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1、Topic writing 话题作文的写作话题作文的写作fog + smoke =smog灰霾灰霾：haze雾霾雾霾What causes haze?What effects does haze have on us? (health, life)Effects on peoples health:coughsneezesore throatlung cancer respiratory diseases(呼吸道疾病呼吸道疾病)Effects on peoples life:1. Traffic is affected. (More traffic control./High ways are

2、 closed.) 2. Flights are put off/cancelled.3. Schools suspend classes. How to protect ourselves in haze weather? wear masks. reduce/stop outdoor activities.stay indoors. do not open the windows.buy air purifiers.Keep more green plants in the house.Wed betterWe canWere advisedA city in haze is neithe

3、r beautiful nor A city in haze is neither beautiful nor suitable for living. suitable for living. In 1952, a severe haze in London led to In 1952, a severe haze in London led to the death of 12,000 people, the majority the death of 12,000 people, the majority of whom are children and people with of

4、whom are children and people with respiratory diseases .respiratory diseases .It took 20 years to solve the haze in It took 20 years to solve the haze in London.London.Measures: uPlant more trees. /Increase the green area.ushut down some factories.udevelop clean energy. utake green transportation.ue

5、stablish law and regulation to punish and fine What can we do to fight against haze?Expressions:1.To , we should/must2. In my opinion, its our duty to3. Its important/necessary for us to 4. It would be better if we5. Use passive voice.(被动语态被动语态) 假设你是李华，假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友。他对目是你的美国网友。他对目前中国出现的前中国出现的雾

6、霾雾霾天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：1.感谢他的关注。感谢他的关注。2.简介雾霾简介雾霾对对人们的人们的影响影响。3.谈谈你的谈谈你的建议建议 。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅; 开头与结尾已写好，不计开头与结尾已写好，不计入入总词数总词数; 词数：词数：120左右左右Dear David，Im glad to receive your letter. _ Yours， Li Hua 1.Your composition should be divided

7、 into paragraphs. 2. A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences. 3.Youd better use some linking words. 4.Handwriting is of great importance.Requirements:The outline of the writing:Ending beginning Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting i

8、dea 1/2/3感谢他的关注感谢他的关注雾霾的雾霾的影响影响effects on healtheffects on life你的你的建议建议 How to protect yourself /the environmentASSESSMENTstructureIs the essay divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence?contentAre all the details included?Is everything to the point(切题切题)? LanguageDoes the writer use a

9、ny linking words? Are there any spelling mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）（高级词汇）?Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）（句式）?Lets improve it: Dear David，Im glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your concerning about the weather. Now Id like to tell you something about the smog. S

10、mog has cause great trouble to us. First, more and more people are suffering from respiratory diseases, such as bad coughs, sore throat or even lung cancers. As a result, hospitals are crowded with people. Second, it has brought much inconvenience to our daily life like traffic jam, road accidents.

11、Meanwhile, flights and ships have to be cancelled or put off. Whats worse, students have to stay at home because schools suspend classes. In my opinion, during the haze weather, wed better wear masks and reduce outdoor activities. In the meantime, measures should be taken to protect the environment. We should take green transportation, develop green energy as well as plant more trees. Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas. Yours Li HuaImprove your letter after class and write it again as your homework.