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1、准确的审题清晰的提纲规范的语言仔细的检查整洁的书写内容:即写什么,对中英文提示,图示要认真思 索,明确要求.形式:即用何种体裁,要清楚几种文体之间的区别.细节:字数、人称、是否要标题等。文章要有层次，各段的主题句是否合理，是否紧扣主题。 常见的结构有：表达意见客观陈述主题内容一部分人的观点，另一部分观点自己的观点分析问题结构是什么为什么怎么办不要遗漏 任何信息要点句与句之间，段与段与段之间注意过渡，并且过渡符合逻辑。启、承、转、合四步骤启-创造良好的开端承-承上启下转-巧妙转折过渡合-完美结束全文 常用表达启的过渡词语和词组In the first placeFirst of all Firs

2、tly Generally speaking To start with To begin with 常用表达启的句型有As is known to all As we all know As the proverb saysIt is said that As a new way of It is clear /obvious There have been many changes常用表达承的过渡词语和词组Secondly, in addition ,Besides ,furthermore Moreover,whats more ,for example ,In other words,

3、obviouslyAt the same time 常用表达承的句型有Compared with thatAs far as I know It is true that It can be easily proved that The reason why There is no doubt that It is no wonder that Whats more serious is that常用表达转的过渡词语和词组 But however on the other hand on the contrary in any case or While in spite of Regardl

4、ess of, instead常用表达转的句型有Every coin has two sides.But for Another example is that Taking everything into consideration Thats why I feel that 常用表达合的过渡词语和词组In a word in general In short above allFinally ,in conclusion At last as a result On the whole In summary常用表达合的句型有Something must be done to It can

5、be safely concluded from -thatIn my opinion We can draw the conclusion thatIt can be briefly summed up as follows用自己熟悉的句型和词组:保证所写句子的正确,尽量使用常见的单词,短语,同时,避免生搬硬造汉式英语,避免原创英语,避免使用偏词.在正确的前提下,尽量使用高级表达:使用高级词汇,必要的情况下使用从句结构,同一个词避免重复,学会变通.两个典型错误There be 结构后加动词(应改为从句或非谓语动词)More and more 的正确表达(better and better)其

6、他常见错误帮助 with the help of表发生不能用被动 happen break out take place实现realise come true倒装 only后加状语才能倒装1.They swam to the bank of the river .(toward)2.I like swimming best. (My favorite sport is swimming.)3.You can find my house easily. (You will have no trouble finding my home .)4.I like listening to popula

7、r music. (enjoy)5.In our school ,there are 26 classrooms. (Our school is made up of 26 classrooms.)toward6.I decided to be a doctor when I grow up. (have made up my mind)7.The boy doesnt like to clean his room. ( is unwilling to )8.My hometown is in the south of China (is located in) 9.There are man

8、y trees and flowers in our school. (Our school is covered with trees and flowers.)10.One summer holiday, my parents went to shanghai .They took my sister with them. (One summer holiday ,my parents went to shanghai ,taking my sister along.)11.My brave dog saved my little sister.( It was my brave dog

9、that saved my little sister.)12.My father sat in the sofa. He was smoking and reading a newspaper. (My father was smoking in the sofa with a newspaper in his hand.)Today nothing special happened .I really have nothing to write about .As a result ,I decide not to write anything today .Im afraid that

10、our English teacher wont be happy and perhaps he will scold me for not finishing my assignment.体裁格式是否正确合理.内容是否有遗漏.语言是否有规范,准确,时态是否正确一致,主动被动是否混淆.句子是否缺少成分,特别是动词.动词,名词的形式是否正确.单词拼写,大小写,标点符号 是否正确,字数是否合乎要求.书法口诀横平竖直点要圆,笔画流畅点丰满,先直后弯写好撇,斜度一致才美观,连笔书写速度快,点画横画最后添,书写到位很重要,慢中求好讲规范,好中求快多多练,书写高分笑开颜.卷面书写整洁,一目了然做到左齐右不

11、齐,尽量少用连字符.首字母大写要明显,分段要清晰.字母大写适当,单词之间隔一字母左右的距离.多背例文,学会欣赏例文.把不同的文章类型分清,并了解每种文体的写作要求及特点,做到有的放矢.勤动手勤创作,可多尝试同学之间相互监督,批改,共同进步.成功是追求完美,勤奋工作,从失败中学习,忠于职守和坚持不懈的 高考英语作文题目经常与考生直接关心的社会热点话题无直接联系，但仔细琢磨，又会发现一些联系，就是说“热点归热点，关键找角度”。 不要身陷逐字逐句“英汉对号”式的字面翻译，要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。有关“跨文化”话题 例：假设你叫李华，你的外国朋友John想了解中国的春节，请根据以下提纲，给他

12、写一封短信：1、春节在中国人中的地位2、春节前，人们3、春节期间，人们参考词汇：对联couplet 爆竹firecrackerHow time flies! Four moths have passed since we saw each other last time. I cannot helpbut miss you. You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival. Now I would like to tell yousomething about it.The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional

13、festival. It is the most important and enjoyable one. A few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are put up on the doors of every household. They are said to frighten away the ghosts. On that day, people are dressed up. Firecrackers ring out in the air, which adds to the atm

14、osphere of the festival. People after a years hard work begin to relax and visit one another. Presents and dinners are given to celebrate the happy reunion of friends and relatives. Families get together. They have jiaozi and enjoy the New Year TV show. Customs may vary from place to place, but the

15、same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.Now, I hope you have some idea of Chinese Spring Festival.Best wishes, 根据下面提示，写一篇财富与快乐的短文。(1)一些人认为财富能带来快乐。 (2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。 (3)提出自己的看法。 注意：单词数120个左右。 Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them t

16、ry to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. They work hard and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased. Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。But some people believe wealth cant bring them happiness. For example, when one gets a fortune, the famil

17、y members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing. What a terrible result!In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brin

18、gs happiness, especially in the modern society. If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remember： money is not everything。假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲：1、对三年高中生活的怀念；2、对老师的感谢；3、对母校的祝福。My teachers and fellow stu

19、dents,In a couple of weeks, well say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! Now Its really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers co

20、ntributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.Itll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that were going to begin a new journey.Finally, on behalf of all

21、the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：有人建议你的建议 1。不浪费粮食和纸张2。尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋3。毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用？注意：1。不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节；2。词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数

22、；3。参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticksRecently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.Some students suggest that we shouldnt waste any food or pape

23、r, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thr

24、own but recycled.Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do。Such as, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society. 地球温室效应是全世界人类共同关注的 焦点，如今世界各国都在倡导低碳生活以减少二氧化碳的排放，请写一篇关于从我做起的英语文章。参考消息：1每周有一天吃素 2不使用

25、电器，关掉他们，包括灯。 3尽量使用自己的杯子等餐具。 4不要购买不必要的衣物。 5外出尽量走路或骑自行车 6取消不必要的打印工作 Every one of us is responsible for the greenhouse gases we give out in our daily life.Therefore ,fighting against climate changes is going to take efforts of everyone on the planet. In my opinion,choose one day each week when you dont

26、 eat meat,for meat uses up lots of energy and it takes a long time to produce .And switch off all appliances when you are not using them,including lights.Meanwhile ,we should try to use our own cups ,bowls and chopsticks instead of those made of paper or wood.Dont purchase unnecessary clothes,and be

27、 careful about the materials you buy.When we go out ,walking or cycling is the best choice.Only print things out when necessary ,and print double-sided paper to reduce the gases. Last but not least, make it our duty to live a low-carbon life and try our best to protest the earth,which is what we sho

28、uld always keep in mind from now on.； http:/ BT下载 nih83qfi 湖广！不明真相的福晋直接就将责任推到了年二的头上，令他刚刚提出的所谓年氏不守妇道的理由根本就站不住脚。可是，不寻到年氏的错处来他岂肯善罢甘休？“不管亮工是否跟爷禀报，年氏作为爷的侧福晋，她知情不报，理当受罚！”第壹卷 第123章 三罚雅思琦壹听爷的这番话，心中暗暗叫苦不迭！这不是才刚刚绞尽脑汁地罚过了天仙妹妹，怎么现在又要处罚？现在还能用什么法子？上次已经提前罚了三个月的例钱，现在再罚三个月？这要是传出来还不被众人笑话死！刚刚嫁进来王府，才领了壹个月的例钱，然后就被罚扣了六个月

29、的，不知情的人还以为王府穷疯了呢。禁足？不禁她的足，她都不会出院门壹步，禁了她的足，连每天的请安都省下了，她不更是乐得逍遥？。罚抄女诫？小柱子不是说了嘛，她已经写了好几十遍了，最后都累得病倒在床了。上次爷要求严厉处罚，她已经三管齐下，简直可以算是黔驴技穷了，居然现在还要处罚，还能怎么办？目前只剩下最后壹样处罚没有用过：跪佛堂！这可是最最严厉的处罚手段，而且即使她雅思琦是嫡福晋，也没有权力能够做出这种处罚措施！再者，天仙妹妹没有将这家信及时禀报给爷，也不至于严重到要跪佛堂吧？福晋心里犯嘀咕，王爷这里更是骑虎难下！已经怒气冲冲地跑到福晋这里兴师问罪来了，可是他既拿不出来正当的理由，又拿不出来有效的

30、处罚措施，他更是心里窝着壹股火，且愈烧愈烈。冰凝像往常壹样，又是早早地起了床。由于现在仍在禁足期内，也不用去福晋姐姐那里请安，时间又相对地多出来许多。上午是读书写字时间，前些日子因为借着罚抄女诫的机会习字练书法，把身体累病了，于是吟雪说什么也不让她再动笔墨，冰凝无奈，唯有只读书不写字。趁着上午太阳还不是很毒辣，冰凝让吟雪将贵妃榻摆到藤萝架下，沏上壹茶清茶，斜靠椅榻，躲在树阴底下，任由晨曦挤过树叶的缝隙，洒满院落，伴着知了的声音，专心地看起书来。雅思琦壹绕过怡然居的影壁墙，赫然呈现在她眼前的，就是天仙妹妹这番悠然自得、惬意无比的晨读时光。她突然发现，这个院子的名字，爷起得真是恰如其分，天仙妹妹不就是正在怡然自得地享受这“壹天之计在于晨”的悠闲时光吗？难道冰凝还没有过门的时候，爷就知道她是这么样壹个性情的人？就给这院子起名叫做“怡然居”？“给福晋请安！”福晋壹愣神的功夫，吟雪首先发现了她，慌忙请安。怡然居的花园院子太大了，又有壹个影壁墙，以至于福晋进院子的时候，她们都没有注意到。吟雪请过安，冰凝才知道福晋来了，赶快起身行了礼。雅思琦虚扶了壹下，就势坐到了冰凝对面的藤椅上：“妹妹这是又在读书呢？”“嗯，没事儿看着玩儿的。”“妹妹真32 结束语结束语