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1、托福高分满分作文必备结构和语言托福高分满分作文必备结构和语言2大要点详细分析 托福写作体现文章结构5要素分析 按题材划分，独立任务属于争论文，而论点、理由、论据、结论和论证是争论文的五个要素。详细来说，“论点”是文章的核心，“理由”是论点成立的依据，两者构成因果关系;“论据”是对理由的详细说明，多为事例;“结论”是对观点的重申，两者一脉相承、头尾呼应;而整个写作过程就是一个“论证”的过程。 要想作文得高分，这五要素就必需四平八稳，如此才能写出结构严谨、条理清楚的高分作文 托福写作提升语言功底技巧讲解 一篇高分作文在语言上，首先要保证语法正确，用词恰当，这样才能精确达意。在此基础上可以追求更多样

2、、高级的表达。例如，文章开头要表现“社会发展快速，人们的生活发生了天翻地覆的改变”这一含义，最常见的表达为： Sample 1: Our society develops quickly, and peoples life has changed greatly. Sample 2: With the rapid development of society, enormous change has happened in peoples life. Sample 3: As society progresses remarkably, tremendous changes have take

3、n place in peoples life. 通过三个句子对比可知，其中“快速”的三种表达方式，quickly 最为平淡，rapid 居中，remarkable 最佳。同样的，要表达“天翻地覆”的含义，tremendous 就要比 great 或者 enormous 好的多，其他替换的词还有 considerable，drastic，significant 等等。 托福写作语言的优化须要不断的积累和练习，多记多练，不断扩充自己的语料库，唯有如此，文章才会写的越来越美丽，而许多考生之所以语言不到位，往往是因为平常不练笔，不积累语料，想单纯依靠“困难单词，黄金句型”就拿高分的偷懒备考思路所导致

4、的，这种错误的备考观点请大家肯定要刚好改正。 托福考试作文独立写作范文：要想取得胜利必需接受新观点 To be a successful person, one must be open to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind. (160618大陆) 6月18日托福独立写作点睛： 题目大意：要想取得胜利，人们必需要接受新的观点并且情愿变更自己原有的观点。此题目选择同意比较好写，在去想分论点时，有两种方式可以用：第一种就是去想why, 理由一：接受新的观点可以更好地适应改变的环境;理由二，接受新的观点可以与别人建立良好的关系。其次种去

5、拆分举例，拆分职业： 第一种职业IT 行业的人;其次种职业老师。 6月18日托福写作真题-独立写作 此次试题出现了A,B卷 A: A/D: To be a successful person, one must open up to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind. B: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: people should be open to new ideas and change his or her mind to be successf

6、ul. A卷题目是肯定词类话题;B卷题目为建议类话题/二选一话题). 留意区分处理这两类题目。 以A卷题目为例：处理此类文章须要弱化肯定词，并给出其他合理的方式。关于此题，可以按以下方式组织文章：1)开头段-主题段一(去肯定词做让步段处理，写我方的好处)-主题段二(要胜利的因素1)-主题段三(要胜利的因素2)-结尾段;2)开头段-主题段一(优点一)-主题段二(优点二)-主题段三(优点三)-结尾段(小让步+综合其他可以使人胜利的因素)。 范文参考一: Under the current society full of intense competitions, how to achieve su

7、ccess has never failed to arouse deep concern and interest among the general public. Thereof, a good deal of accomplished businessmen and elites are strong believers of the claim that to be a successful person, one must be open to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind.Towards such a compli

8、cated issue, I am in favor of the above claim for the following reasons. In the first place, being receptive to new ideas can help people to better adapt to the constantly changing environment and thus become successful. As is common sense, no matter what fields or areas you are engaged in, change h

9、as become the perpetual topic, which means that what you held firmly onto before may become outdated and even misleading overnight. In other words, only those people with open mind towards new things can keep pace with the changes of time and are more likely to achieve success. By contrast, rejectin

10、g any new ideas and never changing one's mind, people will be gradually surpassed or even replaced by other competitors. A good case in point is the collapse of Nokia Company, the once most famous cell phone brand. On account of showing no acceptance to the new operating system Android, the Noki

11、a has announced bankruptcy and has been acquired by Microsoft Company. The same logic can apply to any individuals who are stubborn. Besides that, embracing new ideas can help people to build harmonious rapport with more people, leading to the higher likelihood of becoming successful. More scrutiny

12、has made it conspicuous that an attitude of open-mindedness is strongly correlated to one's popularity among others, especially in a work team. The underlying reason is that anyone who has a willingness to listen to new thoughts tends to leave a good impression and thereof gains help or assistan

13、ce from others when faced with troubles in the path to success. Also, being open-minded helps you work through interpersonal or intra-team conflicts that arise when people work in close quarters. By contrast, insisting on one' own view stubbornly usually not only build a barrier for establishing

14、 the friendship but also serves as the origin of quarrel or conflicts with other people. Put it another way, people without a spirit of listening and cooperation have difficulty in completing any projects, let alone, become successful. Indeed, accepting new ideas may make people feel uncomfortable,

15、because they are forced to get out their comfort zone. However, the above reasoning does not bear deep analysis. To illustrate, it is an indisputable fact that success relies on nothing but innovation driven by constantly taking in original and creative ideas and thoughts. Consequently, factoring wh

16、at has been mentioned above, we can conclude that showing acceptance to new ideas and changing one's mind accordingly are of great necessity for the sake of achieving success. 写作参考二: Everyone is longing for success; therefore, everyone eagerly searches for every method to reach that end. Having

17、an inclusive and open would definitely serve as a good panacea for everyone who wants to achieve something in the life. Nevertheless, it is not the only way toward ones heyday, for ones success derives from the combined factors, like tenacity and resilience. Admittedly, a man with an open mind for n

18、ew ideas is half way for success, for these innovative ideas and philosophies offer one with another outlook when facing a deadlock or dilemma. Whats the most important, new idea brings about creation to our life. The modern society has witnessed the rapid and pervasive changes of technologies along

19、 with subtle social reforms. It is the new ideas from other people and other places that lead James Dyson, the inventor if G-force vacuum cleaner, to a great success; it is embracing the new method from the excellent athletes that helps Jimmy Li create his special set “Jimmy Li Jump”.Furthermore, ch

20、anging our mind and listening to the new ideas from others is conducive to cooperate with other people. A man cannot succeed without the assistance from others. An open mind for new ideas and thoughts are easy for people to share different ideas, therefore, it is beneficial for cooperating within ce

21、rtain groups or teams. A cooperative people would certainly get more help, thus to succeed in a more earlier way. However, an open mind for outside ideas is surely the only way for one to succeed, for there are a lot of other people gaining success through other ways! Being tenacious and persistent

22、represent a continuous effort in ones specific career. The secret to happiness is hard work and effort, not “quick-fixes”. Great ideas only cannot guarantee ones efforts and actions. Only by the down-to-earth efforts and hard work can the final success gained! If James Dyson did not experiment for o

23、ver 5200 times after he got a new idea from others, we would not have witnessed the birth of this new and highly efficient vacuum cleaner. Therefore, tenacity and persistence provide a sure way to ones success. Furthermore, a positive and optimistic attitude towards failure can also serve as a facil

24、itator for ones success. A lot of people failed because they feared the new challenges or feared to fail again. People with negative attitudes may be loath to take action even if they embrace new ideas from others. A positive mindset can serve as a catalyst for ones success. If James Dyson didnt hol

25、d hopes for his production promotion and give up during his experiment, we would have seen his products prevail the global market. Thus, a sound mindset and positive attitude propels one to success. In a nutshell, a successful person is not made just in one day. A lot of factors contribute to a succ

26、essful people, like new ideas, tenacity and a positive mind, to name just a few. Only in this way can a person expect success as soon as possible! 托福考试作文独立写作范文：政府爱护自然环境应实行什么措施 What is the most important action for the government to take for the protection of environmental problems? Fund researches o

27、n new energy sources such as solar and wind power? Protect forests and natural wildlife species? Pass and enforce laws to reduce the pollution. 三选一类题目会给出三个选项A, B, C让学生去选择一个。这种题的答题方法为开头段-正文段第一段B好-正文段其次段B的另一个优点-正文段第三段B比A好/A的缺点和B比C好/C的缺点-结尾段。 What one of the following is the most important action for t

28、he government to take for the protection of natural environment? (1)fund research on new energy sources such as solar and wind power; (2)preserve natural places such as forests and natural wildlife species. (3)pass and enforce laws to reduce the pollution produced by companies and industries 点睛： 题目大

29、意：对政府来说，要想爱护自然环境，政府最应当实行哪项措施：资助探讨新能源，爱护栖息地和动物，制定法规来削减公司的污染排放。 此题目为三选一的题目，波波提示各位小伙伴，对于这样的题目，我们有两点要做到：1.必需要清晰选出一个选项，2.三个选项在整篇文章论述中务必都要提到。只要能做到上述两点即可，所以三选一题目的写作结构特别敏捷，下面是波波选择的一种写法，仅供参考。 范文参考一: Taking a panoromic view of human history, we can readily find that the natural environment plays an enormously

30、 important role in determing the future of each and every country. Given the great significance of clean environment, the general public as well as the governors begin to wonder which is the most essential action to protect the environment, among funding new energy research, preserving natural habit

31、at or enacting strict laws. Towards such a long-running tug-of-war, I am inclined to argue that national governments should invest financial support in developing new energy sources. Initially, spending more money in discovering new energy can radically solve the various environmental problems. As i

32、s common sense, the deteriorating environment is the result of the overexploitation of fossil fuels, including coal, oil and natural gas. To be specific, numerous chemical plants usually burn the coal to provide power for manufacturing all kinds of goods designed to satisfy the basic needs of the ge

33、neral public. As a result, a large amounts of industrial wastes are discharged to take a toll on the natural environment. Also, an increasing number of petrol-powered automobiles will definitely emit car exhause(e.g. fumes and toxic gas), which can increase the likelihood of the public suffering fro

34、m respiratory diseases. All the above problems related to environment can be resolved by find new and clean energy like solar energy, wind power and tidal power. Undoubtedly, replacing the traditional energy with the new ones can dramatically decrease the pollution and contamination, thus leading to

35、 a better living environment. For example, once the cars uses the electricity instead of petrol, the air quality will improve to a large extent. Secondly, there are conspicuous limitation of the other two options. As for preserving natural places, the effect of this practice is relatively restricted

36、. To illustrate, the traditional energy sources are usually exploited and discovered in the natural places. Consequently, the preservation of natural places will hinder the access to various energy and thus impede the progress of the whole society. Also, the same logic applies to passing laws to red

37、uce pollution. It is an indisputable fact that across the globe, many countries now are heaviely dependent on the industries and factories which produce pollutions. In other words, once the law of punishing these companies is enforced, these corporation may have to cut down their output and make les

38、s profits, even ending up going bankcrupt. Accordingly, the national economy and the living standard of the public will suffer too. Factoring what has been discussed above, we can conclude that funding research of environmental friendly energy will be more preferable, because finding proper alternat

39、ive energy is the key to solving the environmental problems comprehensively. 写作参考二: The statement above attempts to assert whether funding on environmental friendly resources, preserving wildlife species, or enforcing laws to be the most crucial way to protect the environment has long been centered

40、in dispute. Too often people hold the idea inventing new energy resources and passing laws could be effective ways to eradicate environmental related issues. However, as far as I am concerned protecting plants and animals would be a much more direct and sufficient solution. To the extent that specie

41、s extinction is the result of anthropogenic events such as direct or indirect human activities and further threaten the delicate balance which all animal including human beings depend upon. Thus protecting the forests and natural wildlife species has the priority to be dealt with. For example, the e

42、xtinction of the dodo, a flightless bird endemic to the Indian Ocean island of Mauritius, was directly attributable to human activity. As the nature is an intricate matrix of interdependent relationships, in which each species depends on many others for its survival, the dying out of Dodo caused a c

43、ertain native tree whose seeds dispersed by Dodo, extinct either. Nowadays, many species face the similar circumstance either and it greatly results in human beings greedy. To make mechanic profit, the underground dealers trade the skin of the Siberian Tiger, and horn of the Tibetan Antelope and the

44、 African Elephant, making those animals hardly ensure the preservation. For protecting the balanced ecosystem, human beings should place a very high affirmative duty to protect wildlife species. In addition, many species possess great values to human race, some of which are not realized by human yet

45、, requiring people to protect them without any effort. Thermal insulation and conductive resistance enables latex, extracting from the rubber tree, to be the essential component of industrial products for daily uses, such as rubber gloves and rubber sheath. Not only plants play an important role in

46、industrial field, but works for medical perspective as well, especially function as Chinese herbal medicine. For instance, marijuana provides relief from pain and Lianqiao helps with heat removing. If cutting down most of the rubber trees and herbal species, we will leave limited resources for our f

47、uture generation. For the reason above, it is essential for human beings contribute more on wildlife species protection to handle environmental resources shortage problems. Admittedly, allocate money on new energy and pass laws to reduce pollution have the merit, however, they are impractical. Take

48、spending on natural energy as an example. On the one threshold, with the technology we have now, the energy sources are not stable and even costly. Wind and solar energy cannot be obtained on a calm and cloudy day. On the other one, they cost the country a lot. I do not deny that wind and solar energy, cleaner energy as they are, would be a wiser choice for developed counties who have money and resources to solve the carbine dioxide, sulfur dioxide, and toxic gases relevant problems and to a great extend release environmental pressure, such as global warming jeopardy. However, wh