（整理版高中英语）高考英语书面表达0202图画式练与评（1）.doc

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1、高考英语书面表达02-02：图画式练与评1假定你是某生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你和你的朋友们上星期六在“the Fairy Lake Park观光时的所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。及发表个人感想。2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；50左右短文标题已经给出，不计入总词数；参考词汇：告示牌signMind Your Behavior in Public Places 讲 评公民道德话题的看图写作，均是现实生活中的片段展示，探讨面对公民道德缺失的社会现象个人的感想，即公民道德缺失原因与解决方法，考生应该有话可说。本篇是看图作文，属于先叙后议的文体。认真看图，结合文字和图画，确

2、立所要表达的主题是什么。本篇的主题就是标题所表达的内容“Mind Your Behavior in Public Places，无需考生多想。围绕确立的主题，仔细看图和文字，列出文字提示和图中的要点。文字提示中的要点：“我和“我的朋友们上星期六在“the Fairy Lake Park观光。这是交代事情发生的时间和地点遣词造句注意多重表达1.Last Sunday, my friends and I went travelling in the Fairy Lake Park.Last Sunday, I ,as well as my friends went to pay a visit t

3、o the Fairy Lake Park.Last Sunday, together with my friends ,went sightseeing in the Fairy Lake Park.Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.2.The park was full of fresh air and beauty of spring . The sun was shining. Birds were singing beautifullyThere was fresh air a

4、nd beauty of spring here and there in the park with sun shining and birds were heard singing beautifully.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.3.A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly. They didnt realize that there was

5、somebody else around. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake without noticing the sign “Dont throw rubbish into the lake.A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there was nobody else nearby. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake and they seemed not to

6、 notice the sign “Dont throw rubbish into the lake.A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there was nobody else nearby. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, turning a blind eye to the sign “Dont throw rubbish into the lake.A young couple in a boat were eat

7、ing, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering nearby.美与丑形成鲜明比照。连贯成篇(注意红体字局部)Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of

8、 freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When we were enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. To my surprise, a young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. Whats worse

9、, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering nearby. What a shame!发表个人感想时可适当发挥，但内容要符合逻辑，层次要清楚，衔接要自然。围绕漫画主题自拟感想可以按照这样的思路去自拟感想：这对夫妇的行为给了“我什么印象如果人人都这样会造成什么后果我们应该怎么做总结性话语。遣词造句注意多重表达1.What the couple did made a bad impression on me. What the couple

10、did left me in thought.I had no choice but to take what the couple did into consideration.Such behavior did left me deep in thought.2.If we do what the couple did as was shown in the above picture, all lakes will be seriously polluted and soon turned into huge dustbins.If all people visiting the Fai

11、ry Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be seriously polluted and turned into a huge dustbin sooner or later.If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.3.Littering pollutes the environment; bad manners

12、ruin the beauty of tourist attractions. Dear countrymen,mindyourbehaviorinpublicplaces.I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. For example, make sure to throw rubbish into a dustbin or into our plastic bags and dont make any noise in public places ,please.4.Only in this way can

13、we live harmoniously with nature.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.参考答案Mind Your Behavior in Public PlacesLast Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and bi

14、rds singing. When we were enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. To my surprise, a young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. Whats worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ig

15、noring the noticeable sign “No Littering nearby. What a shame!Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. For e

16、xample, make sure to throw rubbish into a dustbin or into our plastic bags and dont make any noise in public places ,please. Only in this way can we live harmoniously with nature.高考卷官方提供的答案Mind Your Behavior in Public PlacesLast Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness andsurroundings.