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1、2020托福写作综合写作评分标准解读托福写作综合写作评分标准解读 一、5分-满分 解析：综合写作5分的评分标准给出了四项要求：第一，要求考生从听力当中找寻到重要信息。其次，要清楚精确地陈述阅读和听力的关系。综合写作阅读和听力目前只考察一种关系：听力反对阅读。第三，文章组织良好。其中文章结构框架可以用句型和模板;文章语言组织难度远低于独立写作，因为综合写作不能掺杂任何个人的观点，要求客观陈述读到和听到的内容，因此须要的主要信息均来自阅读和听力。第四，满分是可以允许有间或的语言小错误。许多同学困惑何为严峻的语言错误，何为小错误，我们只要通过一个简洁的推断：影响语义理解的都可以被看作严峻错误。综合写

2、作特殊强调假如有极少量语言错误依旧可以拿到满分。 建议: 若追求5分满分，将听力内容记多记全，听力听得越好，拿到满分的希望越高。 二、4分-高分 解析：综合写作4分的评分标准依旧先考察学生是否从听力中找寻到重要信息，并且考察是否能清楚精确地陈述阅读和听力的关系，这两点上和满分要求一样，那一分扣在哪里了呢? 4分和5分不同的地方评分标准用了一个“but”转折，假如考生写作中出现陈述听力内容时出现小的遗漏，不精确，模糊或者不精确将被扣除1分。或者陈述阅读和听力关系有误，听力反对阅读自然拿分，因此陈述关系的句型框架要提前打算。如：The lecturer made the point that，wh

3、ich differs from the main idea in the reading that。最终4分也有对语言错误的要求。总体而言，综合写作的评分对于语言的要求要低于独立写作。并不对遣词造句提出严格的要求，而只是对错误的频率和严峻程度进行了界定。 建议: 若想综合写作不失分，谨记听力笔记，谨防听力内容写出偏差。 三、3分中国考生平均分 综合写作的分数分布是橄榄形的，中间段最多，满分和低分都很少。综合写作的阅读难度远低于托福阅读，综合写作的听力难度也不难于托福听力，但是综合写作拿到3分以上却不简洁。 许多考生参与托福考试出了考场感觉综合写作很好，大部分都听懂了，结果出来分数就不志向。这

4、究竟是为什么呢?我们看一下综合写作3分的评分标准 解析：综合写作3分依旧首先要求从听力当中找寻到重要信息，并阐述听力和阅读的关系是怎样的。假如你犯了以下一个或者多个错误，就会被打到3分。其中其次项是中国考生常被扣分的缘由：听力遗失一个要点将被扣除两分。综合写作听力一共有几个点呢?3个。 建议: 留意听力每段的主要内容，并写作时不要出现措辞偏差。 四、2分-以下低分 解析：综合写作2分以下主要是因为学生没有太听懂听力。 建议:用托福听力Lecture作为练习材料，每天三个小时以上练习听写。一个月后再开启练习综合写作题目。 从综合写作的评分标准再到我们对各个采分点的解析，我们得出结论：赢听力者，得

5、综合写作。 托福作文分数换算是如何操作的?对于托福作文评分： 1、共有四位老师评分，2位评综合，2位评独立。 2、原始分数0-5分，综合两位老师评分平均2.5-3.5 fair 4-5 good，同理独立平均给等级。 3、由于0-5分中没有0.5的评分所以平均值没有0.25和0.75的出现，所以写作没有19分21分26分等分数，复议的同学即使胜利也不会出现上述分数。 Converting Rubric Scores to Scaled Scores Writing Section of the New TOEFL IBT TEST writing rubric mean scaled scor

6、e 5.00 - 30 4.75 - 29 4.50 - 28 4.25 - 27 4.00 - 25 3.75 - 24 3.50 - 22 3.25 - 21 3.00 - 20 2.75 - 18 2.50 - 17 2.25 - 15 2.00 - 14 1.75 - 12 1.50 - 11 1.25 - 10 1.00 - 8 托福写作：题库范文附思路解析 1. The most important thing you want to change about your hometown If you could change one important thing about y

7、our hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 分析 变更其环境，因为一个好的环境会使人们 更加欢乐 更加健康 更加有效率 相关题目：52、141、165都可以选择变更其环境。这些题目事实上可以用一篇文章应对。 范文 I was born in a small town named Hailin, located in the North-East of China. The most serious problems in my hometown ar

8、e the backward ideas about a woman's place in the family, school, workplace, and society. These negative stereotypes hurt not only women, but all of society as well. If possible, I would change the attitudes of the people in my hometown so they would view men and women equally. Discrimination ag

9、ainst women in my hometown begins before they are even born. Because people here believe that only a man can carry on the family line, every family wants to have at least one son. Each family is only supposed to have one child because of the overpopulation problem. This means that if a family can fi

10、nd out a fetus is female before it is born they might abort it. Or in other cases, people will have many female babies before they have a son, which only makes the population problem worse. If female babies were considered as important as male babies, then these two problems probably would not exist

11、. Discrimination against girls continues as they go to school and work. The prevalent stereotype is that women are not as smart as men and we shouldn't waste time and money educating them. Families often insist that their daughters stay at home and help with housework while sending their sons to

12、 school. Girls are born every bit as smart as boys and equally deserve to reap the benefits of education. Many of the world's famous scientists and leaders are women, from Marie Curie to Margaret Thatcher. We need to eliminate the stereotype that women are less intelligent than men so that our c

13、ommunity can benefit from the achievements that women are capable of making when armed with education. In fact, women need to be respected enough to hold professional and leadership jobs in our community. This would mean that in the classified section of newspapers, there would no longer be jobs for

14、 men only. We will never know how many women could have done those jobs better than a man could have until the parents of every baby girl decide that their daughter is worth as much as their son. This is probably the most important thing that I want to change about my hometown. 2. The influence of m

15、ovies or television on people's behavior How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 分析 电影、电视等大众传媒(mass media)往往可以对人们的行为产生影响 通过变更人们的价值观、世界观、审美观而变更人们行为 通过制造“社会热点”而使大众不停地探讨一件事情 通过满意人们的幻想，或使人们处于平衡状态，或使人们肯定程度上失衡 范文 The impact

16、 that movies or television has had on our daily life, and society in general, is undeniable. No doubt it will become even greater as the scope of which continues to grow, and as the relevant technologies become more and more sophisticated, and so fascinating that virtually nobody will be able to esc

17、ape. Already, it can be seen how western movies are exercising influence on our youth generation: they grow long-hair regardless of their gender, commonly part of which is dyed in gold; they wear jeans in each and every season, usually the knees of which are deliberately tattered; boys are fond of e

18、arrings or other odd pendants; and girls are keen on Marlboros and weird bad words. The major means that movies and television influence the public is by creating topics of discussion in the society. Movies offer people (the consumers) issues to talk and think about. Titanic had brought a worldwide

19、uproar by its extolling of fascinating immortal love; Prime Color and Wag the Dog met the national debate on right and duty of the president of the United States. Antiwar movies such as Tears of the Sun and All Quiet on the Western Front among numerous others have been raising the question that is a

20、ny war really to uphold justice or is it really worthy that an individual makes sacrifices to his country and at the same time ignores his own family or his personal values? Television also shapes our understanding of what is important and what is not important (to know). The important issues are be

21、ing discussed over and over or in the beginning of a program. The not important stories are the ones that are not being told at all. The not very important stories are probably very short and hidden in the last part. By prearranging public issue, movies and television make decisions for us. Even tho

22、ugh there are critical thinking individuals in any society, they are definitely in minority; the public in whole indeed lack skills of critical thinking, and therefore they are often led by the movies and television. In brief, movies and television, by offering topics and affecting the ways in which

23、 we discuss the important issues, has a strong influence on our perception of the truth, of the world or of the structure of our society. We have to admit that it has a role in our lives as a source of information, experiences, entertainment, amusement andrelaxation. 3. Has television destroyed comm

24、unication among people? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 分析 不.能.同.意.这.个.观.点.。一方面人们看电视的时间越来越多;另外一方面人与人之间的关系越来越冷漠。但是这两个现象并不是完全、干脆的因果关系。造成人们关系冷漠的缘由许多，比如，来自方方

25、面面的压力：工作、生活。 范文 While television has been somewhat harmful in its effects, it has hardly destroyed communication among friends and family, although for some people, the assertion that television has destroyed communication among friends and family seems pretty plausible. Television, invented in last

26、 century, with its wide availability, increasingly prosperous programs, becomes one of the most powerful means of communication in the history, and is more and more difficult to ignore. Television is as much a part of our lives as are our meals, work, or school; studies consistently show that the av

27、erage American child spends almost as much time watching television as does he or she in school. We all have only 24 hours a day and it is clear that the more time one spends on watching television, the less time one does with his or her family and friends. Hence the passage printed in the newspaper

28、 or magazine titled Television took my husband away. Tempting as such claim might be, it is hardly true. Instead of television, it is the increasing pressure of modern life that took her husband away. We have no definite evidence to say people nowadays endure more pressures than did their counterpar

29、ts in the past, but it is absolutely true that people nowadays undergo great pressures that come from various directions, including work, school, economy, and so forth. Investigations show that people who earn more than RMB 50, 000 annually spend at least 60 hours on work per week, much more than th

30、ose who earn RMB 20,000 annually. Today a bachelor's degree may no longer guarantee a decent pay, more and more companies post their want ads claiming that applicants must have at least master's degrees, which take two or three years longer. People nowadays have very little time for anything

31、; television is merely among many other factors that affect communication, and is definitely not the main cause of degradation. It seems that the more one is educated, the more one is aware of the deleterious effects that excessive television causes, and either deliberately avoid it or actually do n

32、ot enjoy it. On the other hand, there really are many people addictive to television. But the fact is, were television not existent, surely these people would have found other escapes, such as alcohol or gambling for example. In other words, people always find a way to do what they want to do. There

33、fore, I can hardly agree that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. 4. Live in a small town or in a big city? Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to suppo

34、rt your answer. 分析 生活在大城市的优缺点：信息发达，工作机会多，生活设施完善;人情淡薄 生活在小城市的优缺点：温馨，宁静，空气好;人们相互了解、友善;信息闭塞;没有好工作陈述自己的偏好(可以实行it depends的策略，不同的阶段有不同的偏好) 相关题目：20 范文 People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as preference between a big city and a small town. It's a little bit haste to say that i

35、t is better to live in a big city than in a small town, or vice versa.Living in a big city has several benefits. First, there're more job opportunities readily available in big cities than in a small town. Moreover, not merely are there more job positions in big cities and the qualities of the p

36、osition are much higher as well. In addition, the pay is more decent. Second, children are supposed to be able to receive an education with a higher quality compared with their counterparts who live in a small town. For families,children's education is always put in the first place. Finally, liv

37、ing in a big city usually has a superior living standard to that in a small town. There are more commodities and services in city markets; there are more public utilities available in big cities; there are even much more television channels in big cities.However, living in a small town also has some

38、 advantages. People who live in a small town often have a much comfortable life style. Most of them do not have to suffer high working stress. Although the average pay is much less than that of big cities, the price of daily necessities, such as vegetables or meat, is usually less expensive. Instead

39、 of suffering loneliness which is prevalent in big cities, children might grow up more healthily because of harmonious relationship among residents in small town. People in a small town do not have to get up so early in the morning because there has been no traffic jam, and nobody drive so fast in a

40、 small town as to cause car accidents. They might have fewer channels in television, but they have more friends readily available to chat or entertain with. According to my current situation, although I am longing for the cozy atmosphere and relationship among neighbors and friends which almost only

41、 exist in small cities, I have chosen to live in one of the biggest cities in my countryBeijing, since I have found a pretty good job here, and a decent pay. I think I would prefer living in a small town when I get retired one day. 5. Does luck have anything to do with success? “When people succeed,

42、 it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 分析 nothing是一个肯定词，所以，不能完全同意也不能完全不同意。选择“很大程度上同意”。 指出luck的确存在指出可能导致人们胜利的若干缘由：诚恳、睿智、幽默;执著;肯于做不喜爱的事情27; 相关题目：27、63 范文 Here is a

43、 true story, a story about an African man called Cinque who slew a most terrifying beast that any one has ever seen, a lion. His siblings in the village who know about this anecdote gave him great respect and call him the big man. However, he told the truth later. It had killed several people, even

44、hunters among us. Everyone including me was afraid. I was lying down with my family, when out of nowhere it appeared. As it came for me, I picked up a big rock and I threw it. And that wasn't bravery, because any man would do the same to protect his family. But by some miracle, you see, I hit it

45、. I don't know how that killed it, but it did. A rock, you see, a rock. I received the gratitude of everyone in the village. I was given respect. They treated me as if I was a prince. They gave me the finest country cloth. All these things they gave me, I took them all. But I knew I didn't d

46、eserve it, for when I threw that rock at that beast, if I missed it, I wouldn't be sitting here today trying to explain these things to you or somebody else, I'd just be dead. I'm not a big man, just a lucky one. You see, luck does exist. When it appears, mathematicians describe in such

47、a way that something has an extremely small probability but it does happen. People often say, one has to have an opportunity to succeed. In this case, luck is the opportunity, and to some extent is an indispensable factor to achieve success. When people say luck has nothing to do with success, I won

48、der it is not their intention to deny existence of luck, but to encourage. Because luck in fact is a factor that one can not and should not count on, even though we know people who have succeeded have their own luck. It is somewhere, but nobody knows where. It happens sometime, but we don't know when. By contrast, hard work is something that everyone can count on, and as is often