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1、读后续写-专项练习 （高2022届高一上读后续写练习导学案）读后续写，简言之，就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写完部分补充完整，使之浑然一体。它一方面很好地考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力，而另一方面，它也培养学生的发散思维能力。根据考试说明该部分的规定，读后续写有如下特点：（1）读后续写不是随心所欲，是要在引导语（开头语）和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分。如考试说明样题中规定应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语（10处）。这些关键词语类似于传统写作中的要点提示，如人物、地点、事件，但是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是全用。另外，所续写部分不能脱离各自段落的首句开头

2、语，即：不能另起炉灶。这些开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度上引导你的思路向哪方面发展。（2）续写短文多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。这样考生能够根据提示词语，顺着原来文章的思路续写文章，并适当发散。（3）读后续写要求读写并重。与阅读理解题一样，读后续写同样需要对本篇文章精确理解，这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题，就这方面而言有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的推断，如What would happen next?。（4）所给文章的未完部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的，考生可以根据自己对文章的理解，从而对文章的结尾有不同的

3、诠释。(2017浙江卷）读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up

4、 with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. Man, thats a big dog! he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly t

5、hat it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it w

6、as by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent hag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He was a steep u

7、phill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side o

8、f the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意：1、所续写短

9、文的词数应为150左右；2、应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3、续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。【思路分析】本文主要讲述了Mac在骑车前往阿拉斯加的途中被一头狼追赶的故事。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化：Mac与朋友骑行朋友车坏，让Mac先行Mac独行，欣赏风景被狼追赶，最初误以为是狗心跳加速，朝狼喷洒喷雾狼后退，一分钟后又赶上，咬破帐篷包再次喷洒喷雾，狼更快地追赶Mac向经过的汽车求助，同时不敢减速Paul和 Becky开车路过，发现险情Mac听到汽车声，拦下汽车，而狼就离他十几码远。结合两段的开头，第一段：汽车突然停在M

10、ac前面；第二段：几分钟之后，另外两个骑行者也到了。开始构思，第一段中汽车停下后会发生什么?汽车里的Paul和Becky会有什么反应?下车帮忙还是紧闭车门袖手旁观?如果帮忙，以何种方式?赤手空拳还是有防狼工具?此时，Mac，Paul和Becky他们各自的心态如何？恐慌？害怕?勇敢?还是激动?结合第二段可知，此时，他们处在僵持状态(deadlock)的可能性最大。第二段中提到另外两个骑行者到来，他们是谁?是Mac的朋友还是其他陌生人?根据the other可以考虑是Mac的骑行朋友。他们来了之后怎么办?狼会攻击这么多人吗?有没有可能会有更多的狼来?还有没有其他经过的车?考虑情节发展，个人认为只有

11、一头狼，最好的发展应该是它最终逃之夭夭，消失在远方。考虑选择哪些关键词Mac， friends， Paul， bicycle， jumped， wolf等。根据情节，需要储备一些词汇，如赤手空拳bare hands；斗争fight with/against;靠近approach to；与此同时at the same time/in the meanwhile；僵持状态deadlock;危险状况dangerous situation；威胁threat；撤退，逃跑withdraw/run away;消失disappear；在远处in the distance等。【一句多译】With nothing

12、 on the hand, they dared not to fight against the wolf.In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the peoples threats around, so it began to step back slowly.【范文】Paragraph 1Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Pauland Becky got out of thecarimmediately to give help. But with the bare hands, they didnt dare

13、to fight with thewolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, shouting loudly at Paul and Becky.Macthenjumpedoff thebicycleand was ready to fight against the wolf. That reached deadlock.Paragraph 2:Afewminuteslater,t

14、heothertwocyclistsarrived. They found the dangerous situation where three men circled the wolf. Macsfriendsalso jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns toward

15、s the wolf. Just at that time, the wolf might feel the threats from the people, starting to withdraw. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.解题技巧: 续写步骤（1）精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这样有利于考生顺藤摸瓜（结尾）。（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文后面的注意都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词

16、数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生做到心中有数。（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路，同时结合文章划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。学科网（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。（5）标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时，务必做到字迹

17、工整、清晰。通关演练1 (2018浙江卷)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle

18、 Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river near

19、by. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. The day starts at dawn on my farm, he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding h

20、orses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mount

21、ains. Dont be late for supper, Uncle Paul cried, and keep to the track so that you dont get lost! OK! my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon su

22、n mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。写作指导读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基

23、础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前

24、文Uncle Paul的叮嘱不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。【范文】 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fail. Then my dad

25、turned around and shouted,“Hold on!”All of a sudden the horse began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the

26、 stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a fl

27、ashlight waving us over. What a night!2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。When I saw her tonight she smiled and recognized me. I smiled back at her. She was looking more relaxed even though she was still busy doing her job. I have noticed her several times this last few months and she always looks so muc

28、h happier now. Tonight when I talked with her I noticed her name tag. Her name is Pamela.Pamela works at the express checkouts in a busy supermarket. She deals with problems when the self-service checkout experiences a problem (no price on product, machine problems, etc.). She monitors these checkou

29、ts and usually has hardly dealt with one complaint before another is created.When I first talked to Pamela, I had called her to the checkout I was using. There wasnt any problem with the checkout though. My problem or should I say concern was about Pamela. She looked tired and was under a lot of str

30、ess as she quickly moved from one checkout to the next. Its a bit of a fire-fighting job.I told Pamela that she needed to slow down. I told her she wasnt getting paid enough to be working as hard as she was working. I told her that we, the customers, could wait and it was very bad for her health to

31、be putting herself under such pressure. I told her that our expectations were not as hard as the ones she set for herself. Pamela told me she would slow down. I could tell she was touched that not only did I notice her stress but I chose to talk to her about it and was concerned for her health. I ge

32、ntly told her things had to change. I told her I would be looking out for her in future to see if she had taken my advice on board. She smiled and said, I promise that I will next time.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：When I saw

33、her she was still doing her job but there was such a difference.Paragraph 2：I am proud of myself.【思路点拨】前文概要Pamela在一家超市的快速结账通道上班，作者看到她非常忙碌，看起来很疲惫，因此建议Pamela把工作节奏放慢一点，对自己的要求不要过高，否则对她的健康非常不利。Pamela很感动。作者说以后会关注看她是否听取了自己的建议， Pamela笑着说她保证一定会的。本文采用了倒叙的写作手法。文章第一段提到今天晚上作者在超市见到了Pamela，她认出了作者并向作者微笑致意。最近几个月她工作时

34、看起来轻松多了，并提到了今天晚上作者和她交谈的时候，注意到了她的名字。续写的Paragraph 1的开头说到当作者看到她的时候她仍然在工作，但是有了很大的变化，暗示本段应该写到Pamela的具体变化，还有作者和她交谈的具体内容等。续写时可用的关键词有：Pamela， customers， her health， supermarket等。学科网Paragraph 2开头说到作者感到很自豪，暗示本段的续写应该涉及作者的心理感受，以及从此事中悟到的人生哲理。可用的关键词有: pressure, concern, slow down等。【范文】 Paragraph 1：When I saw her

35、she was still doing her job but there was such a difference. I praised the new her. Now Pamela said that other customers would have to wait for their turn while she dealt with another customer. She told me the change had significantly improved her health. She added that shes also shared what I said

36、with her colleagues. As I walked away from Pamela my heart was lightened. She has taken my advice on board and tried to slow down her working pace. A days work means just that. It doesnt mean that one should put two days work into one day.Paragraph 2：I am proud of myself. Not only have I caused Pame

37、la to reflect on the pressure she was putting herself under, but also she in turn has encouraged her colleagues in the supermarket to do the same. I really feel very happy and satisfied for my concern and act of kindness do make a difference to those in need. Its just a simple act of love that costs

38、 no money. So my friends, our kindness doesnt have to be material, but just loving. Bless you all for all you do for others.【思路点拨】1、 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I still remember it, like it was yesterday when my parents told me the news. It was the week before Christmas on Thursday morning when my

39、 parents said,“Stacy, start packing your things so we can go to Florida for the holidays.”“Okay,” I responded. We do this every year for Christmas and New Year. Its kind of a family tradition we have. We go every year because we like to visit some family members living in Florida. There has never be

40、en a year when weve missed a trip to Florida for the holidays. I was so excited to go on this trip because Christmas is my favorite holiday, but to top it off I was going to get to celebrate it with my family.The next morning, my mother entered my room.“Stacy, wake up! We need to go to the airport s

41、o that we can get our plane tickets to Florida before they sell out.”I jumped out of bed and got ready as fast as I could, When we were on our way to the airport, I couldnt stop talking and smiling because I was too excited about getting our tickets.“Arent you just excited to go to Florida？” I asked

42、.“Yes, I am.We can finally catch up with the family and drink hot cocoa,”responded my mother.The airport was so crowded. Some people were leaving to other countries and others were just visiting for the holiday. There was such a huge line in the airport because so many different people were buying p

43、lane tickets.When it was our turn, my mother said, “Three tickets to Florida on Christmas Eve please.”The lady working there responded, “Well, you guys are lucky. You got the last three tickets to Florida.”My mother and I both smiled in relief (松了口气） and paid for our tickets and went back home to fi

44、nish packing.注意：1、所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2、应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：When we arrived home，we found father wasParagraph 2：After we left for the airport to buy tickets，a man climbed into our house to steal money.【答案】When we arrived home, we found father

45、was lying on the floor, bleeding. Though we felt very surprised, we sent him to hospital at once.With the help of doctors, my father came back to life on Christmas Eve, which made our family pleased. My parents loved each other very much, so my mother kept my father company day and night, completely

46、 forgetting the trip to Florida. After my father woke up, he said sorry to us and told us everything that happened to him.After we left for the airport to buy tickets, a man climbed into our house to steal money. My father caught him and bravely fought with him, but unfortunately the man hurt my fat

47、her. Hearing the news, we were proud of him. On Christmas Eve, we held a party in hospital for my father. Everyone got together around the Christmas tree and sang Christmas songs to him.That Christmas Eve was quite unusual and meaningful. I will never forget the time I spent with my father on Christ

48、mas Eve in hospital.2、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。During lunchtime, Emma suggested going to the zoo to feed the animals and her mom agreed.“Well stop by the bakery and pick some bread up. Now hurry and eat and then well go. Its going to be a lovely day. Grandma is coming with us. Shell be here any minute,”mom said.Emma ate her lunch and then ran into her room to get her shoes.The problem was that she could only find one of them. She looked under her bed, but all she could see were dirty towels and pants. She moved some of