高一年级第二学期期末考试 英语复习讲义——读后续写.docx

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1、 第二学期期末考试英语复习讲义读后续写第一部分：解题方法点拨（1） 品读原文，确定文章线索 每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生顺藤摸瓜（结尾）。 （2）仔细审题，明确续写要求 一般短文后面的注意都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到心中有数。 （3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路 根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。 （4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句 在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言

2、的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。 第二部分：续写话题集锦第1组 助人为乐助人为乐话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一， 2020年新高考卷主题为卖爆米花帮助穷人的故事，传递了人间温情。这样构思情节第一步：困难描写(消极情绪困难处境)第二步：呈现助人过程(想到办法动作链)第三步：皆大欢喜结局(感激感动升华)这样升华主旨1Sometimes, a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference.有时小小的善行会有很大影响。2Just as the saying goes, “R

3、oses given, fragrance in hand.”正如谚语所说，赠人玫瑰，手有余香。3With one small gesture, you may not only spread love, but also positively influence others lives.小善举，不仅能传递爱，还能积极地影响他人的生活。4Actually, a small gesture of care will possibly melt peoples loneliness.事实上一个表达关爱的小举动也会融化人们内心的孤单。5(2020新高考卷)It is love that makes

4、 the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.伯纳德在他小小的心灵深处感受到，是爱使世界运转。6This kind act has a lasting influence on me. I always give others a helping hand if possible.这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。我总是尽可能地帮助别人。7Though many years have passed, I will never forget the lesson he taught me: only when

5、you help those in trouble is life meaningful.虽然许多年过去了，我永远不会忘记他给我的教训：只有当你帮助那些有困难的人，人生才是有意义的。8No good deed ever goes wasted. Therefore, share your love from your heart today and fill your life with good deeds.好事不会白做。因此，今天就分享你心中的爱，用善行充实你的生活。第2组 亲情亲情类话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一， 2021年新高考卷主题为给妈妈做母亲节早餐， 体现家庭成员之间的

6、爱。这样构思情节第一步： 冲突构造(误会、犯错等)只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合(代沟)、误会等。第二步：冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)第三步：亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)这样升华主旨1It was Henrys kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。2I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughters

7、 love and also, the power of words.我留着这架小飞机，以提醒女儿对我的爱和语言的力量。3Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。4The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together wi

8、th love between my family, warmed us.透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光，和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。5From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest.从那以后，每当他打算撒谎的时候，那三颗巧克力就会在他心里敲响警钟，提醒他要诚实。第3组 友情友情类话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一， 虽新高考近两年没考过该话题，模拟题中却很常见。这样构思情节第一步：友情出现危机或困难

9、(故事冲突)第二步：友情弥补(解释、认错、弥补)第三步：友情升华(懂得珍惜)这样升华主旨1I nodded firmly, knowing kindness and friendship bloom in both of our hearts. 我坚定地点了点头，知道善良和友谊之花在我们的心中盛开。2Without friends, the world would become wilderness.没有朋友，世界将变得荒芜。3If you take your friends for granted, you may not have friends for very long.如果你把朋友视

10、为理所当然，那你也许不会有长久的友情。4Theres just one sure delight, friendship, like sunrise, warm and bright.只有友谊这种快乐就像日出一样温暖而明亮。5It was on that very day that Asad made his first friend in the new school, and he truly appreciated the value of sincerity and honesty.就在那一天，阿萨德在新学校结识了他的第一个朋友，他真正认识到真诚和诚实的价值。6It dawned on

11、 me that one loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives.我想到一个忠诚的朋友抵得上成千上万的亲戚。7We both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive.我们都学会了宽容，勇敢地去原谅别人。8If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish their presence and show willingness to maintain and nurture the relations

12、hip.如果我们真的珍惜我们的朋友和友谊，就永远珍惜他们的存在，并愿意维持和培养这种关系。第4组 个人成长个人成长类话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一， 2021年浙江高考6月卷借叙述个人薪水话题，强调个人成长和对劳动的认识。这样构思情节第一步：成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)第二步：成长中(蜕变塑造)第三步：成长后的升华(喜悦感激升华)这样升华主旨1I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfathers words.我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父

13、的话。2The world makes way for the dreamer.世界总会给有梦想的人开路。3Each man is the architect of his own fate.每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。4Dont always complain about people. Try to look on the bright side.不要总是抱怨别人。尽量往好的方面想。5Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can cr

14、eate miracles in the end. 事实上，每个人都有天赋。发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。6As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily. Your dream might not come true in one or two days, but it will someday.只要你有梦想，就去追求，不要轻易放弃。你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现，但总有一天会实现的。7The golden sunlight slid in Adas room, light

15、ing her face as well as the future path for her to follow the dream of pursuing her dream.金色的阳光照进艾达的房间，照亮了她的脸，也照亮了她追寻梦想的未来之路。8In the same way, we need struggle to grow strong and survive. We must go through some sufferings if we really wish to spread our wings and fly.同样的，我们需要奋斗来成长和生存。如果我们真的想展翅飞翔，就必

16、须经历磨难。第5组 生活趣事生活趣事类话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一， 2021年浙江高考1月卷叙述万圣节南瓜卡头的趣事，2017年浙江高考读后续写叙述和健忘可爱的妈妈去旅行过程中发生的趣事。这样构思情节第一步：矛盾塑造(尴尬紧张)第二步：快乐结局塑造(感激开心升华)这样升华主旨1(2021浙江高考)Dads calm smile reflected his motto “Alls well with us, never fear.”爸爸平静的微笑反映了他的座右铭“一切都好，永远不要害怕”。2It was the first time that I had truly realized

17、 the meaning of patience.这是我第一次真正意识到耐心的意义。3We usually take life for granted, but the story shows us that there is always beauty in our heart.我们通常认为生活是理所当然的，但这个故事告诉我们，在我们的心中永远有美丽。4(2021浙江高考)The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes. I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet lo

18、ving family.这些话让我心中满是温暖，也让我热泪盈眶。我很幸运能成为这个淘气而又充满爱的家庭的一员。第6组 救人读后续写很多时候会涉及自然灾害与防范、安全常识与自我保护的话题，会经常涉及危难之际，挺身而出救助他人的故事。在这个话题中有时会写到危难之际，利用所学急救知识，成功救人脱离生命危险的故事；有时会写到楼内突发火灾，警察/群众舍己救人的故事；有时会写到群众/路人遇到有人不幸溺水，鼓足勇气跳入水中施救的故事。这样构造故事第一步：救人之前(恶劣环境负面情绪)第二步：救人之中(挣扎努力救人相关的惊险场面和过程如释重负)第三步：救人之后(感激升华)这样升华主旨1Take some tim

19、e to learn the knowledge of first aid. It saves lives, and it works.花点时间来学习急救知识。拯救了生命，而且很有效。2The story shows that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。3Everyone should learn something about first aid, for every second will count in an emergency.每个人都应该学点急救知识，

20、因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。4Knowing basic firstaid techniques will help you respond quickly to emergencies.了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。5Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble.许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记亚瑟给我的教训：当你能帮助那些陷入困境的人

21、，生活才有意义。6It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。第7组 历险脱困历险脱困类也是高考读后续写曾涉及的主题， 如2020年浙江高考的拍摄北极熊遇险；2018年的父子骑马迷路；2017年的骑车游玩遇狼脱险。这样构思情节第一步：描写环境的恶劣不安、绝望或恐惧的情绪第二步：转机描写描写听见或看见了什么情绪描写(希望努力)第三步：脱险描写情绪描写(感恩高兴)主旨升华这样升华主旨1My brother and

22、I harvested a meaningful exploration and really a brand new weekend.我和哥哥收获了一次有意义的探索，这真是一个全新的周末。2Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。3(2020浙江高考)Grabbing the camera, I dashed out and snapped valuable pictures

23、of the escaping bear, making the trip unforgettable for the whole life.我抓起相机冲了出去，拍下了这只逃跑的熊的珍贵照片，使这次旅行终生难忘。4Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply impressed in my mind.我以前从未度过如此惊险而又危险的假期。这次西部大荒之旅给我留下了深刻的印象。5Feeling fortunate, I mad

24、e up my mind to cherish life and not to try such adventure again.我庆幸之余决定珍惜生命，不再冒这样的险。6It was the journey that changed me, giving me an entirely new life.就是这次旅行改变了我，给了我全新的生活。7Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that theres always a way ou

25、t of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。8It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with ( we may face), we shouldnt lose heart.正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心。第8组 人与动物人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。如2020年

26、6 月浙江高考的人熊大战和2020年1月浙江高考的人狗和谐。该话题一般从两个角度展开：一是人和动物和谐相处；二是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，向别人求助，最后成功脱险的故事。这样构思情节可爱型动物故事情节：可爱型动物，如狗、鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物(主要是狗)救人的生命等故事情节。凶猛型动物故事情节：凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。主题升华设计可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。这样升华主旨1Thi

27、s magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning.这只神奇的小猫正改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是开始。2From time to time I look at the photo as a reminder to show respect to all animals. After all, it is we who are the visitors to their world.我不时地看这张照片，以此提醒自己要尊重所有的动物。毕竟我们只是动物世界的访客。3When dealing with them,

28、 its not only we who take care of them, most of the time, its they that heal us.在和他们相处的时候，不仅仅是我们要照顾他们，大多数时候，治愈我们的是他们。4(2020浙江高考)Despite the chill winter wind, their home where the two lovely dogs played happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.尽管冬风凛冽，他们家里的小狗快乐地玩耍，家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。5Appearing

29、 to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Beckys hand as if to express thanks. What a warm scene!狼似乎感觉好些了，它慢慢抬起头，轻轻地吻了吻贝基的手，好像在致谢。多么温暖的一幕啊！第三部分：典型例题分析【例题】阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Run to Remember Thirteen can be a challenging age. Not only did I ha

30、ve to adapt to my changing body. I also had to deal with my parents bitter divorce, a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburb. When we moved, my beloved companion，a small brown pony(小马)，had to be sold Feeling helpless and alone. I couldnt cat or sleep, and I cried

31、all of the time. I missed my family, my home and my pony. Finally, my father, realizing how much I missed my pony, purchased an old red horse for me at a local market My horse, Cowboy, was without a doubt the ugliest horse in the world. He was pigeon-toed and knock-kneed. But I didnt care about his

32、faults, I loved him beyond all reasons I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboys looks. I never let on how I felt, but deep down inside, my heart was breaking. The other members rode beautiful registered horses. When Cowboy and I entered the events where the hors

33、e is judged on appearance，we were quickly out of the game. I finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the timed-speed eventsI chose barrel racing(绕桶赛)，an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time One girl

34、 named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events. She always won the blue ribbonsNeedless to say，she didnt feel threatened when I competed against her at the next show. She didnt need to.I came in next to last The bitter memory of Beckys smirks(得意的笑）made me determined to beat her. For the whol

35、e next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena(运动场地)We practiced for hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home. On the way home I would be so tired；those five miles seemed twice as long All of our hard work didnt make me feel confident by the time the sh

36、ow came. I sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels, finishing the course with case.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。My turn finally came No cheers filled the air when I finished my show 【范文】 My turn finally came. As I urged C

37、owboy forward, he stumbled, and almost fell, much to the delight ofthe other riders. I jammed my hat down on my head, stroked Cowboys big red neck and entered the arena.At the signal, we dashed toward the first barrel, quickly whipped around it and with perfect precisionrounded the second and thunde

38、red on to the third. We tore around the final curve and shot for the finish line. No cheers flled the air when I finished my show. The end of our run was met with surprised silence. Withthe sound of my heart pounding in my ears, I heard the announcer call our time. Cowboy and I had beatenBecky and h

39、er proud fancy horse! I gained much more than a blue ribbon that day. At thirteen, I realizedthat Id always come out a winner if I wanted something badly enough to work for it. I can be the master ofmy own destiny.【原文大意】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者的一次值得记忆的赛马比赛，13岁时，作者经历了父母的离婚，组建新家庭，以及搬家的烦恼。而且作者心爱的小马由于一系列变故也被卖掉，

40、因此作者很不开心。父亲意识到孩子的痛苦，就又买了一匹老红马Cowboy。和骑马俱乐部里其他的马相比， Cowboy面相丑陋。当作者带领 Cowboy参加以外表判断马匹的比赛时，他们很快就退出了比赛。于是，作者意识到他们唯一的竞争机会是参加计时速度项目的表赛。但一个叫Becky的一匹棕色大马又以绝对的优势参赛。当看到Becky得意的笑时，作者决定要打败她。开始骑着Cowboy在运动场地坚持每天五英里的训练。作者的努力并没有让作者在节目开始时感到自信。Becky的马成功地跑完全程。【段落续写】 根据第一段段首句”终于轮到我了。“可知，本段可续写自己带着Cowboy参加比赛的过程，准确无误地参加完比

41、赛全程，冲向了终点。 根据第二段段首句“当我结束我的表演时，没有欢呼声。“可知，本段可续写，作者对比赛结果很不自信，但当听到播音员宣布他们打败Becky的那匹骄傲的大红马时，作者意识到自己的努力得到了回报，自己赢得的不仅是一条蓝丝带的奖励，而是懂得了自己可以主宰自己命运的道理。【续写线索】 比赛开始差点摔倒走进竞技场精确无误地跑完全程没有欢呼声陷入沉默宣布成绩打败Becky和她的马获得蓝丝带意识到努力就会胜利【词汇激活】行为类：猛冲，急奔：dash/run/sprint/flash/hasten/shoot赢得，获得：gain/acquire/get/attain情绪类：完美的：perfect

42、/fantastic/pretty/ideal/wonderful惊奇的：surprised/amazed/astonished/astounded【高分句型】As I urged Cowboy forward, he stumbled, and almost fell, much to the delight ofthe other riders.(as引导的时间状语从句） Withthe sound of my heart pounding in my ears, I heard the announcer call our time.(“with+宾语+现在分词作宾补”结构构成with的

43、复合结构）第四部分：2021年江苏省期末考试读后续写集锦1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was 8 years old.I had little need of luggage.But something about that old leather suitcase appealed to my imagination.In fact,I found it in my grandmothers attic.Grams didnt object,and so the suitcase came to live beneath my bed.I

44、didnt use the old suitcase before that day.It was a cloudy fall morning in our North Carolina town,and a fine mist wet the fallen leaves.I was angry.My mother had slighted me somehow,though now I have no idea what stirred up my anger.I was upset,and I wanted to make her pay.I wanted to give her a ta

45、ste of what life would be like without me.I would run away.Goodbye,Mom.I stood outside the kitchen door,suitcase grabbed firmly in hand.I wore my red overcoat and gray ski cap,looking the part. Goodbye,Mom, I repeated twice more to make sure shed heard.At last,Mom appeared,wiping her hands on a dish

46、 towel.She looked at me quickly.I lifted the suitcase a little just to make sure she didnt miss it.Im leaving, I said.Id rehearsed for the expected reaction.The plan was to let her feel guilty and beg for a minute or two and then I would give in after I was sure of her regret.Did you pack a lunch？Moms question knocked me off balance.Where were the tears？The begging？ Im leaving, I said. Im running away.For.ever.