2016中考英语书面表达.ppt

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1、1.了解写作的注意事项了解写作的注意事项2.学会运用技巧，进行语篇的组织。学会运用技巧，进行语篇的组织。3.背诵范文。背诵范文。注意：注意：仔细检查，认真抄写仔细检查，认真抄写（上正稿）（上正稿）自学指导一、看校园安全自学指导一、看校园安全 话题作文，审题，列出要点话题作文，审题，列出要点 。2 建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生，并担任校学生会主

2、席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。 内容提示：(1)不带管制刀具到学校; (2)不私自下河洗澡; (3)不打架; (4)上学放学的途中注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。 参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things 紧急情况：emergency; 写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(3)严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。 范文 1. 审审文体文体:2. 审审人称人称：3. 审审时态：时态：4. 审内容审内容要点

3、要点及及字数字数：(1)不带管制刀具到学校; (2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架; (4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。 We mustnt bring Dont have a bath in the river .withoutFighting is Pay more attention to/ We must obey .on the way toWhen we meet some ., we should call for help .第一人称第一人称 （we）一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时应用文中的书信格式应用文中的书信

4、格式Dear students, As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustnt bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our

5、parents permission. And, we should be friendly to others because fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Whats more, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following

6、these safeties rules above can make us live in peace. Yours， Li Hua范文背诵：范文背诵：5自学指导二、看“开展有意的活动 ”，审题，列出要点审题，列出要点2 为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。 提示：1. 衣着整洁; 2. 保持环境卫生; 3. 待人有礼，乐于助人; 4. 遵守交通规则; 5. 要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中14 项内容，可展开 思路，适当发

7、挥; 2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息; 3. 词数：80词左右。 1. 审审人称人称：2. 审审时态：时态：3.要点表达：适当拓展，丰富表达。 .衣着整洁; . 保持环境卫生; . 待人有礼，乐于助人; . 遵守交通规则; . 适当拓展(在公共场所不大声喧哗）We should keep our.It is our duty./ The city must be .第一人称第一人称 （we）一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时Be friendly and ready to help others . When we are on the bus,

8、We should obey .when the traffic light are red,Dont talk loudly in public places./It is good to save How to Behave Well? In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities. Its a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept

9、clean every day. Dont throw litter or spit about. Its good manners to say Thank you and Please and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babi

10、es. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And wed better not talk or laugh loudly in public. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive. 范文背诵范文背诵5自学指导三、看“如何减压让生活更美好”审题，并思考如何回答，再进行语篇组织 2 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中

11、存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括: (1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; (2) 我的压力是什么; (3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80100。 (1)同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; (2) 我的压力是什么; (3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 1. 审审文体文体:2. 审审人称人称：3. 审审时态：时态：4. 审内容审内容要点要点及及字数字数：考试压力，举例说明压力是来自谁，具体的情况考试压力，

12、举例说明压力是来自谁，具体的情况跟对方谈谈自己的想法，沟通思想，达成共识跟对方谈谈自己的想法，沟通思想，达成共识第一人称第一人称 （学生们（学生们/I ）一般现在时（主体时态）、过去时一般现在时（主体时态）、过去时演讲稿演讲稿考试压力、交往方面的压力 范文 背诵5 Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant

13、get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I rea

14、lly felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Thats all. Thank you!v 注意注意 书写工整书写工整卷面整洁卷面整洁 美文美文丰富的句式丰富的句式恰当的词汇恰当的词汇自然的连接自然的连接高分高分书写规范书写规范, 卷面整洁。卷面整洁。注意：书写规范注意：书写规范, 卷面整洁卷面整洁Before u审题目审题目u圈要点圈要点u列提纲

15、列提纲u定基调定基调Whileu避免汉式英语避免汉式英语 u多用简单句型多用简单句型 u灵活运用语法句法灵活运用语法句法u描写生动具体描写生动具体 u行文连贯行文连贯 u遇难另辟蹊径遇难另辟蹊径 Afteru纠错纠错u润色润色书面表达应试策略书面表达应试策略父亲节的一封信父亲节的一封信父爱如山！假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。写作要点： 1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育，过上更好的生活；2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时，他鼓励我不放弃； 遇到困难时，父亲鼓励我笑对生活；表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。温馨提示：1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅， 不

16、要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；2. 短文字数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好， 不计入总词数；3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。Dear father,Fathers Day is coming, Id like to say something to you. _ Yours, Li Hua 当堂训练当堂训练10One possible passage ：Dear father, Fathers Day is coming. I，d like to say something to you.You always work hard so that I can rece

17、ive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever! Happy Fathers Day! Yours, Li Hua