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1、我们一起研究高考我们一起研究高考系系列之写作列之写作英语高考第英语高考第II卷卷(满分满分35分分)第一节第一节 短文改错（短文改错（10分）分）第二节第二节 书面表达（书面表达（25分）分）(如何找到有效的增分点？如何找到有效的增分点？)高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：1. 本题总分为本题总分为25分，按分，按5个档次个档次给分。给分。2. 评分时，先根据文章的评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言内容和语言初步确初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，

2、从总分中的，从总分中减去减去2分。分。4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点内容要点，应用词汇应用词汇和和语法结构语法结构的的丰富性丰富性和和准确性准确性及上下文的及上下文的连贯性连贯性。高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：5. 拼写与标点符号拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6. 如如书写较差书写较差以至影响交际，将其以至影响交际，将其分数降分数降低一个档次低一个档次。7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。语

3、言首先要求准确通顺。8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。2010年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达假设假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华你是育才中学学生会主席李华 ，你校将，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）, 希希望附近某大学的外籍教师望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委女士来做评委 。请参照以下比赛通知给她写请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信一封信。英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛主题：主题：人与自然人与自然时间：时间：6月月15日下午日下午2:00-5:00地点：地点：501教室教室参赛选手：参

4、赛选手：10名学生名学生联系人：联系人：李华（电话：李华（电话：44876655） 欢迎大家光临欢迎大家光临注意：词数注意：词数100左右左右(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)2010年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达One possible VersionDear Ms.Smith, Im Li Hua, Chair of the student Union of Yucai Middle School, 育才中学学生会主席育才中学学生会主席which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to at our

5、English speech contest be a judge in our school on June 15. to be held我写信是要邀请你作为我写信是要邀请你作为要举行要举行2010年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation Please call me at 4488

6、76655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes Li Hua deliver their speeches发表他们的演说发表他们的演说if it is convenient for you.如果你方便的话如果你方便的话2011年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达假定假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程， 遇到一些困难，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助）的帮助 。

7、根据学校规定，。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信一封信：内容主要包括：内容主要包括：1. 本人简介；本人简介；2. 求助内容；求助内容； 3. 约定时间约定时间;4. 你的联系方式你的联系方式（Email:;Phone:12345678）。）。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右；左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。结束语已为你写好。(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)2011年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达One possible VersionDear Ms.Smith, Im

8、 Li Hua, a Chinese student takingsummer courses in your university. 我是在你学校学习暑期课程的一名中国学生我是在你学校学习暑期课程的一名中国学生Im writing to ask for help. 我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。I came here last monthand found my courses interesting. But I havesome difficulties with note-taking and I haveno idea of how to use the lib

9、rary. 2011年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达I was told the Learning Center students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number:;12345678. Lookin

10、g forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua provideshelp for提供帮助提供帮助2012年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达假定假定你是李华你是李华 ，从互联网上得知一个国际中从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，）举办夏令营， 欢迎各国学生参加欢迎各国学生参加 。请写。请写一封电子邮件一封电子邮件申申请参加。请参加。内容主要包括：内容主要包括：1. 自我介绍（自我介绍（包括英语能力包括英语能力)2. 参加意图（介绍中国）参加意图（介绍中国）3. 希望获准。希望获准。注意：注意：1.

11、 词数词数100左右；左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。(1)(2)(3)(4)(4)(5)2012年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达One Possible Version Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, I the of the summer camp that you have on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from differe

12、nt countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.a middle school student from China. 来自中国的一名中学生。来自中国的一名中学生。announcement 通告，告示通告，告示发布发布posted read 看到看到2012年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达 , Ill be able to tell students from other countries about Ch

13、ina and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply. Regards, Li HuaWhat is more 此外此外be accepted as 被接受成为被接受成为近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制具体内容，属于半开放式的提

14、示；考具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可说，有利于考生的自由发挥。说，有利于考生的自由发挥。DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ How to catch the experts eye? A good compositionContent structurelanguageBeautybe attractive, completed in a limited time!DISCUSSION: What is a good writin

15、g？ Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字提示，可以用笔在试题处标出提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人，如果人家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Structure: * Good beg

16、inning and ending(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅) Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误没有语法错误)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)1)Use proper linking words (使用

17、使用恰当的连接词恰当的连接词）How to write a good composition？第二节第二节 书面表达书面表达（满分满分25分分）假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写编辑写一一封信封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法法，内容主要包括内容主要包括：优点优点：1. 话题广泛话题广泛； 2. 图片丰富图片丰富；3.有助于提高有助于提高 学习兴趣。学习兴趣。建议建议：适当降低词汇难度。适当降低词汇难度。 注意注意：1. 词数词数100左右左右；2. 可以适当增加细节可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯以使

18、用文连贯；3. 开头语已开头语已你你写好写好，不不计入计入总词数。总词数。2012年高考英语辽宁卷年高考英语辽宁卷书面表达书面表达 As a result; In addition ; To begin with ; However使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking wordsDear Editor,As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages._ O

19、ne of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history.These topics, I think, are very popular with us students.To begin with In my opinion; Therefore; However; whats more_, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us under

20、stand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. _, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. _, Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones.whats moreHoweverThereforeAvoid Chinglish!1) T

21、raffic in Shanghai is too crowded. 2) There has a highway connected with Beijing.3) Though shes almost 40，but she still plans to compete.4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will cost us much money to buy one. heavy.leftistake改错I cant understand them when I meet new words,so I have to refer to t

22、hem in the dictionary. The ability to read English passages is slowly. There is no doubt that English Study need lotsof time and efforts. Only by this way, can we keep up with otherstudents.Im LiHua, a new student of you. meet withlook uplowlearninginLi HuayoursMy English level is common and I cant

23、speak verywell. I believe we can get alone well with each other.Besides, I think speaking English is as important aswriting English.I study English for 12 years so I think I know Englishvery well.There are some advice in teaching English. averageitalongspokenwrittenhave studiedisAdopt a variety of s

24、entence patterns 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign No littering nearby. (使用使用V-ing形式形式) They even threw rubbish into the lake, _ the noticeable sign No littering nearby.(12 福建福建)totally ignoringAdopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰

25、富的句式使用较丰富的句式Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_in our school.(12 山东山东)held2. Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest. It was held in our school. (使用过去分词使用过去分词) 3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句使用名词性从句)4. People suggest that th

26、e conference be put off. (改被动语态改被动语态)_ the little girl knows so many things.What surprises him is that_the conference be put off.It is suggested that5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型使用强调句型)6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟

27、语气）用虚拟语气）_he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened. _the physics exam _your help. It was not until I couldnt have passed thatbut for/without7. I wont believe what he says. (使用状语使用状语 从句从句)8. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定语从句用定语从句)_he says,

28、 I wont believe. The girl_is spoken highly of. No matter what/Whateverwhose composition was well written9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）（用并列句）10. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装使用倒装句句)_he come back from Beijing _he was sent abroad._mak

29、e rapid progress.Study hard,and youllNo sooner had Hardly/scarcely . when.thanPlease learn to Your compositionwhen you finish it from now. 书面表达评价表书面表达评价表 项目项目 自评自评 他评他评 1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划? 2.句子开头注意大小写了吗句子开头注意大小写了吗? 3.有没有注意标点符号有没有注意标点符号? 4将文章分段了吗将文章分段了吗?分成了几段分成了几段? 5有单词拼写错误吗有单词拼写错误吗?几个几个? 6

30、.有时态错误吗有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态误用了哪种时态? 7.注意主谓一致了吗注意主谓一致了吗? 8.有没有语态的错误有没有语态的错误? 9.有没有使用关联词有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗使用得当吗? 10.有没有词性的错误有没有词性的错误?哪一种哪一种? 11.简单句表达正确吗简单句表达正确吗? 12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构? 13.表达方式是否多样化表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗注意长短句搭配了吗? 14.有没有用好词好句有没有用好词好句?用了哪些用了哪些?Have a happy day!first of all ,to begin with,

31、to start with , in the first place 一：高中英语中表层次的连接词一：高中英语中表层次的连接词in addition, besides, furthermore, moreover, on the other handfinally, eventually, in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, last but not least because of, on account of , as a result /consequence of due to, owing to, tha

32、nks to 二二.英语作文中表英语作文中表因果因果的连接词的连接词therefore, thus, hence, consequently, since, as, because, however, but, nevertheless,on the contrary, on the other hand三三.英语作文中表转折的连接词英语作文中表转折的连接词Bats are longlived creatures, some _a life span of 20 years.Bats are longlived creatures, some _a life span of 20 years.Bats are longlived creatures. Some _a life span of 20 years.of them haveof which havehaving