高考英语开放作文讲解.ppt

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1、开放作文 2010 2010年开放式作文年开放式作文 （生（生活活* *社会社会*.）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the pictureand explain how you understand it. 开放作文开放作文 （15分，分为四档）分，分为四档） 第一档：第一档：13-15 第二档：第二档：9-12 第三档：第三档：4-8 第四档：第四档：1-3 以以内

2、容内容和和语言语言定档定分定档定分第二档（第二档（9 91212）基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容、逻基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容、逻辑和交际等方面基本符合要求；辑和交际等方面基本符合要求；所用语法和词汇满足所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求；语法或用词方面有一些错误，但了任务的要求；语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影不影响理解响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档（第三档（4 48 8）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。表达未能未恰当完成试题规定的任务。表达未能切题；切题；所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了影响了对写作内容的理解对写作内

3、容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。未能清楚地传达信息。 开放作文评分原则开放作文评分原则: : 以以内容内容和和语言语言定档定分定档定分 立意明确，逻辑清晰立意明确，逻辑清晰 ( (立意立意-细节描述）细节描述） 语言达意语言达意2010年北京卷年北京卷请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you

4、 understand it.立意立意-细节描述细节描述立意立意1：勇于克服困难勇于克服困难 （小树在不规则大楼中间顽强生长）（小树在不规则大楼中间顽强生长）立意立意2：成功来自于不懈的努力成功来自于不懈的努力 （小树努力克服各种困难，最终获取了阳光）（小树努力克服各种困难，最终获取了阳光）立意立意3：多给孩子成长的空间。多给孩子成长的空间。 （楼房的不规则造成了小树的扭曲）（楼房的不规则造成了小树的扭曲） 立意立意-细节描述细节描述 把图中的内容描述清楚把图中的内容描述清楚 4 - 6 4 - 6分分过渡句过渡句 1 - 2 1 - 2分分含义含义 2 - 5 2 - 5分分 1 描图句描图

5、句In the picture,The picture shows thatAs can be seen from the picture, As we can see in the picture,From the picture I can see As is (vividly) shown in the picture ,. 怎样用语言描述图片？怎样用语言描述图片？在描述图片时，推荐一下三种模式：在描述图片时，推荐一下三种模式：a. 常量主语推进模式常量主语推进模式 例例1：What an interesting picture it is ! (What a strange pictu

6、re it is!) A tree is twisted by two closely-located buildings. It bends in the middle. But it struggles (tries its best) all the way to reach the sky (the Sun). What an interesting picture it is! (How interesting this picture is!) A tree is encircled (surrounded) by two closely-located buildings. It

7、 cannot grow well. It bends in the middle. But it tries hard to reach the sky (the Sun). What an interesting picture it is! A tree is standing between two neighbouring buildings. The tree is not straight(out of straight, bends in the middle), because it is affected by the buildings. But it struggles

8、 (tries its best) all the way to reach the sky (the Sun). b. 总说总说-分说分说(-总说总说)推进模式推进模式 例例1：In this picture, we can see two buildings, a tree, and (the sun). The two buildings are closely located to each other (are closely standing opposite to each other.). The tree bends in the middle and squeezes it

9、s way out of the buildings so as to get more sunshine.例例2：In this picture, we can see two buildings, a tree, and (the sun). The two buildings are located opposite to each other. The tree is standing between the two buildings and bends in the middle. The sun is shining above the tree. Though twisted

10、by these two buildings, the tree still struggles all the way up to the air. 过渡句（描述图片过渡句（描述图片-个人看法）个人看法）如如: This picture tells us that What impresses me most about this picture is that. This picture means that The picture makes me think of. This picture shows us that The picture reveals the fact that

11、. This picture demonstrates that . This picture reminds me of . This picture intends to tell us that The situation in our society is the same as what the picture portrays. More thoughts can be figured out from this picture From this picture we find (begin to realize) that. The picture conveys an imp

12、ortant message to us. The picture conveys a deep message that What the picture conveys to us is that 意义延伸意义延伸（Icon-Index）a. 常量主语推进模式常量主语推进模式 例例1：For my part, this picture intends to tell us how to pursue success in reality, with the tree standing for those in difficulties and the two bulidings for barriers and frustrations. On our way to success, we may be hindered by obstacles. But if we persist and never give up, we can reach to success in the end just as the tree does in the picture.