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1、名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -续写素材整理What is a climax of a story.（什么是故事高潮.）More tension=satisfying climax 文学故事中的高潮（ climax ）- 故事的主要场景（ key scene ）也通常是故事的转折点（ turning point）,是指故事达到最紧急或扣人心弦的那一部分；高潮有时候是剧情中的 危机 点；有时候 , 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点 , 发生了一些事情 , 或者主角必需做出打算 , 从而导致一个结果或其他；我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候经常

2、用下面的图表来表示故事情节；常见故事高潮示例：1. A little girl has been searching for her lost dog. All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from around the corner, and she looks around to see . . . 2. Kevin has worked very hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The coach has posted a list of this years team membe

3、rs on his office door. Kevin walks forward to look at the list . . . . 3. Marys parents have been discussing whether or not to move to another state. They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about their decision . . . 4. Lois has performed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiou

4、sly to hear the names of the winners. The announcer says, And first place goes to . . . 文学名著中的一些故事高潮1. The deaths of Romeo who kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead and Juliet who kills herself when she awakes and sees Romeo dead. Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare （罗密欧和朱丽叶,莎士比亚）2. When Gaston a

5、nd the townspeople come to attack the beast, and Be lle admits her love for the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney （美女与野兽,迪士尼）3. In The Three Little Pigs, suspense builds up until the confrontation between the third pig and the wolf. This confrontation is the climax.（三只小猪）How to create a climax of

6、a story. 如何营造故事的高潮？方法 1.增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式；冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃；1）角色之间的冲突 人物观点差异, 竞争需要等 a hotel with a 如： 2022 年 11 月浙江英语高考：On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a house 1 细心整

7、理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 1 页,共 6 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -续写素材整理with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there. David and I became nervous. 开车找旅社 - 白费无功- 母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院-David 和我倍感紧急,心有不悦 （母子的观点不一）2 角色与环境之间的冲突如： 2022 年 6 月浙江英

8、语高考：Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf: quickly catching up with him. Macs heart j umped. , he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minu

9、te later, . Then it , tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back Mac 骑车独自行,路遇饿狼,与之搏斗,险象环生；（人（角色）3 时间依靠的进展：决策变得紧急- 狼（环境）大战）如： 2022 年 6 月浙江英语高考：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Get into the car. Paul shouted at Mac. Mac jumped off the bike and slid

10、into the car without delay as the wolf was just two steps away and was about to tear Mac into pieces. What a narrow escape. 骑车突停面前- 急喊上车-Max 上车避险 - 饿狼近在咫尺（此情此景,刻不容缓）4 增加的障碍：人物角色必需克服 挑战 , 以达到他们的目标例如： 2022 年 6 月高考 But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and

11、got lost. We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 小兔突现 - 马儿受惊- 草原迷路（障碍1） - 天色渐黑（障碍2） - 又累又饿（障碍3） - 心理恐慌（障碍4）方法 2. 放大内心冲突放大内心冲突（你的角色的内心斗争）也有助于建立一个高度紧急和不确定的时刻；现在我们在来看高考读后续写中的内心冲突是如何表达的：2022 年 10 月浙江高考： Immediately, an absolute darkn

12、ess ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldnt help crying, Hadnt I quarrelled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldnt be trapped in this awful place, confronted wit

13、h the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.夫妇争执- 独自行走- 荒野走散- 夜色渐黑- 独处森林- 阴森恐惧- 懊悔莫及（内心冲突的刻画）内心独白 （往昔对比+虚拟语气使用+旁边描写是常见技巧之一）方法 3. 使用环境描写增加不确定性充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用,详细方法可以看上期读后续写微技能；当故事角色在遇到困难时候,我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗,恐惧和不祥；强化环境描写增强了高潮

14、元素；我们感受到了紧急的倍增；例 1： Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest 黑暗 . Even worse, the temperature suddenly dropped dramatically. 冰冷）例 2： It didnt take long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness（黑暗）. Her rasping breath steamed（冰冷） in the moonlight and her throat was parched from thirst. 如

15、何 通 过 场 景 营 造 （ mood）Technique 1: Personification 拟人 Description/purpose:Gives an object the characteristics of a living thing, bringing it to lifeExamples ：The flowers nodded. 2 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 2 页,共 6 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -续写素材

16、整理Snowflakes danced. Thunder grumbled. Fog crept in. The wind howled. The haunted house seemed to stare at me, beckoning me towards the door. Technique 2: simile 明喻 Description/purpose: Similes likens something to something else giving a more detailed description Examples ：The night sky was as dark

17、as the deepest ocean. The stars sparkled like diamonds. The snake moved like a ripple on a pond. Technique 3: metaphor 暗喻 Description/purpose: Metaphors say that something is something else, giving the description more power Examples ：A wave of terror washed over him. Technique 4:Vivid adjectives 生动

18、的形容词Description/purpose: To make the story more interesting and vivid by using more imaginative descriptions, sometimes in a list Examples ：Gleaming, glistening, whispery flakes of snow Technique 5: Negative description 否定描述Description/purpose: To tell the reader what is not there is an effective wa

19、y of showing how unpleasant, comfortless a place is Examples ：There was no cushion, no carpet, no warmth, no light and no comfort. Technique 6: Camera-pan and zoom 摄影 -全景 +放大 Description/purpose: To use the idea of how a film director works, you can give a wider view then focus in on one detail Exam

20、ples ：From the withering trees he looked past the littered farmyard, across to the decrepit hovel. Its doors hung sadly awry, the handle broken. Technique 7: Nouns for details 细节名词Description/purpose: Scenes are filled with things that we see and therefore uses lots of nouns, even lists of nouns to

21、convey what is there. Examples ：The rooms were crowded with lanterns fastened on oak paneled walls, tables laid with silver candlesticks and goblets. Technique 8: Senses（感官）Description/purpose: All of our senses become aware in a new situation or place. Your reader needs to know how your character a

22、re feeling. 3 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 3 页,共 6 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -续写素材整理Examples ：Wafts of salt-laden air were in her nostrils as the skittery sand on her feet led her to the edge of the waves. G o o ds e t t i n g d e s c r i p t i o

23、nf o ra p p r e c i a t i o n 佳 “ 景 ” 赏 析 1. The house smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies. 2. The sun kept dipping down into the ocean and the lights came on at the harbor, casting sudden shadows on the ground, illuminating the faces

24、that were just a second ago silhouettes. The sky was golden and purple, the ocean a darker shade of violet. 3. The sun had set, but a faint pastel haze lingered in the mid-summer sky. 4. They rolled up the path, tree branches raking the windshield like angry wardens. 5. Outside, the air filled with

25、cricket noise, as the sun reddened in its descent. 6. A restaurant overlooking a starlit night sprang to my imagination like something out of an illuminated manuscript from the late Middle Ages. 7. The moon went slowly down in loveliness; she departed into the depth of the horizon, and long veil-lik

26、e shadows crept up the sky through which the stars appeared. 8. All brightness was gone, leaving nothing. We stepped out of the tent onto nothing. Sledge and tent were there, Estraven stood beside me, but neither he nor I cast any shadow. There was dull light all around, everywhere. When we walked o

27、n the crisp snow no shadow showed the footprint. We left no track. Sledge, tent, himself, myself: nothing else at all. No sun, no sky, no horizon, no world. 9. Night had fallen fast upon the land. No more than an hour ago the sky was painted with hues of red, orange and pink, but all colour had fade

28、d leaving only a matt black canvas with no stars to be looked upon. 10 It would be a cold moonless night. The sky was dark and low, the air so chilled it hurt to breathe. Already the ground was laid white with frost and any water that had been liquid under the winter sun had become ice. 如 何 写 好 读 后

29、续 写 的 开 头1. An adverb Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass. Joyfully he skipped up the street. Para 1： 202210 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录Para1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. （时间副词连接 +环境描写）2. An adj. phrase Curious to know

30、what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave. Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot. 202210 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face. （并列心情形容词） 202210 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录Para 2: It was

31、daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. （状态形容词 +as/though 引导的倒装句）202206 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录Para 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry

32、 to stop my horse. 心情形容词 +从句 202206 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 3. A participle -ing or ed word Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door. Exhausted, he was

33、glad the race was finally over. 4 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 4 页,共 6 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -续写素材整理202210 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录 Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another

34、 night. （现在分词 +心情形容词）202210 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录 Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.（现在分词 +状态形容词）4. A conjunctionAs he walked , he whistled Although he was afraid , he jumped right in. 5. A prepositional phraseAt the end o

35、f the lane he suddenly stopped. At the sight of the snake , the little girl screamed at the top of her voice. 6. A dialogue or a monologue“Let s see who gets there first. Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny. “Hold on tight. My father yelled. We just finished bucking in as the c

36、oaster jerked into motion. This was my first roller coaster ride. 202206 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录 car. Paul shouted at Mac. 7. A character Para 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Get into the Mark is a studious boy who loves reading. His classmates often tease him for being too hardworking and they ca

37、ll him Mr. Smart. One afternoon, while studying at home8. An emotionThe moment she saw how she did for her Science test, tears started welling up in Tina s eyes and falling down her cheeks.9. A settingI closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves . Gently opening m

38、y eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach. The cave was dark and everything was silent. I couldnt even see m y hand in front of my face. I knew this adventure was going to be something that I would never forget.202211 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录Para 2: We drove through several states and sa

39、w lots of great sights along the way. I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. （视觉 +环境描写 +拟人）10. An actionFurry started wagging his tail and running around in circles from the drawer. Furry was all ready

40、 for his evening walk. when he saw his master taking a leash out 202211 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录 Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom. （动作描写 +问句连接）11. Sound effectsBOOM, CRASH. The wind was howling outside of my

41、 house. We were having a terrible thunder storm. I was very scared. 12. A questionHave you ever been on a self-driving trip. Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer. Why does trouble always follow me around. Do I have a kick me sign on my back or something.5 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - -

42、 - - - - - - - - - - - 第 5 页,共 6 页 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 精品学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -续写素材整理其他神态 动作 描写 :David excitedly narrated our experience, eyes blazing with enthusiasm. Worries came to his forehead when he explained the trouble. A smile lifted the corner of his mouth when it came to camping.6 细心整理归纳 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 6 页,共 6 页 - - - - - - - - -