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1、书面表达反思书面表达反思-如何运用较高级词汇如何运用较高级词汇黑龙江省大庆市第五十六中学黑龙江省大庆市第五十六中学 荆棘荆棘 2016.1.8 高考英语书面表达考查考生对语言的综合高考英语书面表达考查考生对语言的综合运用能力。应在了解最高档次书面表达的运用能力。应在了解最高档次书面表达的具体要求的前提下开展对书面表达题型的具体要求的前提下开展对书面表达题型的备考训练，做到有的放矢，以提高得分率。备考训练，做到有的放矢，以提高得分率。评分标准对最高档次的书面表达的要求主评分标准对最高档次的书面表达的要求主要有：应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语要有：应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些

2、许错误，但为尽力法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；有效使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。由此可见，那种虽然内容要点齐全，紧凑。由此可见，那种虽然内容要点齐全，但句式单一、缺乏高级和语法结构的书面但句式单一、缺乏高级和语法结构的书面表达因无闪光点而无法取得高分。表达因无闪光点而无法取得高分。 较高级词汇的选择和运用，不仅能为文较高级词汇的选择和运用，不仅能为文章增色，而且能体现作者的综合语言能力。章增色，而且能体现作者的综合语言能力。在解答书面表达题时，尽可能运用较高级在解答书面表达

3、题时，尽可能运用较高级词汇是增添得分亮点的一个有效途径。首词汇是增添得分亮点的一个有效途径。首先，应明确较高级词汇并非都是指课本上先，应明确较高级词汇并非都是指课本上从未出现过的词语，更不是在备考的有限从未出现过的词语，更不是在备考的有限时间里刻意去背大量的课外词汇。这里的时间里刻意去背大量的课外词汇。这里的较高级词汇，指的是那种能够化平淡为不较高级词汇，指的是那种能够化平淡为不凡，给评卷人一种与众不同的印象的词语。凡，给评卷人一种与众不同的印象的词语。【实例分析一】1. Li Hua likes to help others and he is liked by all the people

4、 around him.2. Li Hua is always ready to help others and he is popular with the people around him.【实例分析二】【实例分析二】 1. A new building is being built in our school. 2. A new building is under construction in our school.【实例分析三】【实例分析三】1. This picture makes me think of those who succeed in poor conditions.

5、 2. This picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. 【实例分析四】【实例分析四】1.It is our duty to use water wisely by recycling water in our daily life.2. It is everyones responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling water in our daily life.【实例分析五】【实例分析五】1. We hope that you

6、 will accept our invitation if you are not busy.2. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.【实例分析六】【实例分析六】 1. We all miss you and thank you for what you did for us. 2. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.【实例分析七】【实例分析七】 1. I advised him to stop

7、 smoking, but he didnt take my advice. 2. I advised him to stop smoking, but he turned a deaf ear to me.【实例分析八】【实例分析八】1. Our class is a happy family, which is made up of 22 boys and 18 girls.2. Our class is a happy family, which consists of 22 boys and 18 girls.【实例分析九】【实例分析九】1. The mother, who loves

8、 her children very much, works hard day and night.The mother, who is devoted to her children, works hard day and night.【实例分析十】【实例分析十】 1. Im not free now, because I have a lot of work to do.2. Im as busy as a bee, because I have endless work to do.【实战演练大看台】【实战演练大看台】 写作任务写作任务 据报道，现代人由于工作忙碌，很据报道，现代人由于工

9、作忙碌，很多人无暇读书。请你根据以下要求写多人无暇读书。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语短文，以便发表在校报英文一篇英语短文，以便发表在校报英文版面上。版面上。1.谈谈读书的好处（至少两点）；谈谈读书的好处（至少两点）；2.号召人们多读书。号召人们多读书。 注意：词数注意：词数100左右。左右。参考范文 Quite a few people are reported to devote little time to reading in their spare time because of their endless work. A man, in my opinion, may usually

10、be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps. A good book is often compared to a loyal friend, who never turns his back upon us when we are in unfavorable conditions. Besides, books provide a great deal of valuable information we need and they introduce us into the best society.

11、 The more we read, the more we are equipped for life. Read more today, and we will make a difference in our life tomorrow.【亮点评价亮点评价】 从文章选词的角度看，得分亮点之处较多，很好地完成从文章选词的角度看，得分亮点之处较多，很好地完成了写作任务。其中的较高级词汇有：了写作任务。其中的较高级词汇有：quite a few（避免（避免a lot of/many），），devoteto（舍弃（舍弃spend），），endless（不用（不用much/a lot of/plenty of），），keep sb. company（替代（替代make friends with），），loyal（弃用（弃用good）等。另）等。另外，短语外，短语be compared to, turn ones back upon, in unfavourable conditions等短语的恰当运用，也为文章等短语的恰当运用，也为文章增色不少。文章最后一段选用增色不少。文章最后一段选用the more, the more，be equipped for, make a difference等较高级词汇，也等较高级词汇，也确保了文章顺利挺进较高的档次。确保了文章顺利挺进较高的档次。