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1、Section Writing劝说性书信技法指导劝说性书信是我们日常工作和生活中常用的一种应用文体。它以书信的形式劝说收信人接受或放弃某一想法、观点、提议或行动，有时还提出自己的建议并让对方采取进一步的行动。接着给出充足的理由劝说对方接受你的建议。提出的理由要合情合理，用词要恰当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。我们可以通过以下三个部分来进行写作：第一部分：引入。写信人首先需要简要说明写信的主要目的。第二部分：阐述。这是劝说性书信的主体和核心部分。写信人需要在这个部分有条理地列出自己的理由。理由要力求客观、真实、有说服力，要重点突出、层次分明。同时，要注意适当提高语言的力度，提升语言的张力，以更好

2、地展现自己的立场。第三部分：总结。写信人可以用生动的语言重申自己的核心观点，或以情动人、引起共鸣，或升华延伸、画龙点睛。这部分应该注意语言要简练且具有冲击力。学生在写此类信件的时候应注意以下几点：1形式规范，引题自然劝说性书信主要由信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结束语和签名等部分组成。写作时在正文的开头就要做到有的放矢，找准劝说内容的切入点，从而自然地引入自己要谈论的话题和观点。2切中要害，直击主题在劝说的过程中要抓住问题的关键，一定要围绕收信人关心的问题展开写作，切忌眉毛胡子一把抓，脱离主题。3动之以情，晓之以理要想达到劝说的目的，“以情感人”是保证，“以理服人”是关键。因此，在阐述自己的看法

3、时语气要委婉、中肯，说明看法时要有理有据、令人信服。有时还要提出自己的合理建议，从而让对方可以明确进一步行动的方向。4劝说性书信的结构首段：点明写信的目的，即向对方提出建议或提出对方面临的问题。通常用过渡句引出建议。主体段：建议的具体内容。一般来说，建议的内容要分条列出，这样可以更加醒目。通常围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，委婉地提出自己的建议和想法。注意要充分考虑对方的实际问题，表达时应选择得体的语言。切忌用语生硬，泛泛而谈。结尾段：一般是表示敬意或祝愿的话。同时希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。黄金表达1首段After I read your letter, I am sorry to know

4、 that . I know you have trouble in . after reading your letter.I am writing to you for the purpose of . Im writing to persuade you (not) to . In my opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following measures.2主体段Here are my reasons. First of all, I think it would be better if . Second, . Third,

5、. Personally speaking, I really hope . In my opinion, you should . Here Id like to give my advice on . I would like to suggest that . 3结尾段All things considered, . In brief/In short/To sum up, . I believe you will take my advice into consideration.I hope you will find these suggestions practical/usef

6、ul/helpful.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.典题演练假如你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Mike在与你同一城市的国际学校读书。你收到他的email了解到他最近因为一次考试没有考好而烦恼，请按照以下内容给Mike写一封回信。1宽慰；2给予改进学习的建议(查找失败原因；向老师求助；劳逸结合)；3邀请周末去打篮球。 谋篇布局1体裁：劝说信2话题：劝说朋友端正心态、查找原因并阐释具体做法3时态：一般过去时和一般将来时为主4人称：第二人称5结构联想词汇1总是，一直 _答案：all the time2关

7、注 _答案：focus on3面对 _答案：in face of4向寻求帮助 _答案：turn to5使成为可能 _答案：make it possible连词成句1我必须要提醒你没有人能够总是获胜。I must remind you that no one always wins.I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time. (升级句)2为了下次考试考好，你应按照我说的去做。To get a good result in the next exam, you should do as I tell you.To guarantee

8、 success in the next exam, you are advised to do as you are told. (升级句)3另外，有困难时可以去向老师求助。When you have difficulty you can ask the teachers for help.Besides, in face of difficulty, youd better turn to the teachers for help.(升级句)4充足的睡眠和合适的锻炼，一定会使你精力充沛。Enough sleep and exercise will certainly make you e

9、nergetic.Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.(升级句)连句成篇Dear Mike，Im sorry to hear that you failed the last exam. But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time. So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on

10、future studies.To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do as you are told. First, find out the real reasons why you failed the exam. Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them. Besides, in face of difficult, youd better turn to your teachers for h

11、elp. After all, they are experienced. Meanwhile, remember to strike a balance between study and rest. Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.How about playing basketball together this weekend? Surely we will have fun.Yours, Li Hua跟踪训练假设你是李华，你的美国朋

12、友 Jack 因两次考试成绩不理想而苦恼，故写信向你倾诉，请根据以下内容，给他写一封回信。1认真分析出错的原因，避免以后犯同样的错误。2考试之前做好准备工作。3失败是成功之母，只要努力并且不放弃，你一定会取得理想的成绩。注意：1.词数100左右；2信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack， Yours，Li Hua精彩范文名师点评I dont think it necessary for you to . ，it作形式宾语的结构运用得当。can be of help to you中be of后接抽象名词，表主语的性质或特征。Failure is the mother of succes

13、s.俗语的运用增强说服力。总评本文是一封回信，形式上结构层次明晰，内容上覆盖所有要点，常用句式结构运用准确，语气诚恳，说理透彻，具有说服力。课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练对应学生用书P018阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Since childhood, I _1_ (see) action movies starring Bruce Lee and Jackie Chan, and I was always curious to learn the martial arts (武术). _2_ there is China, there is kung f

14、u. Once I arrived in China, my dream was _3_ (learn) TaiChi and kung fu and master the techniques of martial arts.After my arrival on campus on the first day, I went for a walk in the early morning. I saw some elderly people _4_ (practise) TaiChi slowly. I stopped and watched their movements closely

15、. They attracted me, and the very next day at registration time, I rushed to the teachers office to choose TaiChi as my _5_ (option) course. The following week I was on the grounds early in the morning with my classmates. The teacher told us that TaiChi _6_ (favor) for its health benefits. The movem

16、ent of the body is related _7_ the yin and yang forces.The main _8_ (rule) that the teacher taught us were attitude, discipline (自律) and balance. I was taking every bit of the training _9_ (serious) and trying to maintain my balance, which was a difficult job. However, as the teacher puts _10_， our attitude, our willingness and our action will make the impossible possible. And I will do.1_2._3._4._5_6._7._8._9_10._答案：1.have seen2.Where3.to learn4.practising5optional6.is favored7.to8.rules9.seriously10.it