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1、36“记记”之之财富人生财富人生名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语核核心心 单单词词名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语1. novel n小说小说2narrator n讲述者讲述者3_ n财富财富4wealth n财富财富5economy n_6_ adj.有钱的，富有的有钱的，富有的7account n说明说明8_ n财产财产9_ adj.难以置信的难以置信的10patience n_treasure经济经济wealthypossessionincredible耐性耐性名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心

2、短语核心短语11_ adv.仅仅仅仅12indeed adv._13succeed v成功成功14_ v积累积累15unpaid adj._16health n健康健康17healthy adj.健康的健康的18donate v捐赠捐赠19happiness n幸福幸福20permit vt.& vi.允许允许simply真正地真正地accumulate未付款的未付款的名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语 特别关注特别关注 possess(3年年2考考)(1)be possessed of具有，拥有具有，拥有(某种品质、能力等某种品质、能力等)名师招招鲜名师招招

3、鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语She was in possession of stolen goods.Stolen goods were in the possession of her.她藏有赃物。她藏有赃物。名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语核核心心 短短语语名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语1. achieve something有成就有成就2be about to do sth即将要做某事即将要做某事3accumulate wealth积累财富积累财富4equal _等同于等同于5account

4、 _导致；做出解释导致；做出解释6to be honest说实话说实话7as _关于；至于关于；至于8deal with处理处理9bring up抚养；培养；教育；提出抚养；培养；教育；提出10have an effect on对对有影响有影响toforfor名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语11_ the contrary与此相反；正相反与此相反；正相反12even if即使即使13_ accident偶然；无意中；不小心偶然；无意中；不小心14online shopping网上购物网上购物15bring._.给给带来带来16take a chance冒险冒

5、险17make a bet打赌打赌18benefit _从从中受益中受益19hold different opinions on对对持有不同的意见持有不同的意见20with the development of economy随着经济的发展随着经济的发展onbytofrom名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语核核心心 语语句句名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语1. People often say time is money，but in fact time is more valuable than money. 人们常常说时

6、间就是金钱，但事实上时间比金钱更珍人们常常说时间就是金钱，但事实上时间比金钱更珍贵。贵。2Different people hold different opinions on money. 不同的人对金钱有不同的看法。不同的人对金钱有不同的看法。3However，others think money is not the most important for the reason that health and intelligence are vital to people.但是，有些人认为钱不是最重要的，因为健康和但是，有些人认为钱不是最重要的，因为健康和才智对人来说才是最重要的。才智对

7、人来说才是最重要的。名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语4If I had the chance to get that money，I would first set aside some of them for my university education and then donate the rest to the children who suffered from a devastating earthquake last May. 如果我有机会得到这笔钱，我会把一部分用来支付我的如果我有机会得到这笔钱，我会把一部分用来支付我的大学学费，然后把剩下

8、的捐给在去年的地震中受难的孩大学学费，然后把剩下的捐给在去年的地震中受难的孩子们。子们。5Finally，a healthy body is also necessary for accumulating wealth. 最后，健康体魄也是你积累财富的资本。最后，健康体魄也是你积累财富的资本。名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语6Therefore health is much more important than wealth.因此，健康远比财富重要。因此，健康远比财富重要。7Talking of wasting money，my buying this c

9、ar is a case in point.Every day I spend money on my car. 谈到浪费钱财，我买这辆车就是个恰当的例子。我每天谈到浪费钱财，我买这辆车就是个恰当的例子。我每天都要花钱在车上面。都要花钱在车上面。8With the development of the Internet，many individuals favour online shopping because online shopping is more convenient and can save shoppers time. 随着互联网的发展，很多人喜欢网上购物，因为网上购随着互联

10、网的发展，很多人喜欢网上购物，因为网上购物既方便也可以节省时间。物既方便也可以节省时间。名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语 字词入章，相得益彰字词入章，相得益彰 Today，I am going to introduce you a novel called“The Million Pound Bank Note” written by Mark Twain.Through humorous and sarcastic language，Mark Twain successfully described a fortuitous adventure of He

11、rry Adams，a poor American young man in London.Two rich men in London had a bet on him and wanted to see what would become of him a month later if they gave him a million pound bank note which couldnt be cashed.A month later，Herry wasnt starved，nor arrested，but became a millionaire instead.Whats more

12、，he even won the love of a pretty lady.This is a brief introduction to the story and I hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain.名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语名名 师师 招招 招招 鲜鲜名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语 写作失误分析一写作失误分析一一、遗漏要点一、遗漏要点【典题例析典题例析】 为了丰富同学的生活，你校学生会将举办一次英语歌为了丰

13、富同学的生活，你校学生会将举办一次英语歌曲演唱比赛。请你以组织者的身份写一个书面通知。有关曲演唱比赛。请你以组织者的身份写一个书面通知。有关内容如下：内容如下： 时间：时间：5月第一周月第一周 活动：活动：1.演唱歌曲：流行歌曲；演唱歌曲：流行歌曲；2.音乐比赛：听歌音乐比赛：听歌曲，猜出处。曲，猜出处。 地点：学校大会议室地点：学校大会议室 参赛者请于参赛者请于4月月25日前报名，前十名优胜者获奖。日前报名，前十名优胜者获奖。名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语 注意注意：1.可以适当增加细节；可以适当增加细节； 2词数：词数：100左右。左右。_【写作指导写

14、作指导】 1通知首先应注意格式；通知首先应注意格式； 2活动的要点：目的、时间、内容、地点、注意事活动的要点：目的、时间、内容、地点、注意事项等；项等； 3可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语【学生例文学生例文】NoticeDear students， Our school will hold an English song contest in order to our students will have a wonderful school life. We will hold the con

15、test in our meeting room in the first week in May.We will have singing contests，in that you can sing any song you like.You can also take part in another contest，listen to a song or a piece of music and then guess where it comes from.It will being a chance to show your talent.名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心

16、语句核心短语核心短语You can hand your name and take part in the contest.Do it before April 25th. Students Union April 15，2011名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语【失误诊断失误诊断】 本文语言较流畅，但遗漏了一个要点本文语言较流畅，但遗漏了一个要点(前十名将获前十名将获奖奖)，另外还有一些语法错误：，另外还有一些语法错误： in order to后不能跟句子，应用后不能跟句子，应用in order that。 We will have singing cont

17、ests，in that you can sing any song you like.非限制性定语从句中，不能用非限制性定语从句中，不能用in that来引来引导。导。 It will being a chance to show your talent.谓语动词谓语动词形式不对，应改为：形式不对，应改为：It will be a chance to show your talent. 表示报名参加应用表示报名参加应用sign up for。名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语【参考范文参考范文】NoticeDear students， The Student

18、s Union has decided to organize an English song contest.It will be held in the first week of May in the meeting room.The activities include singing pop songs and music contest.The students taking part in the contest will listen to part of a song or a piece of music，and then guess where it comes from

19、.If youd like to take part in the activity，please come and sign up for it before April 25th.The first ten winners will be given rewards.All are welcome to join in the contest. Students Union April 15，2011名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语【重点短语重点短语】1take part in参加参加2hold a contest 举行一次比赛举行一次比赛3sign u

20、p for 报名参加报名参加4give sb rewards 给给颁奖颁奖名师招招鲜名师招招鲜核心单词核心单词核心语句核心语句核心短语核心短语【高级句型高级句型】 1It will be held in the first week of May in the meeting room.(被动语态被动语态) 2The students taking part in the contest will listen to part of a song.(现在分词作后置定语现在分词作后置定语) 3If youd like to take part in the activity，please come and sign up for it.(条件状语从句条件状语从句)