高三复习英语写作课件.ppt

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1、 To polish your writing让你的作文让你的作文“亮亮”起来起来Teaching aimswords & phrasessentencepatternspassage?languagestructurecontent书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（第五档（21-2521-25分）分） 完全完成完全完成了试题规定的任务了试题规定的任务: :l准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏l应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇l语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复

2、杂表达方式 所致；具备较强的语言应用能力所致；具备较强的语言应用能力l有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（第四档（16-2016-20分）分） 完成完成了试题规定的任务了试题规定的任务: :l比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容l应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求l语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂语言结构或词汇所致杂语言结构或词汇所致l应用简单

3、的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（第三档（11-1511-15分）分）基本完成基本完成了试题规定的任务。了试题规定的任务。l能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏，能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏， 没有写自己的认识没有写自己的认识l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求l有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解 l应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯整体

4、而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。Lets look at ourselves读读文找错因文找错因?1 Can not use set phrases correctly On (the) one hand On the other hand treat sb as?2 Ignore the part of word wrong English is interest It is no true true English is interesting It is not true?研研读读促提升促提升 Use 时间先后时间先后： First, then, la

5、ter, in the end, eventually,since then, after a while 转折关系：转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless因果关系：因果关系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, due to让步关系：让步关系：though, although, even if, even though, in spite of, as递进关系：递进关系：whats more, in addition, furthermoreon the on

6、e hand on the other hand, 条件关系：条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that 表表 列列 举：举：for example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other words, as follows表表 总总 结：结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated点点练重衔接练重衔接Good afternoon, everyone! The to

7、pic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Somestudents live a very expensive life _. _, they hope to look smart and special. _, they want to win others admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . _

8、, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life . _ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school._, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that make

9、s us respectable. Thank you for listening!A.the reasons why they do so are as follows B. firstly C. last but not least D. whats more E. as far as I am concerned F. SecondlyABCDEF丰富的句式：丰富的句式：( (常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。 e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 感叹句感叹句强

10、调句强调句e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible. e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if

11、necessary.e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.倒装句倒装句省略句省略句with短语短语 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.定语从句定语从句

12、e.g. Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.各种名词性从句各种名词性从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.各种状语从句各种状语从句1. To his surpr

13、ise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名（使用名词性从句）词性从句）2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句使用倒装句)3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is that the litt

14、le girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 练练悟求突破悟求突破5. She walked out of the lab and many stud

15、ents followed her. (使用过去分词使用过去分词)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使使用用V-ing形式形式)7.I wont believe what he says. （no matter what状语从句）状语从句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使（祈使句句+and）Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, th

16、ey went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.道歉信道歉信Dear _, Im truly sorry that _(道歉的原因道歉的原因)The reason is that_(介绍原因介绍原因) Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience Ive caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. yo

17、urs sincerely Li Hua感谢信感谢信Dear _, Im writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _(感谢的原因感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in _(对方给你的具体帮助对方给你的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been _(没有对方的帮助会产没有对方的帮助会产生的后果生的后果)。 Every one agrees that it was you who _(给出给出细节细节)，Again, I would like to express

18、my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. yours sincerely Li Hua正反观点式议论文 Recently weve had a discussion about whether we should- Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧）（观点有分歧） Most of the students are in favour of it, Here are the reasons. First _,Second_,Finally_. Howeverthe others

19、are strongly against it. Their reasons are as follows. In the first place_. Whats more_, In addition_. Personally speaking,the advantages overweigh the disadvantage,for it will do us more harm than good， so I support it.（个人观点）（个人观点）Summary:悟悟读养习惯读养习惯 Homework最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季

20、长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生米，初中生1500米，高中米，高中生生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we give more attention to students health or grades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。 支持方的理由支持方的理由 反对方的理由反对方的理由 你的看法及理由你的看法及理由 1可以促进对可以促进对体育的重视；体育的重视；2可以增强学可以增强学生的体魄；生的体魄；3更有利于提

21、更有利于提高学习效率。高学习效率。 1学生以学习为主，学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前考试成绩决定个人前途；途；2过高的要求学生过高的要求学生难以达到；难以达到；3长跑可能引起感长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥考生自行发挥23点点) 注意：注意：1词数词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。Homework: Finish this composition and hand it in tomorrow.Should we gi

22、ve more attention to students health or grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school stude

23、nts, 2,000.Different people always offer various views. Some people say yes to this activity. They think, for one thing, it can make people pay more attention to physical education; for another, running can improve students health and help them study efficiently so they can have good grades. However

24、, others hold opposite opinions about the activity. They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on their grades in their subjects. Meanwhile, many cant meet the high requirements. Whats worse, some will suffer cold and injuries. In my opinion, its all

25、right for schools to care about students health and carry out the activity step by step. Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.What do you think about the concluding paragraph? Is it a good one? If not, how can you improve it? In my opinion, its all right for schools to pay more attention

26、to students health and carry out the activity step by step. Remember a good body helps make high efficiency. In my opinion, its better for schools to pay more attention to students health and carry out the activity step by step, because a good body helps make high efficiency. Whats more, it not noly helps students get relaxed, but also will benefit them in their future life.