要过多描述背景，只须要选择某一方，然后用一句话代替即可： These days, it is common to see that people prefer choosing online shopping to shopping in physical st

5、ores. Although some problems would occur as this trend continues, I believe such development brings more benefits. 雅思写作题目第四种就是报告类，跟上述的优劣势接近，都是给一个案例或者报告进行分析，开头段只须要考生对题目进行改写和延长。对于这类题目，考生须要记住的是开头不宜过长，而且也不须要带自己的观点。只须要改写题目即可。 考生了解完写作题目的分类之后，最须要留意的就是对背景句的改写。一个精彩的开头往往考察的就是你对题目和背景的改写实力。这时候就须要我们对句型的扩展。因为往往雅思

6、写作题目都是简洁明白的，所以要对题目或者背景改写。我们看下面例子： There was a substantial increase. There was a substantial increase in the number of cars. There was a substantial increase in the number of cars using clean energy. 从上述三段可以很清晰了解，扩展句型的重要性。不仅能够让考官知道你句子扩展的实力，还能增加字数。 最终，提升雅思写作的开头还须要对主语进行多种改变的训练。从上述可以知道主语许多状况都是一大串的观点，假如考

7、生干脆搬到句子中，很简单让考官觉得是干脆照抄。这时候就须要我们对主语进行多种改变的练习。从下面例子可以看出： Why is the old buildings turns down/knocked down based on its historical and artistic value? 假如疑问句做主语的，描述的是老建筑是否被拆掉是依据它的历史和艺术价值。我们可以把主语改为这样：Whether an old building should be torn down/knocked down depends on its value in history and art.只有这样对主语进

8、行多样性训练，才能保证句子结构多样性，让考官认可考生娴熟运用句子，表达地道。 雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文 In many major cities of the world, you will find large public buildings, both new and old. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such buildings. How important is it for a country to construct impressive public buildings when houses are wa

9、nt is really required? Model Answer: A public building is a building that belongs in some way o the state. The number of public buildings in any town or village will depend on the size of that community and its needs. For example, you will usually find a town hall of some sort, a school and a place

10、of worship at he least. In anger communities there will be a police station, law courts, a library and maybe a theatre funded by he state. The desire to build impressive buildings is not new. The ancient cities of the Middle East and South America were designed with large public buildings to impress

11、 visitors and enemies and give a sense of pride. In modern times, outstanding public buildings still. create a great sense of local and national pride. They are what gives a city its character and they form asocial centre, a place where people like to meet. However, some people argue that government

12、s have constructed unnecessary, and sometimes ugly, buildings simply to make themselves feel important. I tend to feel that such buildings may be a waste of public money but I am not sure we can claim that they prevent houses from being built, because these governments have often ensured that adequa

13、te housing was also available. Houses and public buildings can exist side by side. The answer lies in finding ape right balance. We want o feel pride in our town, but we also want our citizens to have comfortable homes. It is hard to please everyone. 雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文 Write about the following topic:

14、 Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures? Model Answer: Every year, millions of animals undergo painful suffering or death as a result of scientific research into the effects of drugs, food additives, cosmetics and other chemical products. While most people think animal testing is

15、 necessary, others are upset by what they see as needless suffering. This essay looks at some of the positive and negative aspects of animal testing. Many medical treatments and procedures have been developed from experiments on animals. Since animals share many features with humans, scientists use

16、animals to test the safety and effectiveness of newly developed drugs before pilot testing on small groups of patients. Medical teams practice new operating techniques such as transplants on animals. Without animal testing, many procedures or new drugs would be extremely unsafe. However, many people

17、 are concerned that animals are suffering unnecessarily and cruelly. They do not believe that every new drug needs to be tested on animals, especially with the huge database of knowledge and modern computer models. They also are worried that many animal tests are ineffective, pointing out that any d

18、rugs have had to be withdrawn from the market despite extensive testing. They particularly feel that animal testing should not be used for non-essential products such as cosmetics, shampoos, soaps, and cleaning products. Furthermore, some campaigners would like to see certain tests replaced and more

19、 humane methods used. We need to make sure that the millions of animals who are used for testing new products are treated with the minimum of suffering. Although some animal testing may be unavoidable at present, treating our fellow creatures as mercifully as possible will demonstrate our humanity. 雅思写作