2022年中考英语写作中常出现的错误及范文.docx

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1、精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 读书破万卷 下笔如有神中考英语：写作中常显现的错误及范文一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接 影响到作文的质量；本文整理了中考作文常显现的的是个错误,以及部分优秀作文范文；第一：中考作文常显现的错误 1. 审题不清 如 20XX年一篇中考真题作文要求写一项最喜爱的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定 位为“ 我最喜爱的活动” ,偏离了“ 一项、课外活动” 这一主题；依据作文的评分原就,如 文章内容不切题,就不管语言如何规范、用词如何精确,都会被判为零分；2. 拼写错误拼写是考生应当具备的最起码的基本功,但在考

2、生的作文中却常常能发觉许多拼写错误；有拼写错误的作文确定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅表达出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次；3. 名词单复数问题误 my father and my mother is all teacher；正 my father and my mother are both teachers4. 缺少动词在汉语中没有动词的句子是答应的,但英语中每个完整的句子都必需有 动词来构成,如：“ 我累了；” 这个句子没有动词作谓语,而用形容词,但英语形容词不能作谓语,肯定要写成： im tired；误 i happy i can come

3、 to beijing zoo正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo误 the apples cheap. ill take some；正 the apples are cheap. ill take some5. 缺少介词、冠词等仍有一些考生由于没有娴熟把握介词或者冠词的用法,不明白中英文语言习惯的不同,也会显现明显的错误,造成丢分现象；误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting；正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeti

4、ng6. 代词的误用英语中代词的形式许多,包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等；而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分; 此外汉语中许多时候不用物主代词,而英语中物主代词是不行省略的,代词的误用是考生最简单发生的错误；误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father；正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father7. 句子不完整名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - -

5、 - - - - - - 读书破万卷 下笔如有神有的考生由于对句子结构熟悉模糊,所以显现只写半句的现象,这也是造成失分的缘由 之一；误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school；这是一个特别常见的错误, 这段文章的其次句话没有动词,他不能独立构成一个句子；修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来； 正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get in

6、to college, for example, my friend in high school；8. 前后不一样 所谓不一样,包括数的不一样、时态不一样及代词不一样、主谓不一样等；例 1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do； 人一旦有了学问,他就能想干什么就干什么；剖析： one 是单数第三人称,因而本句的 本句是典型的主谓不一样；have 应改为 has ; 同理, want 应改为 wants ；改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants to do 9

7、. 时态、人称和数的搭配错误 汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化,而对英语来说,这些都至关重要；例：误 when i get to the station the train leave；正 when i got to the station the train had left10. 综合性错误 综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等,以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的 误用等等； 这些都是靠考生平常学问的积存,所以考生应当从平常练习动身,每天坚持写英 语日记,多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作,提高自己的英语素养；其次：优秀作文范文 范文 1：题目请你认真阅读下面的聘请广告；Boys and g

8、irls aged 12-15. Are you good with children. Happy kids winter camp Needs help with: sports music computers Come and join us. Send your personal 个人 information to hkwc . 假如你是李平想要应聘,请你依据聘请广告中的要求,在表格空白处至少填出两项你所能做的事情；并依据表格中的全部信息,发一封 才能；字数 40 60；信的开头、结尾已给出e-mail ,介绍你的个人情形、爱好爱好及Name Age School Like can 名

9、师归纳总结 Li Ping 13 No.3 Middle School Reading,computers,Playing basketball 第 2 页,共 5 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 读书破万卷 下笔如有神Dear sir, I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music. I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon. Yours

10、, Li Ping 范文 Dear sir, I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music. My name is Li Ping I am thirteen years old. I study / am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I like reading and playing basketball. I like computers, too. I can play football well. I can stag many Englis

11、h songs, And I can dance and swim. I can surf the Internet and send e-mails. I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Li Ping 范文 2：题目假如你的爸爸是个医生,曾参与了 典已经过去了,但是他对一家人的健康仍旧很重视；请你写一篇20XX年的非典防治工作,虽然非 60 词左右的短文,讲一下只要预防得当,疾病并不行怕；参考词汇：personal health个人健康 spit吐痰； over

12、work 使 过于疲惫 food and drink饮食范文 Keeping healthy My father is a doctor. In 2003, he took an active part in the battle against SARS. He said, “ We dont have to be afraid of catching the illness. If we have good habits, we can keep the illness away.”My father and I like running in the morning. We keep t

13、he windows open so that the air in the room is clean and fresh. We wash our hands before meals. We have healthy food and drink. We dont spit here and there. He told us not to overwork because too much work will make us tired and make it easy to get sick. 范文 3题目你的爸爸抽烟吗？请写一篇小短文描述抽烟的害处,回家后读给你的爸 爸听；（ 60

14、 词左右）提示如下：1. 抽烟有害健康 , 不能长寿； 2. 抽烟易导致疾病；范文 Smoking and Health 3. 抽烟仍危害别人；Everyone knows smoking is bad for health. People who smoke too much may not live long. Many people die from smoking each year. Smoking causes many illnesses. Smokers have bad teeth. A lot of people always cough because of smokin

15、g. Smoking can easily cause lung cancer. Smoking is bad for smokers, and its also bad for women and children, too. 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 读书破万卷 下笔如有神I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them. Lets enjoy clean air. 范

16、文 4题目有许多同学早晨上学不吃早餐,这是一个不好的习惯,对身体有很大的 危害；请依据提示写一篇短文,指出不吃早餐的危害；70 个词左右；提示： 1. 不吃早餐对身体有害；范文 12. 不吃早餐会影响上午听课；Every morning we have to go to school very early, so many of us dont have breakfast. Its very bad for our health. In the morning we usually have four classes. Its a long time before lunch. If we

17、dont eat anything for breakfast, we may feel hungry and we cant listen to the teacher carefully. We need energy very much while we are growing. I really think that we should have a good breakfast. 范文 2How to keep healthy If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get

18、 up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you dont feel well, youd better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands befor

19、e meals and drink enough boiled water every day. Its necessary for our health. We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke etc. Its also very important. 范文 5：题目中秋节的英语作文范文 The Mid-Autumn Festival -The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn is a very important Chinese festival. It fa

20、lls on the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival, everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front of the house. On the evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away from their homes will try to come back for th

21、e union. After dinner, people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily. At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can look

22、back on the past and look forward to the future together. It is said that there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To protect the frighten the dragon away. 译文中秋节名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 读书破万卷 下笔如有神中秋节是中国一个很重要的节日,在八月十五号； 在节日来临的前几天,家庭中的每一个人都帮着打扫房子,把房子打扮得漂美丽亮的,灯笼挂在屋前；晚上有一顿美餐,离家在外工作的人也要回来团聚；色的圆灯笼；孩子们会高兴奋兴地玩他们的玩具灯笼；晚饭后, 人们点亮灯笼, 一般是红晚上月亮又圆又大,人们在赏月的同时吃着中秋节特殊的食品月饼；人们在一起回顾过去,展望将来；据说天上有一条龙,它要把月亮吞下去；为了爱护月亮,孩子们要弄出很大的响动把龙吓跑；名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页,共 5 页