2022年高中英语写作扩句 .pdf

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1、扩句的方法在学习扩句法之前，先对学生进行五个简单句句型，并列句和复合句的专项训练，打好基础。扩句是在基本句型的基础上，添 加各种修饰成分，使句子得到扩展，即根据表达的需求 增加定语，状语，同位语等成分，或者 举例子补充细节内容，或者 添加谚语俗语 等。1. We arrived in Sanya.- We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly. (添加副词) 2. I like to make friends with my classmates.- I like to make friends with my classmates, who have

2、 the same interest as mine. ( 添加定语从句 ) 3. We were happy and returned home.- We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.(添加状语从句 )4. I like reading books.- I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.( 通过举例补充细节) 5. We should study

3、 hard.- As we all know, “Practice makes perfect”.So we should study hard. 添加谚语6. I often join in many activities.精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页，共 6 页- I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind. (添加目的状语 ) 三具体应用试题要求： 假设你是一名中学生，请

4、以 My colorful school life 为题，写一篇短文。要求100个字左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总数。要点提示： 1：上课认真听讲2：课后完成作业3：经常参加体育锻炼4：去图书馆阅读I m a high school student and I understand what I m studying for. I have been working hard._May there always be colorful life around my school.学生的习作：I m a high school student and I understand what I

5、m 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页，共 6 页studying for. I have been working hard.I listen to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library.May there always be colorful life around my school.点评：该学生能完整的写出各个要点，没有出现太大的语

6、法错误，表达通顺，单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够，没有到达 100个字左右，字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问题。其次，句子的表达过于平淡无奇，没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇，固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。而且，没有使用连接词，上下文的连接不够顺畅。改良方法：步骤一：列要点把要写的内容要点化，做到要点齐全。1: Listen to the teacher carefully2: finish my homework3:take part in exercise4: often read in the library步骤二：造简单句充分利用五个简单句句型对各个要点进行补充，使精选学习资料 - -

7、- - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页，共 6 页其变成一个完整的句子。每个句子都要注意句子成分的完整性，语法是否正确，说法是否符合英语表达习惯。1: I listen to the teacher carefully in the class.2: I finish my homework after class.3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates.4: I do some reading in the school library.步骤三：扩展句子1: I listen to the

8、 teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.(增加目的状语从句 )2: I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of cake for me. 增加定语从句3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming andplaying badminton etc.举例说明4: I often

9、 do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.增加时间状语从句步骤四：润色句子根据高考海南英语作文评分细则，第五档的要求： 24-25分，至少有 3个复杂句， 2种从句形式，语气自然，敬语得体，无中式英语，语言基本功扎实，词汇丰富。这就要求我们在谴词造句方面下工夫。“ 润色句子包括词语的选精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页，共 6 页择与句型的运用。”比方可以用高级词汇，短语和固定搭配来替换一般词汇。增加习惯表达句式，倒装

10、句，it 当形式主语和形式宾语， 非谓语动词等， 使用多种句式， 使其多样化。1: It is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. (把第一句换成it 当形式主语的用法，使句式多样化。 )2: I take homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me.(增加了 take seriously 和 in t

11、ime 两个短语，是句子更加生动)3: In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc.增加了 in order to do sth目的状语和different kinds of使句子的意思更完整。 4: Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of g

12、oing to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.使用过去分词短语当状语，再添加短语develop the habbit of 使文章增加亮点步骤五：连句成篇“ 过渡词在文章中起着承上启下的作用，它好比一座桥梁，能将全文各句有机地联系在一起，从而使句子不再是精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页，共 6 页孤立的独立的个体。” 使用表示转折，并列，递进，因果关系等连词把句子连接起来，“ 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑” 使上下文更加通顺，逻辑性更

13、强。I m a high school student and I understand what I m studying for. I have been working hard.原文已给First of all(过渡词 ), it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. Whats more( 过 渡 词 ), I take homework seriously and finish it in

14、 time, which is a piece of cake for me. In addition(过渡词 ), In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc. Finally( 过 渡 词 ), Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.May there always be colorful life around my school.原文已给这篇习作要点齐全，字数符合要求，措辞精美，句式多样化，上下文连贯，符合逻辑和英语表达习惯。因此在写作中，我们可以适当地使用扩句法对学生进行写作训练，提高学生的英语表达能力。精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 6 页，共 6 页