17级高一下第一次月考作文.ppt

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1、写作一：写作一：(15分分)请结合材料，按要求用英文请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。写作。A report shows that China has over 300 million smokers，the highest in the world，with the rate of teenage smokers increasing every year要求：要求：1就此材料发表你的看法；就此材料发表你的看法； 2紧扣材料，有明确的观点；紧扣材料，有明确的观点； 3词数不少于词数不少于60； 4在答题卡上作答。在答题卡上作答。试题分析：试题分析：本文是一篇材料作文，在写作时本文是一篇材料作文，

2、在写作时首先首先应该先用应该先用一句话来总述材料内容，即中国是世界上吸烟一句话来总述材料内容，即中国是世界上吸烟最多的国家，而且青少年吸烟的人数也在增加。最多的国家，而且青少年吸烟的人数也在增加。然后然后就材料发表看法，此时应该先提出吸烟的就材料发表看法，此时应该先提出吸烟的危害危害the harm of smoking ,可以使用的短语有可以使用的短语有do harm to ,be harmful to ,ruin ones health 等。等。接下来接下来要表达作者自己的观点，也就是要戒烟，要表达作者自己的观点，也就是要戒烟，改掉吸烟的坏习惯，可以使用的短语有改掉吸烟的坏习惯，可以使用的

3、短语有kick the habit of 、quit smoking , give up smoking等。等。另外另外，因为本文是表达现状，所以在写作时可，因为本文是表达现状，所以在写作时可以使用以使用一般现在时态一般现在时态。为了使句子或段落语义。为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折的词语。如表达转折的but, however, otherwise等，等，表达的递进表达的递进besides, whats more等，表达因果等，表达因果so ,therefore, as a result等，有时还需要加入一等，

4、有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。 According to a report, China has the largest number of smokers in the world, with more and more teenagers joining the ranks every year. One possible version: The problem has aroused great public concern, since smoking is responsible for thousands of pre

5、mature deaths every year caused by smoking-related diseases. It affects the health of smokers, and meanwhile threatens non-smokers by exposing them to secondhand smoke. Therefore, awareness should be raised about the risks of smoking, and a nationwide ban should be issued on smoking in public places

6、. It is hoped that through these measures, fewer people will fall victim to cigarettes, and more will be able to embrace a healthy life free of smoke.写作二：（写作二：（20分）假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的分）假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信，提到自己偏胖，心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信，提到自己偏胖，想节食减肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈想节食减肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈你对该问题的

7、见解。你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下：内容要点如下： 1健康比漂亮更重要；健康比漂亮更重要；2学生以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法；学生以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法；3可通过多锻炼保持健康，要改变不良的饮食习惯；可通过多锻炼保持健康，要改变不良的饮食习惯； 4健康的心态也很重要。健康的心态也很重要。 注意：注意： 1短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥； 2词数：词数：80左右。左右。 3参考词汇：参考词汇：state of mind 心态心态 Of course, it is only natural that young girls

8、 at your age run after the sense of beauty. However, in my view, health is the most important of all. As a student, you put your heart into your study. At the same time, it is your appearance that you can not overemphasize. whats more, dont let others opinions affect your happy life .Dear Xiao Wang,

9、 I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting. On the contrary, it is very necessary for you to exercise frequently. Only by doing so can you keep fit. Besides, whats the best thing is that you should get rid of the bad habits of dieting. Last but not the least, keeping a healthy state of mind is a key factor. In a word, I do hope my advice will be helpful to you. On the other hand, Ill look forward to receiving your next letter.