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1、应用文写作之建议信应用文写作之建议信How to write a persuasive letter of advice第二节：书面表达（满分第二节：书面表达（满分2525分分) )假设你是李华，你的朋友假设你是李华，你的朋友MikeMike与父母一道来到中国。他与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：他回一封邮件。要点如下：1. 1. 邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题

2、。2. 2. 提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等视节目主持人的发音等3 3祝愿他学习取得进步。祝愿他学习取得进步。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右左右2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。Dear Mike, I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem. Here is my advice fo

3、r improving your Chinese. Firstly, speak Chinese more, both in and out of class. Try your best to com-municate with your classmates in Chinese. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be. Secondly, in order to improve your listening, pay more atten

4、tion to TV hosts when you are watching TV at home. Im sure you will make great progress sooner or later. In conclusion, I wish you every success with your studies. Yours Faithfully, Li HuaA Letter of AdviceBeginning:Writing purposeMain body:Advice/suggestionsEnding:Wishes/words for encouragement?How

5、 to make your letter of advice more persuasive(说服力说服力)?写作难点：写作难点：Which one is more persuasive and why?AStudents probably should not smoke. First I dont think smoking is healthy, especially for us students. Second, in my view, it is not good to develop the habit of smoking and it is hard to get rid o

6、f it. Lastly, I think cigarettes are very expensive and it costs a lot to buy them. In conclusion, my opinion is that students should not smoke.BThere are three reasons why students should not smoke. First, smoking is bad for ones health. According to the Center for Disease Control, there are early

7、signs of heart disease in young adults who smoke. Second, it is habit-forming. Statistics show that if students start to smoke, they continue to smoke throughout their adult life. Finally, smoking costs a lot of money. One pack of cigarettes costs around RMB 15 So stop before you start!More opinions

8、More facts+For the beginning1. I am writing to express my views concerning2. I am writing to share with you my opinion aboutFor the main body1. I strongly advise / suggest that you should because2. If I were you, I would For the ending1.I hope my advice can be of some help to you.2.I am looking forw

9、ard to your good news. Useful Sentences 假设你是李华，假设你是李华，得知得知你的你的老师老师Mr. HuangMr. Huang喜欢抽烟，并且已经养成长期吸烟的习惯。喜欢抽烟，并且已经养成长期吸烟的习惯。请你给他写一封信，要点如下请你给他写一封信，要点如下：1. 1. 担忧老师的身体健康，建议老师戒烟。担忧老师的身体健康，建议老师戒烟。2. 2. 列出吸烟的危害：吸烟容易引发心脏病等列出吸烟的危害：吸烟容易引发心脏病等3 3祝愿他早日戒烟成功。祝愿他早日戒烟成功。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右左右2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。Aim ClearStructure ProperLanguage PersuasiveSummaryThank you !