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1、高二英语写作专项训练高二英语写作专项训练-严贵华严贵华 April 29th,2015翻译下列句子 1、他的文章充满抽象的概念，但是缺少确凿的事实。 2、中国政府一直在致力于改善教育体制。 3、It is still not too late to keep off the bad habit of staying up too late. 4、Keep in mind that nothing can replace a regular sleep habit to ensure you of feeling refreshed and vigorous next day. 第四部分：书面表

2、达（满分第四部分：书面表达（满分25分）分）假设你是卜曼宜，你购假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。文写一封电子邮件。要点：要点：1.问题：问题：2.手机不响铃，不能发短手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。件，无法维修。2.要求：公司应尽快予以更要求：公司应尽快予以更换。换。注意：注意：1.词数为词数为100左右；左右；2.参考词汇：配件参考词汇：配件spa

3、repart3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所为你写好（不计入你所写词数）；写词数）；4.已给出的电子邮件的开头已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。和结尾不得抄入答题卡。 However, some problems are presented with this mobile phone. In the first place, when there are phone calls, the mobile phone just cant ring. In addition, short messages can never be sent. when

4、 I came back to the mall for exchange, I was disappointed to be told that this model had been sold out. Worse still, it is a new model, thus no spare part is available at the moment. Nowhere can I have this phone repaired. Maybe there are some alternatives to handle this case, but I hope it can be d

5、ealt with and solved as soon as possible. In brief, my personal viewpoint is that you replace this mobile phone. Im looking forward to your reply.【分析】全文共九个句子,其中有两个时间状语从句,一个并列句;一个倒装句;一个表语从句。运用了however,in the first place,in addition, worse still, in brief 五个过渡性词汇。运用了available, alternative两个较高级词语。whenw

6、henbutNowhere canIis thatHoweverIn thefirst place,Inaddition,WorsestillIn brief,availablealternatives25真题再现 -环境保护环境保护一次性筷子的使用一次性筷子的使用真题真题假如你叫李华，是一名高中学生。根据下面内容，写一封倡议书，假如你叫李华，是一名高中学生。根据下面内容，写一封倡议书，呼吁人们停止使用一次性筷子。呼吁人们停止使用一次性筷子。注意：注意：1开头和结尾已给出。开头和结尾已给出。2字数字数150左右。左右。3参考词汇：参考词汇：rejectthrowawaychopsticksSt

7、epsofwriting 1 Extension-logical-paragraph 2 Translation -highlight -words and sentences 3 Correction and check假如你叫李华，是一名高中学生。根据下面内容，写假如你叫李华，是一名高中学生。根据下面内容，写一封倡议书，呼吁人们停止使用一次性筷子。一封倡议书，呼吁人们停止使用一次性筷子。注意：注意：1开头和结尾已给出。开头和结尾已给出。2字数字数150左右。左右。3参考词汇：参考词汇：rejectthrowawaychopsticks Presentsituation Consequenc

8、es MeasuresExtension砍伐森林会导致很多严重的砍伐森林会导致很多严重的环境问题。环境问题。面对这样的情况，我们应该面对这样的情况，我们应该采取一些措施来保护森林了。采取一些措施来保护森林了。目前，中国的森林正遭受目前，中国的森林正遭受着着严重的破坏。严重的破坏。2Translation:PartOne: Do you know why sandstorms and landslides are happening more frequently than ever in recent years? According to the recent statistics, 中国正

9、面临着严重的森林破坏问题。中国的森林覆盖率仅为13%，但是中国每年要生产大约450亿双筷子，而这些筷子就需要我们砍伐2500万棵树。有环保主义者警告，照这样的速度，中国可能在20年内就要砍伐所有的森林。 面临着面临着 森林破坏问题森林破坏问题 覆盖率覆盖率 大约大约 450亿亿 2500万万 警告警告 灭绝灭绝 beconfrontedwith theproblemofdeforestation becoveredwith approximately 45billion 25million warn dieout 中国正面临着严重的森中国正面临着严重的森林破坏问题。林破坏问题。 中国的森林覆盖

10、率仅为中国的森林覆盖率仅为13%，但是中国每年要，但是中国每年要生产大约生产大约450亿双筷子亿双筷子 而这些筷子就需要我们而这些筷子就需要我们砍伐砍伐2500万棵树。万棵树。 有环保主义者警告，照有环保主义者警告，照这样的速度，中国可能这样的速度，中国可能在在20年内就要砍伐所有年内就要砍伐所有的森林。的森林。 Chinaisconfrontedwiththeseriousproblemofdeforestation. 13%ofchinaiscoveredwithforest,butchinaproducesapproximately45billionpairsofthrowawaycho

11、psticks. Thesechopsticksneedustocutdown25milliontrees. SomeenvironmentalistswarnthepublicthattheforestofChinawilldieoutafter20yearsbythisspeed. China is confronted with the serious problem of forest destruction. 13% of china is covered with forest, but china produces approximately 45 billion pairs o

12、f throwaway chopsticks. These chopsticks need us to cut down 25 million trees. Some environmentalists warn the public that the forest of China will die out after 20 years by this speed. Confronted with the serious problem of deforestation. 13% of china is covered with forest, however approximately 4

13、5 billion pairs of throwaway chopsticks are produced by China annually, which means that we need to cut down 25 million trees. Therefore, some environmentalists warn the public that the forest of China will die out after 20 years by this speed.被动语态被动语态定语从句定语从句连词连词分词作状语分词作状语Parttwo: 砍伐森林会导致很多环境问题砍伐森林

14、会导致很多环境问题，例如，水土，例如，水土流失，废气排放增多，温室效应。人类将会流失，废气排放增多，温室效应。人类将会遭受一个由自己带来的灾难。遭受一个由自己带来的灾难。 砍伐森林砍伐森林 水土流失水土流失 废气排放增多废气排放增多 遭受遭受 Excessive deforestation soil erosion the increase emission of carbon dioxide suffer from 砍伐森林会导致很多环境问题， 例如，水土流失，废气排放增多，温室效应. 人类将会遭受一个由自己带来的灾难。 Excessive deforestation will lead t

15、o a series of environmental changes, for instance, soil erosion,the increase emission of carbon dioxide ,especially the green house effect. Its sure that the humen will suffer from a disater which is caused by ourselves.PartThree: 所以，我们是该采取一些措施来保护我们的森林资源了。 its time that sb did sth.万能措施一万能措施一 The lon

16、g term goal of environmental protection is to prevent the creation of pollutants and wastes and to produce durable, recyclable goods.万能措施二万能措施二 In view of sustainable development, the exploitation of mineral resources should be under strict government.万能理由三万能理由三 Mankind should join hand in hand to c

17、reate an inhabitable world for themselves and their offspring.3检查检查纠错纠错 Do you know why sandstorms and landslides are happening more frequently than ever in recent years? According to the recent statistics, theyre due to the disappearing of forests. Dear friends, do you know they were eatlen by you

18、when use the chopsticks? Every year it products 45 billion chopsticks from China. The forests only cover 13 percents in China. These need 25 million of trees. Someone who cares the environment has alarmed that China may use out all of its forests according to this speed! It means that the environmen

19、t of China will break down entirely. So please throw away chopsticks now! using the throwaway chopsticks may kill our forests. China whose forests only covers 13% of its land, produces 45000000000 throwaway chopsticks every year. This needs 2500 million trees to be cut down. Whats worse, some enviro

20、nmentalists even warned that if we continue using these chopsticks at this speed, it will be possible for China to use up all its forest resources in only 20 years.( At that time, we human beings could not live on the plannet any longer and there way be no living thing on the earth, either. What a f

21、rightening thing it is! )So we should not use the chopsticks any more in order to make a better environment for our younger generation and for ourselves. Dear friends, lets take action from now on!必备词汇必备词汇1： deforestation 森林砍伐 excessive 过度的 erosion 风蚀 pollutants 污染物质 durable 耐用的、持久的 exploitation 开放利

22、用 mineral 矿物质 inhabitable 可居住的 offspring 后代、子孙必备词汇必备词汇2 disaster, flood, hurricane, lighting, thunderstorm, tornado, volcano, wave, ash, furniture,feather,fur, latitude,equator,longitude bury, occur, strike, ruin,erupt, eruption. current, tropical, violent, previous,常用表达常用表达 污染大气 无节制地开发资源 乱扔垃圾 砍伐森林

23、冰川融化 土地沙漠化 渡过灾难 回收再利用垃圾 减少废气排放 最大化地利用资源pollute the atmosphereexploit natural resources excessivelylitter arounddeforestthe poles meltdesertificationsurvive the disasterrecycle the garbagereduce the exhaust emissionmaximize the use of resourcesPage 25KeeppracticingyourEnglishcomposition!Thank you for your cooperation