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1、雅思写作结尾模板-回顾全文+观点+展望雅思写作结尾模板-回顾全文+观点+展望回顾全文+观点+展望：这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文，在这种写法中，我们要留意的是结尾段由三个要素组成，其中第2个要素是必需的，但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子：I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testin

2、g is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.上面这个例句中，作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后，起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必需搭配一个展望将来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子：In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline.However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want

3、to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.大家不难发觉，2个句子都运用了相像的连接方式，即首句委婉地回顾全文，将观点的对立面用“让步”的方式表达出来，同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最终再用一个对于将来的期望来支撑自己的观点。朗阁海外考试探讨中心分析认为，这种依次支配的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结，但同时观点又是特别显明有力的，加上对于将来的润色，使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法，我们再

4、来看第三个例句：To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education,I feel strongly that the country can only progressif all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability.和前2个结尾不同，第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文，但是它将作者的观点和对将来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造“展望将来”时的一个思路，即搭配条件状语从句或

5、者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局，比如：All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore.对于毒品对社会的危害，作者先是承认现状的无法变更，进而乐观地阐述了自己的观点即实行了切实有效的行动后可以

6、减弱其危害。最终用毒品的危害性来对将来作展望。换句话说，在社会类分析解决型争论文中，我们在展望将来时可以考虑用强调其长远的影响作为突破口。又如：In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school.However, a number of society attitudes also have to changeif the countrys people are to achieve their full potential.这个结尾的题目是探讨辍

7、学这一社会现象导致的问题和解决方案的。我们发觉运用前面提到的条件状语从句也可以作为这类题材结尾的重要句型。雅思写作学术类范文Writing Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.Write a report for a uni

8、versity lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.The most prominent trend shown in the graph is an enormous rise in the number of people traveling to and from work by car in the 40 years from 1950 to 1990. In the same period, there was a steep drop in the n

9、umbers of people riding bicycles or walking. In addition, the trend was accompanied by a slight decline in the number of bus users.In 1950, only about 5% of all commuters used cars. This shot up to over 25% in 1970, and to about 30% in 1990. The number of foot travelers halved in both 20-year period

10、s successively, and bike riders followed suit. The use of buses rose sharply until 1970, and then declined to somewhat lower than its former level over the next 20 years.The graph suggests that people are becoming less active. In 1950, most people traveled to and from work in th is city either on fo

11、ot or, to a slightly lesser extent, by bike. But by 1990, cars were by far the most popular mode of transport, and almost as many people were still traveling by bus in 1990 as in 1950, with very few using bikes or walking.Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Present a written

12、 argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic.The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.Should alternative forms of transport be encouraged and international laws introduced to cont

13、rol car ownership and use?You should write at least 250 words.雅思写作移民类(G类)范文一例WRITING TASK 1You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task.You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your room-male always has friends visi

14、ting. He/she has parties in the room and sometimes borrows your things without asking you.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.You should write at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write you

15、r own address.Begin your letter as follows;DearDear Sir or MadamI am writing to inform you that I wish to movesintosa new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my room-mates incons

16、iderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances. I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.

17、雅思外教9分例文Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to be made in the new century?Many people are optimistic about the twenty first centu

18、ry and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes in the world.(留意：这句话照抄了原题，考试时这样做会被扣分的!) Given(作介词，表示“考虑到”) current trends however this optimism is certainly unwarranted. If we are to see our way safely into the twenty second century, many fundamental changes still need to be made.The world

19、has been changed in the twenty first century; advancements in medicine and technology have changed life and lifestyles for virtually all of the peoples of the world. Not only have these advancements brought society forward, it has brought society onto the cusp of a new era(新纪元的起先), the entire direct

20、ion of human development is now changing from that of single nations eking out an existence(很好的短语，表示“牵强维持生活”)in some corner of the world, to the people of the world drawing together(团结起来) to take on projects and research that could never be accomplished in isolation.These changes however, have not a

21、ll been positive. The environmental impact of industrialization has changed the face of the world as well, polluting oceans and rivers, stripping (剥夺)the world of some of its oldest and most verdant forests (绿色森林)darkening the sky with air pollution, poking holes in the protective ozone layer, and l

22、eading to the development of radioactive poisons(放射型毒物) capable of poisoning the earth and continuing to poison it for millions of years to come. Meanwhile, man is beset by(被困扰) problems of overpopulation and pollution. Like vermin, man is being overcome by his own filth and inability to stop reprod

23、ucing.Mans development in the last century has been massive, but in both directions, both forward and backward. This combination of development and destruction seems to be the basic nature of man, but if we are to survive, we must realize that progress, at the cost of ourselves is not only unacceptable but the path to destruction.雅思写作结尾模板-回顾全文+观点+展望