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1、托福写作如何用好状语从句提升文章质量托福写作如何用好状语从句提升文章质量?这些例子值得一试 托福写作状语从句运用实例分析 在写作当中运用的最多的是以下五种状语从句，即缘由状语从句，让步状语从句，条件状语从句，时间状语从句和目的状语从句。 1. 缘由状语从句 常由because， as， since和for引导 Eg： Nonetheless， I am still in favor of space travel， for its merits far outweigh demerits. 尽管如此，我还是赞成太空探险，因为它的好处远远大于坏处。 2. 让步状语从句 常由although， t

2、hough， even though/ if， as long as和notwithstanding引导 Eg： Although this view is wildly held， this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place. 尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教化能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。 3. 条件状语从句 常由if， on the condition that和providing that引导 Eg： If you want to achieve somet

3、hing or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions， you must work hard， make efforts and get prepared. 假如你要取得成就或要实现你的雄心壮志，你必需努力工作、艰苦奋斗、打算好条件。 4. 时间状语从句 常由when和while引导 Eg： When it comes to education， the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study. 说到教化，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。 5. 目的状语从句 常由so

4、that和in order that引导 Eg： Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market. 成千上万的人们不得不花费的精力和时间学习新的技术和学问，使得他们在就业市场能保持优势。 提升托福写作的终极秘诀-仿写 在本人教学的这几年中，经常遇到刚接触国外考试的学生埋怨说，在写作的过程中不知道如何提升说理部分的逻辑性，如何举出恰当的例子，以及如何

5、完善词句方面的搭配。 其实，这个问题很简洁。我们可以回想一下自己小的时候是如何学习中文的。在两三岁时，虽然我们并没有参与任何形式的中文课程，但是照样能够学会如何正确地说中文。 那是因为，我们四周会有父母和其他亲戚以各种形式做着示范，这种示范会潜移默化地影响着我们的语言系统，而小时候我们强大的仿照实力，会促使我们快速地汲取、积 累并应用四周正确的中文学问。所以，中文自然而然成为了 我们语言体系中流利的母语。 语言的学习规律是相通的。有了正确的输入，才能 有正确的输出。所以，要想在英文写作中有所提高，我 们可以借鉴一些上乘的范文，对其思路、结构、语言等进行仿照，并最终应用在我们自己的文章中。这个过

6、程就叫做仿写。 如何做仿写? Step 1 通读范文，了解通篇大意，细致探讨各段构思。 在教学过程中，我会为学生甄选符合国外考 试评分标准的优秀范文。学生拿到这些范文后，可以从宏观的角度了解作者对于题目的观点，是采纳了单边、双边还是中立的角度来进行论证。学生还可以从微观的角度，深度分析每个主体段，作者是如何通过有逻辑地说理，并配以恰当详细的例子，来证明此段的分论点。 以下为范?段落实例： Modern society places a lot of emphasis on success. Though success is clearly desirable, Ithink our inte

7、nse focus on success is unhealthy and counter productive.People would be better served by learning how to adopt a positive attitude towards failure. Step 2 学习优秀的语言点 针对每一篇范文，我会为学生总结出其中用法得到的词组和句式，并让学生趁热打铁，强化对这些语料的记忆。这种从整体中提取，呈现成个体的形式，会让学生对这些语料的印象更加深刻。 以下为提取实例： 1、place emphasis on =emphasize 强调，注意 2、co

8、unterproductiveadj. 事与愿违，适得其反的 3、sb. be better served对某人有益 serve sb. well 对某人有帮助，有作用 . hope this “punching-in” approach willcontinue to serve you well in the days to come. 4、adopt attitude towards 对.实行某种看法 Step3 大声朗读，并填入语言点 在进行完前两步之后，我会将范文中优秀的语言点删除，并在相应的位置以填空的形式呈现。学生须要将刚刚记忆过的语言点再次填入文章段落中。这种从个体再回来到整体

9、的过程，会再次强化学生对于语言点及其语法的印象。 以下为实例： Modern society _(关注) success.Though success is clearly desirable, I think our intense focus on success isunhealthy and _(反作用的，适得其反). _(人们能获得更多好处) bylearning how to _(对实行主动的看法) failure. Step 4 打开电脑，看着中文提纲，原义输出 接下来的步骤，是仿写过程中最核心的部分。由于大多数学生在初期学习写作的过程中，都是在头脑中想出中文， 再翻译成英文。所

10、以，我们可以模拟这种过程。我将范文翻译成中文版本，然后让学生看着中文，翻译英文。在翻译的过程中，学生会根据之前三个步骤中学习到的语言点及其呈现的形式，主动仿照，写出一篇完整的文章。 这种从无到有的过程，会极大地增加学生的自信念，同时也再次强化了对于之前优秀语言点的学习成果。 以下为中文翻译实例： 现代社会很注意胜利。明显人人都想获得胜利，但我觉得太关注胜利是不健康的而且会适得其反。人们通过学习对失败实行主动的看法会让他们受益更多。 Step 5 比照范文，查漏补缺 每个学生在第4步中翻译出来的英文版本，一般都与范文有些出入。所以，在最终一步中，学生除了可以给老师检查之外，还可以比照第一步中的完

11、整范文，自行查看自己文章中出现的单词拼法、语法错误，以及是否应用了之前学过的优秀语言点。 综上，仿写可以使学生通过仿照，学习到正确的文章构思方式，结构的类型，以及优秀的语言点。此外，仿写的整个过程也是通过让学生不断地重复运用这些语言点，达到汲取以及内化的效果。与此同时，学生通过仿写这种从无到有的过程，可以打破对于写作的恐惊，增加自信念，加深对于国外写作考试的理解，切实提高写作功底。 托福备考之独立写作题目练习 同不同意：Some people think that 最重要的品质 in choosing the leader of a school organization or club is

12、 诚恳. Leaders of all kinds should have lots of qualities in order to thrive together with the team. Persistence, passion, confidence and personal charisma, to name a few. When it comes to question of whether honesty is the most important qualities of all for a leader in a student organization, I, per

13、sonally, would say honesty is definitely not the most important even though it is a contributing factor for a qualified leader and there are other qualities that are more urgent than being honest. First off, being a good listener and able to communicate well with fellow members can be more important

14、 than being honest. Only when a leader sits down and listens patiently to problems and concerns of his or her members, can he or she become an effective leader in a student organization. Also, being an effective communicator can also be equally important since it is essential to convey emotions and

15、ideas clearly to others, and when the leader get his or her ideas across to the fellow members, it enjoys a better chance to be implemented. A leader with exceptional communication skills is very confidence and personable when they are interacting with others. Since they can grab the listeners'

16、attention, it is very easy for them to build rapport with strangers and thus they enjoy better chance to broaden their social networks. Additionally, it is more essential for leaders of student organizations to be compassionate about the community and set exemplars for their fellow members than just

17、 being honest. Actually, lots responsibilities of student leaders involve various volunteer programs and philanthropic activities, if leaders of students body are not committed to getting involved in charitable activities, there will be a lack of energy level and passion among his or her fellow memb

18、ers. To be more specific, students organizations involved in lots of volunteer activities, like collecting food, managing the inventory and distributing food to those in need. They also volunteer in homeless shelters to prepare food or even work behind the scene in the business office. If leaders ar

19、e motivated to take the initiative and contribute their time and other resources to the community in the first place, chances are that his or her members would follow suit. In all, students leaders should have more important qualities other than being honest like excellent communication skills, compassion about their community and dedication to their endeavors. 托福写作如何用好状语从句提升文章质量