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1、精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 一. 用词精确 ;表达地道【北京卷】【试题回放】第一节情形作文20 分 假设你是李美国中同学jeff 将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商支配住在你家；华,请给 Jeff 写一封信,依据下图次序介绍他来中国后的生活支配；留意： 1. 信的开头已为你写好；2.词数不少于60；Dear Jeff, I m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Bei

2、jing.While you are here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school t ogether by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure like the delici

3、ous Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.ll try our best to make your If you have any questions or requests, please let me kn

4、ow. Westay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua 名师点评 这篇文章的特点仍是比较清楚的,第一, 作者依据图画将文章的要点概括完整,内容充实而丰富,结构紧凑,有层次感 过渡自然,令人耳目一新；【安徽卷】【试题回放】;其次,本文没有采纳华丽的辞藻,但用词特别恰当,段落假如你是李华, 美国一所友好学校预备与你们学校共同创办一份中同学英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情形；请你给她写封回信,假如你是李华, 美国一所友好学校预备与你们学校共同创办一份中同学英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情形；请你给她写封回信,

5、主要内容如下：l 表示赞成；l 提出你宠爱的栏目；l 简要说明理由；留意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好；3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；4. 参考栏目：栏目column Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great. And I definitely agree with you on that. Some of the columns which you mentioned in the le

6、tter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, its necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that , “blurt out” is pretty good for Chine

7、se students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment is so cool. The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can Teenagers are t miss it. just fond of the trendy things. Well, I cant list more. I really cant

8、 wait to read that magazine.Yours faithfully, Li Hua 第 1 页 共 5 页名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文； 由于这篇作文的显现, 导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低；认真分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,让人不得不推测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经受,否就这么地道标准的英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的；比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral Engl

9、ish, last but not least, celebrities, catchy 和 trendy 的大胆运用, list, cant wait to 简直是 perfect. 况且文章中没有一 个错误,不管是书写仍是语法；英语能够学到这种程度,不行谓不让人佩服；二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩【北京卷】【试题回放】情形作文 假设你是红星中学高三一班的同学李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班四月十二日去郊 区植树,请依据以下四幅图的先后次序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行 动” 专栏写一篇以 “ Green Action in Our Class 为题的英文稿件；留意：词数不少于

10、60 提示词：郊区 suburbs April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young t

11、rees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it environment. 【名师点评】our duty to protect and beauti

12、fy our 本文是设计奇妙的提纲要点式作文,与环保结合, 立意较好； 文章思路清楚, 要点连贯,在语言的表达上选词新奇,同时运用了 分词短语作状语 等较好的句式表达；【北京卷】【试题回放】开放作文请依据下面提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于 50 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. What an interesting picture.

13、A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think its a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopst

14、icks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we dont need to copy others ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way. 【名师点评】本文是开放性

15、作文,要求考生把握好图画内容,发散表达； 考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人, 要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的冲突性；行文结构特别明晰,同时句式使用得娴熟而精确；三. 复合句为写作增色【全国卷】【试题回放】假定你是李华, 从小宠爱大熊猫 panda,始终通过有关网站 website关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园诞生的大熊猫“苏琳 ”和她的母亲 “白云 ”；现在苏琳即将三岁；请依据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：第 2 页 共 5 页名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 1、 自我介绍 ;2、 庆贺苏琳生日 ;3、 感谢

16、工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照；留意： 1、词数 100 左右 ;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 ;3、开头语已为你写好；例文：Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China. I m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I ve been watching h

17、er grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday.

18、Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua 【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：1.自我介绍 ;2.信息来源 ;3.庆贺生日 ;4.感谢照料 ;5.索取照片 ;6.合适的结尾；这封信格式正确,行文规范,描述有条不紊,称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、终止语均表达到位；文章行文活泼,感情真挚, 语言表述精确,充满着作者因大熊猫得到细心照料而对美方人员的感谢之情,以及期望自己愿望成真,得到照片的希望之情；合了 简洁句和复合句,流畅自然,不露痕迹,的确是一篇佳作；积存卡片英汉互译长短句运用合理,结好词 1.delighted adj. 欣喜的,欢乐

19、的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v. 产生,生育好句 I d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. 我祝愿它生日欢乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感谢之情,琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活；【全国卷 II 】【试题回放】正是你们的努力工作让苏一家宾馆新开业

20、,为吸引外国来宾,期望在互联网上进行宣扬；请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍；主要内容包括：1.地点：距白山入口处 500 米; 2.房间及价格：单人间共 20 间 ,100 元/天;双人间 共 15 间,150 元/天 ;热水淋浴 ;3.餐饮：餐厅 中、西餐 ,咖啡厅 茶、咖啡 ;4. 游泳池：全天免费开放 ; 5.欢迎预定；留意： 1.词数 100 左右,开头语已为你写好 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel. ;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. 500 meters

21、 far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the re

22、staurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself. Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain. 第 3 页 共 5 页名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - -

23、- - - - - - 【名师点评】本文开门见山, 第一点明白主旨；本文最大的特点是应用了许多比较复杂的句式,使文章比较出彩；开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置；which 引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确；总地来说,文章句式精炼,是篇不错的满分作文；积存卡片英汉互译好词 1. provide v. 供应 2. convenience n.便利好句 All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. 全部这些服务都会给你带来便利,并且特别的开心；评析： bring great conveni

24、ence,带来便利；【重庆卷】【试题回放】据报道, 7 岁的美国女孩 Amy Bruce 得知自己身患肺癌 lung cancer后处于极度的痛楚之中,美国抗癌协会 ACS 打算,每当 Amy 收到一封慰问信,就给她增加 3 美分的治疗款；假如你是新华中学的同学李华,请你用英文给 自我介绍 得知的情形 表示勉励 准备为她做什么 祝她早日康复 留意：1. 信的格式已为你写好 2. 信中不得显现你的真实情形；3. 词数 100 左右；4. 请在答题卡上作答；Dear Amy, Amy 写一封慰问信,主要内容包括：I m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of Chi

25、na. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease. I m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three ce

26、nts upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon. Yours, Li Hua 名师点评 本文依照要求, 涵盖了全部要点； 文章使用了高中常见的句式,如 I m sorry to hear that., It is reported t

27、hat. 等,都比较好；作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章,行文自然 而通顺,值得学习；积存卡片 好词 1.realize v.意识到 2.promise v.承诺 3.donate v.捐赠 好句 1. I m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌,给你带来了庞大的痛楚；好处： which 引导限制性定语从句；2. So, stand up and fight against the disease. 因此,顽强地与疾病做斗争吧 . 第 4 页 共 5 页

28、名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 好处：掷地有声,语言精确；四. 结构清楚 ,句式精确【江苏卷】【试题回放】2007 年 4 月 29 日上午 10 点到 11 点,全国亿万同学阳光体育活动在各地大中学校校同时进 行,江苏省 1,100 万同学积极参加了这项活动；训练部提倡同学：u 每天锤炼一小时 u 健康工作五十年 u 幸福生活一辈子请你依据以上提示,用英语预备一份发言稿,向同学们表达一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高三同学是否需要每天花一小时锤炼,谈谈你的看法及理由；留意：1、 发言稿应包括以上全部信息,要有适当

29、发挥；2、 词数： 120 左右；发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数；3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动 a national student sports program; 训练部 the Ministry of Education Good afternoon, everyone, The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10： 00a.m.11:00a.m.on April 29

30、,2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable. In my opinion,

31、 we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now. Thank you. 【名师点评】本文的结构特别明晰,同时句

32、式使用得娴熟而精确；本文分为三段,前两段表达,后一段发表观点, 典型的作文结构； 在句式使用上, 作者用法多样, 使用了独立结构和虚拟语气,特别出彩；复杂的句式是本文的特点之一；积存卡片好词 1.wage v.发动 2.aim v.瞄准 3. advocate v.提倡 好句 1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. 训练部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动,能够健康地活 50 年；评析： advocate,其后接虚拟语气,可以省略情态动词；好句 2. If we did n ot do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records.假如我们不进行运动,我们的学习成果就不会很好；评析：虚拟语气；第 5 页 共 5 页名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页,共 5 页