【英语一】英语【大作文作品】万能模版.doc

-! 这个大作文万能模板为本人经过补课老师所给和作文书中好句自创的万能模板，全国独一无二 而不是为了应付大家从网上下来的模板，那种模板是高水平的模板，适用于英语水平相当于大学老师的水平，可以根据具体语境和题目进行第二次写作 而我们在考试中往往没有他们的时间和经验，更是紧张的很，所以一个简单而又万能模板专门适用于大家英语基础不是很好的同学，可以再短时间内，无论碰到任何图画都能运用自如，拿的向我一样的高分17分 请大家务必将这个大作文模板背下来，反复背写，这样英语和我一样63分不是梦 此大作文是本人13年考试写的作文模板，里面把替换词放了进去，到时候只需要把红色的替换词换到另一个看图作文里面，就可以应用。 此作文是自己根据老师提供的作文好句好段，和一些作文中的经典语句整合而成，经过我不下50遍的背写（每天背写一遍），反复推敲研究，研究出一种适用于各种类型的看图作文万能模板，而不是网上流传的万能模板还需要思考，还需要替换很多词，而且遇到中性的主题无从下笔，我们补课班老师最后几天才给我们3个万能模板，适用于社会好现象，社会不好现象，中等型的选择现象，例如13年大作文为选择为主题，这个就是中等选择现象，因为万能模板老师提供的非常晚，并且他们的万能模板需要三个，考试的时候根本不可能把这3个模板运用自如的背写上去，所以可以参考我给你们的模板，这个模板好记，早早背写，考试的时候能在30分钟内，写出一篇没有修改的好文章，至少你的英语能多提7分左右 此作文已经经过补课老师批阅，已经校对完毕，老师说这个作文能给16分，请大家放心使用，这个作文我在13年的考试中大作文打了17分，这已经是最高分了，但是我的字也是经过每天反复背写，最后即公整，又没有修改，请你们做到这一点。 此作文只需要修改几处关键词，其他的什么都不用动，大概在250字左右，有人说200就够，但是最好还是多写一点，不会扣分，要不你写200字在卷面上，老师一看就是写不满，也就一半左右，所以很容易被老师认为你没有东西写了，所以尽量和我的作文模板字数差不多。 【加粗】下划线的词为看图描述，这个肯定要换，大家要记住，简单描述，只需要一句话，而不是把这个图描述的明明白白，这样错了 就扣分，就像我这样简单的描述用一句话，即使错了也扣不了一分，因为你已经简单描述了，不需要过多描述，要不会浪费很多时间还有很容易出错。 （括号加粗）的字为替换词 4处,其中有3处前面stand，树立的意思，就是说要树立一种健康合理的生产食品观念，这就是一种我创造的万能套词用法， 例如说学习， 我们就可以说 树立一种努力学习的观念 就业， 树立一种平等的就业理念 文化， 树立一种文化交流的观念 养老， 树立一种敬爱老人的理念 这些就是你需要自己去修改的,如果不用此方法,看到图,你就真的无从下手了,不知道确定什么主题,也不知道主题词是什么, 这也就老师给的模板的弊病,有模板,你找不到主题,你也套不进去, 所以这里大家一定要多多练习,看到图,先想到他的核心词是什么 例如,勇气,诚实,交流,尊老爱幼,守信,自由等等 完了 加上 Stand a honest view 树立一种诚实的理念，大家看到作文图，先想到他要表达的一个词是什么，毕竟每一个图，正常人都能用一个汉语词来概括，把他变成英语，套进去 在套进我的万能模板，17分到手 38分过线，剩下的即使蒙都能过了（打个比方，可别真蒙啊） 斜体字the loss用于不好的社会现象 斜体字the surge用于好的社会现象 中等的选择时，可以省去不写 2014年英语一考研英语作文模板A（积极） The topic reflected in the above scenario has triggered an avalanche of mixed reactions and debates not only in friend circles but in the blogosphere（博客容易让人眼前一亮）, which boils down to how valued it is to modern society. As is depicted in the illustration, ________（描述图画）in today’s Chinese society. Whoever, I believe, gains an insight into the connotation of the scenario will absolutely plunge into deep reverie. This picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that ________（主旨）provides us with ballast for our daily life. There are profound objective reasons and subjective reasons in appearance of this kind of phenomena. As is generally known to all, in order to achieve greatness in a particular field--whether in arts, education, economy, science or politics ---any individual must contribute more energy to________（主旨）. Admittedly, whether we have the consciousness of________（主旨）or not also depends on a ton of objective factors, including our personality, schedule, circle of friends, living sphere, and financial situation etc. If A equals completion of the valuable things, then the formula may be A equals X plus Y plus Z, with X being work, Y Leisure, and Z ________（主旨）.One example that immediately comes to our mind is the typical ----------（主旨）representative, ________ ( 具有代表性的人名，也可以写几个名人). If he hadnt done this, he would not achieve such brilliant achievements that the gazes of people are entirely attracted now. As the very significant foundation of human civilization advances, ________（主旨）brings us a sense of enjoyment as well as spiritual enhancement, keeps us abreast of the time and even endows life and society with unique meanings----All of these serve to enrich the society. In the final analysis, to________（主旨） is to gain the capacity to elevate the self-realm to a certain height and replenish the society---and I would be hard-pressed to imagine a worthier destination. 这个月，上图所反映的话题无论是在朋友圈还是博客圈都引发了铺天盖地的争论和各种反应，归根到底，这显示出这个话题对于现代社会是多么有价值啊！来看这幅有象征意义的图画。像图中所描绘的一样，________（描述图画）。我相信，无论谁看到这幅内涵图，都会陷入深深的沉思。 这幅图引人深思的地方在于她在努力说服她的观众：________（主旨）为我们的日常生活提供了压舱物（也可以把：后面这句去掉重新写主旨句）。这种现象的出现有其深刻的客观原因和主观原因。众所周知，为了在特定领域塑造辉煌--不论是在艺术、科学抑或政治领域---任何人都必须耗费更多的精力在___________（主旨）上。诚然，我们是否有__________（主旨）意识，也是由一系列客观因素决定的，而这与我们的性格、计划、朋友圈、生活圈、经济状况（这些客观因素根据主旨变化）息息相关。 如果A等于完成有价值的事情，那么公式就是“A=X+Y+Z”,其中X是工作，Y是休闲，Z则是___________（主旨）。我们立刻能想到的例子就是（主旨的）的代表__________人名，有代表性的名人即可）。如果他没有做这件事情，也不会取得今天这样受人瞩目的辉煌成就。 __________（主旨）作为人类文明进步的重要基础给我们带来愉悦感，使我们的精神得到升华，使我们紧跟时代潮流，她甚至赋予生命和社会以独特意义，而所有的这一切都有利于社会充实。总而言之，__________（主旨）是为了提升自我境界、充实社会---我很难想象一个比这个更有价值的目标了。 2014年英语一考研英语作文模板B（消极） The topic reflected in the above scenario has triggered an avalanche of mixed reactions and debates not only in friend circles but in the blogosphere, which boils down to how valued it is to modern society. Look at this picture figuratively portrayed by the artist:__________ (描述图画).Whoever gains an insight into the connotation of the scenario will absolutely plunge into deep reverie. Admittedly, both objective and subjective reasons may account for the crisis of the _______（主旨）. On the one hand, with the quickening pace of modern life and the fierce competition of society, there is an increasing number of people who sink into the state of a flurry distress, losing values under the pressure of work and living, and consequently, sliding into misdoings unwittingly. On the other hand, it is those that are ______（主旨） and their likes who are to blame, with paying inadequate attention to improving their personal cultivation. No wonder in the tug-of-war between _________（主旨相反的）and _________（主旨）, it is, more often than not, that the former will get the upper hand. More often than not, each of us makes our own weather and determines the color of the skies in the universe that we inhabit. Just as God（这是典型英式思维）trains and corrects us to make us better, so too must those as educators, families, communities, businesses, governments, and religious organizations actively join hands in indoctrinating those that are_________（主旨） and equipping us with the intelligence and common sense to distinguish right from wrong. Being individuals, we should effectively enforce our ability to discipline ourselves and_________（主旨） through practices in every ordinary moment of our life. In the final analysis, anyone who is blind to this point may pay a heavy price. 上图所反映的话题无论是在朋友圈还是博客圈都引发了铺天盖地的争论和各种反应，归根到底，这显示出这个话题对于现代社会是多么有价值啊！来看这幅有象征意义的图画，_________描述图画)。无论是谁看到这个场景都会陷入沉思！ 要主观和客观两个原因也许能解释清楚信心缺乏的危机：随着现代生活的快节奏和激烈的竞争，越来越多的人陷入了在工作和生存压力下仓皇窘迫、情绪波动、价值观缺失（价值观缺失是任何坏事的原因），不知不觉的去做一些不好的事情（这儿用不好的事情代替主旨了，如果想多填，改为主旨）；另一方面，_________（主旨）还要归咎于缺乏自信的这类人本身不重视提高自身修养的主观原因。难怪在_________（主旨相反的）和_________（主旨）的拔河战中，前者往往经常占上风。 通常，在我们居住的世界中，每个人都在构造自己的天气，决定自己天空的颜色。就像上帝训导我们，纠正我们的过错，让我们成为更好的人， 作为教育工作者、家长、社区、公司以及宗教组织的也一样，必须积极的联起手来教导_________（主旨），让我们具有辨别是非的智慧和常识。作为个人，我们应该有效地尽我们最大能力严格要求自己，在每天的日常生活中的实践中_________（主旨）。最后，任何人忽略这一点，都将付出沉重的代价。 2014年英语一考研英语作文模板A仿写（积极） The topic reflected in the above scenario has triggered an avalanche of mixed reactions and debates not only in friend circles but in the blogosphere, which boils down to how valued it is to modern society. As is depicted in the illustration, a tasty and nutritious “hotpot” is a metaphor reflecting the cultural diversity in today’s Chinese society. Whoever, I believe, gains an insight into the connotation of the scenario will absolutely plunge into deep reverie. This picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that cultural integration provides us with ballast for our daily life. There are profound objective reasons and subjective reasons in appearance of this kind of phenomena. As is generally known to all, in order to achieve greatness in a particular field--whether in arts, education, economy, science or politics ---any individual must contribute more energy to learning foreign culture. Admittedly, whether we have the consciousness of cultural integration or not also depends on a ton of objective factors, including our personality, schedule, circle of friends, living sphere, and financial situation etc. If A equals completion of the valuable things, then the formula may be A equals X plus Y plus Z, with X being work, Y Leisure, and Z learning foreign culture. One example that immediately comes to our mind is the typical cultural integration representative, Obama. If he hadnt done this, he would not achieve such brilliant achievements that the gazes of people are entirely attracted now. As the very significant foundation of human civilization advances, cultural integration brings us a sense of enjoyment as well as spiritual enhancement, keeps us abreast of the time and even endows life and society with unique meanings----All of these serve to enrich the society. In the final analysis, to learn foreign culture is to gain the capacity to elevate the self-realm to a certain height and replenish the society---and I would be hard-pressed to imagine a worthier destination. 这个月，上图所反映的话题无论是在朋友圈还是博客圈都引发了铺天盖地的争论和各种反应，归根到底，这显示出这个话题对于现代社会是多么有价值啊！来看这幅有象征意义的图画。像图中所描绘的一样，这是一个用美味又营养的火锅来比喻反映当今中国社会文化融合现象的。我相信，无论谁看到这幅内涵图，都会陷入深深的沉思。 这幅图引人深思的地方在于她在努力说服她的观众：文化融合为我们的日常生活提供 了压舱物。这种现象的出现有其深刻的客观原因和主观原因。为了在特定领域塑造辉煌--不论是在艺术、科学抑或政治领域---任何人都必须耗费更多的精力在学习他国文化上。我们是否有文化融合的意识，也是由一系列客观因素决定的，而这与我们的个性、计划、朋友圈、生活圈、经济状况息息相关。 如果A等于完成有价值的事情，那么公式就是“A=X+Y+Z”,其中X是工作，Y是休闲，Z则是学习其他民族的文化。我们立刻能想到的例子就是典型的文化融合的代表奥巴马。如果他没有做这件事情，也不会取得今天这样受人瞩目的辉煌成就。文化融合作为人类文明进步的重要基础给我们带来愉悦感，使我们的精神得到升华，使我们紧跟时代潮流，她甚至赋予生命和社会以独特意义，而所有的这一切都有利于社会充实。总而言之，学习其他民族文化是为了提升自我境界、充实社会---我很难想象一个比这个更有价值的目标了。 2014年英语一考研英语作文模板B仿写（消极） The topic reflected in the above scenario has triggered an avalanche of mixed reactions and debates not only in friend circles but in the blogosphere, which boils down to how valued it is to modern society. Look at this picture figuratively portrayed by the artist: the player thinks the task is extremely difficult as the goal is quite small compared with the huge keeper, while the latter fears that the goal is too enormous for him to keep. Whoever gains an insight into the connotation of the scenario will absolutely plunge into deep reverie. Admittedly, both objective and subjective reasons may account for the crisis of the lack of self-confidence. On the one hand, with the quickening pace of modern life and the fierce competition of society, there is an increasing number of people who sink into the state of a flurry distress, losing values under the pressure of work and living, and consequently, sliding into misdoings unwittingly. On the other hand, it is those that are lacking in self-confidence and their likes who are to blame, with paying inadequate attention to improving their personal cultivation. No wonder in the tug-of-war between fragility and self -confidence, it is, more often than not, that the former will get the upper hand. More often than not, each of us makes our own weather and determines the color of the skies in the universe that we inhabit. Just as God trains and corrects us to make us better, so too must those as educators, families, communities, businesses, governments, and religious organizations actively join hands in indoctrinating those that are lacking in self-confidence and equipping us with the intelligence and common sense to distinguish right from wrong. Being individuals, we should effectively enforce our ability to discipline ourselves and build self-confidence through practices in every ordinary moment of our life. In the final analysis, anyone who is blind to this point may pay a heavy price. 上图所反映的话题无论是在朋友圈还是博客圈都引发了铺天盖地的争论和各种反应，归根到底，这显示出这个话题对于现代社会是多么有价值啊！来看这幅有象征意义的图画，球员认为这项任务异常艰巨，因为球门是那么小而守门员却长得高大威猛;恰恰相反，守门员这时候却害怕球门太大而自己太渺小了，很难守住球门。无论是谁看到这个场景都会陷入沉思！ 要主观和客观两个原因也许能解释清楚信心缺乏的危机：随着现代生活的快节奏和激烈的竞争，越来越多的人陷入了在工作和生存压力下仓皇窘迫、情绪波动、价值观缺失，不知不觉的去做一些不好的事情；另一方面，缺乏自信还要归咎于缺乏自信的这类人本身不重视提高自身修养的主观原因。难怪在脆弱和自信的拔河战中，前者往往经常占上风。 通常，在我们居住的世界中，每个人都在构造自己的天气，决定自己天空的颜色。就像上帝训导我们，纠正我们的过错，让我们成为更好的人， 作为教育工作者、家长、社区、公司以及宗教组织的也一样，必须积极的联起手来教导缺乏自信的人，让我们具有辨别是非的智慧和常识。作为个人，我们应该有效地尽我们最大能力严格要求自己，在每天的日常生活中的实践中建立自信。最后，任何人忽略这一点，都将付出沉重的代价。 一、通用模板 模板一（社会批判类） How satirical / compelling / profound / instructive / enlightening a drawing it is! Graphically and profoundly , this sketch portrays a scene in which 一句话描述图片，leading us to ponder over this kind of current . What makes the drawing practically imperative is the conspicuous tendency / increasingly common phenomenon that 概括所揭示的趋势。 So long as we consider its pivotal function for constructing a harmonious society ,nothing can be more vital than the issue of 主题词，and tracing back to its original cause .True that modern lifestyle ushered by the booming economy all around China enables the masses to raise their living standard promptly , yet abundant substances come at a cost Just like Robert Barnard , a celebrated American economic strategist , said : Desire for quick success , mentality that ’ s superficial and impetuous , as well as lack of deliberation have become an epidemic of modern society . Fortunately , when referring to transform a 主题形容词 atmosphere at this critical phase of China , we still stand the chance to take concrete actions by promoting full social involvement . To strengthen the construction / inherit the transcendent traits of 主题词 , the priority of all should be focusing on a favorable organizational and educational consensus advocated by the school and government . In the next place, it is also based on every member’s unyielding efforts and conscious action . 这是一幅多么具有讽刺意味的 / 引人注目的 /发人深省的 / 启发人的 / 令人启迪的图画！它生动而深刻地描绘了一个关于 的场景。这幅图片之所以有着迫切的现实意义，是由于最近兴起了 的趋势 / 最近越来越司空见惯的一种 的现象。 当我们致力于构建和谐社会时，考虑 的问题是最重要的。诚然，遍及全国的繁荣 经济所开启的现代生活方式使得人民大众显著提高了生活水平，但是物质财富的得来是付出了巨大代价的。正如美国著名经济战略家Robert Barnard 所说，急功近利、付钱浮躁、缺乏思考的社会现象成为现代社会的一种流行病。幸运地是，在如何转变 的社会氛围问题上，我们仍然在这个紧要关头还有机会切实动员社会的大力行动。 加强 的建设，首先应由学校或政府集中精力创建有效机制、倡导社会共识；此外，它还需要每个社会成员的不懈努力和自觉行动。 模板二（青年成长类） How satirical / compelling / profound / instructive / enlightening a drawing it is ! Graphically and profoundly ,this sketch portrays a scene in which 一句话描述图片， leading us to ponder over this kind of current . What makes the drawing practically imperative is the conspicuous tendency / increasingly common phenomenon that 概括所揭示的趋势。 Habit / mentality / belief of 主题词 serves as a booster for the folks to acquire successes and felicities , which are everybody’ s lifelong pursuits whether they are aiming at serving the society or achieving individual eudemonia . 有位中国哲人神秀曾说过，一个人在内心修养的路上即使是前进了一小步，他的生活也将得到一个崭新的世界。Exactly like a Chinese philosopher Shenxiu / some distinguished sage / a celebrated philosopher said , even an diminutive advance on ones journey of intrinsic tutelage will bring about a completely mint world as the fruit. Distinctly , self-motivation as well as emulating the character of 主题词 from persons that are more prominent will definitely consummate our personality and improve our accomplishments . Furthermore , when it comes to the great rejuvenation of China , nothing can be more vital than the national trait of 主题词 . To strengthen the construction / inherit the transcendent traits of 主题词 , the priority of all should be focusing on a favorable organizational and educational consensus advocated by