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1、精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载2004 年-2022 年高考英语满分作文及名师评析2022 高考英语满分作文【全国卷 I 海南、宁夏】【试题回放】 假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里；今日你的房东Mrs. Wilson不在家,你预备外出,请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条,内容包括：1. 外出购物2. 替房东仍书3.Tracy 来电话留言： 1 咖啡屋 Bolton Coffee见面取消2 此事已告知 Susan 3 尽快回电留意： 1. 词数 100 左右 ; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；Mrs. Wilson, Im

2、going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She

3、 felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Yours, Li Hua 【名师点评】本文属于提纲式要点作文,是同学比较熟识的题材,表达了英语学习应当留意有用性,生活型的原就；行文人称、时态运用恰当、精确,各个要点间规律连贯,行文通顺；提纲类书面表达不是简洁的

4、逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要认真组织语言,合理支配结构；在语言方面,要特殊留意简洁明白,开头要开门见山；【江苏卷】【试题回放】 鼠标是运算机时代正确的人机交互工具之一；作；但是, 过分依靠鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响；提示的信息,用英语写一篇短文；它极大地便利了人们的运算机操 请你以鼠标为切入点,依据下表所名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页,共 18 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载鼠标的必要性对多数人来说,操作运算机,上网冲浪 鼠标的便利性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除 编辑文本,搜寻信息 收发邮件,选购

5、商品 点播音乐,下载电影 假如过分依靠鼠标 请考生结合自身感受,列举两到三点 留意：1. 对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简洁翻译；2. 词数 150 左右；开头已经写好,不计人总词数；3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名；The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer. For most people, its almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Int

6、ernet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagin

7、e, all this can be done with a cute mouse. A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesnt always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying

8、too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically. 【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁,所选内容与我们生活相关,考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述,适度发挥,不要逐条翻译即可；文章说理清晰,语言流畅,句式表达多样,用词恰当、精确；不 失为一篇满分作文；2022 高考英语满分作文【全国卷】名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页,共 18 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备欢迎下载始终通过有关网站website关注三【试题回放】 假定你是李

9、华,从小宠爱大熊猫panda,年前在美国圣迭哥动物园诞生的大熊猫“ 苏琳” 和她的母亲“ 白云” ；现在苏琳即将三岁；请依据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1、 自我介绍 ;2 、 庆贺苏琳生日 ;3 、 感谢工作人员 ;4 、 索取苏琳三岁生日照；留意： 1、词数 100 左右 ;2 、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China. ;3 、开头语已为你写好；Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three

10、 years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. I d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a

11、happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday. Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua 【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：1. 自我介绍 ;2. 信息来源 ;3. 庆贺生日 ;4. 感谢照料 ;5. 索取照片 ;6. 合适的结尾；这封信格式正确,行文规范,描述有条不紊,称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、终止语均表达到位；文章行文活泼,感情真挚, 语言表述精确,充满着作者因大熊猫

12、得到细心照料而对美方人员的感谢之情,以及期望自己愿望成真,得到照片的希望之情；简洁句和复合句,流畅自然,不露痕迹,的确是一篇佳作；积存卡片英汉互译长短句运用合理,结合了好词 1.delighted adj.欣喜的,欢乐的2.express v. 表达 3.give birth to v.产生,生育好句 Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy a

13、nd healthy life 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 18 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载in the US. 我祝愿它生日欢乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感谢之情,琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活；评析： 定语从句的使用；【江苏卷】正是你们的努力工作让苏【试题回放】 实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听；请 你依据下表中所供应的信息,写一篇题为“ Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿；为何倾听表示敬重,增进懂得,建立良好的人际关系 谁来倾听家长倾听孩子懂得孩子,排除

14、代沟, 老师倾听同学明白同学,满意需求, 同学相互倾听增进友情,互帮互学, 怎样倾听 请考生联系自己拟定内容,列举两至三点； 留意：1、 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简洁翻译；2、 词数 150 左右；开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数；3、 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名；Good afternoon, everyone. The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”. Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and impro

15、ve interpersonal relationship. Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a go

16、od relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish the

17、ir talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 18 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. Thank you fo

18、r your listening. 【名师点评】这是一篇感情真挚、热忱充满的演讲稿,文中大量运用排比句型,不但精确流畅地表达出题目中所供应的信息,而且表达出作者娴熟运用英语的才能以及不俗的文采；第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式,将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致; 而第四段中用一系列的祈使句谈论应如何倾听,就更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力；积存卡片英汉互译好词 1.promote v . 促进2. interpersonal adj.人际的3. generation gap. 代沟4. open-minded adj. 虚心的好句 1. students should listen mo

19、re to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed. 同学之间应当相互倾听,这样他们可以相互学习和帮忙,也会形成友情；评析： 复杂句的组合,被动句的使用；2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. 我想强调的是我们每个人都应当更多的倾听他人；评析： 复合句的使用；【湖北卷】【试题回放】 假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机

20、,因有质量问题, 要求该公司更换；请依据以下要点,用英文写一封电子邮件；要点： 1. 问题：手机不响铃,不能发短信; 该产品已售完,无法更换; 型号新,无配件,无法修理； 2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换；留意： 1. 词数为 100 左右 ; 2. 参考词汇：配件 spare part; 不计入你所写词数; 3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好4. 已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡；Dear Sir ,名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页,共 18 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载I am writing to you for th

21、e mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2022 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didnt ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice b

22、ut to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a m

23、onth. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Bu Manyi 【名师点评】本文内容要点齐全,语言丰富, 结构合理,如头两句说明白购买手机后发觉故障的情形,中间部分说明白无法修理而必需让公司更换手机的原委,最终明确提出自己的要求,明白流畅,将题目所提出的要点全部表达清晰,较好的完成了任务；全文以一般过去时为基调,结合主动语态与被动语态,并使用了 so, but, therefore 等连接词,使文章结构完整严密；固定短语,如 be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to

24、my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用,使文章的语言显得地道而精炼；积存卡片英汉互译好词 1. disappointment n.扫兴 2.desperate adj.失望的3. consideration n.体谅好句 To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 令我扫兴的是,他说由于在中国是新款手机,所以没有配件来修理；评析： 复杂句的组织 ; to

25、 my disappointment, 常用短语；2007 高考英语满分作文名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 6 页,共 18 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载【全国卷 II 】【试题回放】一家宾馆新开业, 为吸引外国来宾,期望在互联网上进行宣扬；请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍；主要内容包括：1. 地点：距白山入口处 500米; 2. 房间及价格： 单人间 共20间 ,100元/ 天; 双人间 共15间 ,150元/ 天; 热水淋浴 ;3. 餐饮：餐厅 中、西餐 ,咖啡厅 茶、咖啡 ;4. 游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定；留意： 1. 词数

26、100 左右,开头语已为你写好Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel. ;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with

27、 a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyabl

28、e. So come to enjoy yourself. Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain. 【名师点评】本文开门见山, 第一点明白主旨； 本文最大的特点是应用了许多比较复杂的句式,使文章比 较出彩；开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置；which 引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确；总地来说,文章句式精炼,是篇不错的满分作文；积存卡片英汉互译 好词 1. provide v. 供应 2. convenience n. 便利好句 All these services can bring great convenience to you and a

29、re very enjoyable. 全部这些服务都会给你带来便利,并且特别的开心；名师归纳总结 评析： bring great convenience,带来便利；第 7 页,共 18 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载【安徽卷】【试题回放】假如你是李华, 美国一所友好学校预备与你们学校共同创办一份中同学英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情形；请你给她写封回信,假如你是李华, 美国一所友好学校预备与你们 学校共同创办一份中同学英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情形；请你给她写封回信,主要内容如下：l 表示赞成；l 提出你宠爱的栏目；

30、l 简要说明理由；留意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好；3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；column 4. 参考栏目：栏目Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great. And I definitely agree with you on that. Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of

31、 tea. Say, “culture express ” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, s necessary to learn from each other. This will “blurt out ” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn En

32、glish idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment ” is so cool. The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely cant miss it. Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things. Well, I can t list more. I really can Yours faithfully, Li

33、Hua 【名师点评】 t wait to read that magazine. 名师归纳总结 这是一篇满分作文；由于这篇作文的显现,导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低；仔第 8 页,共 18 页细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好, 很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,让人不得不- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备欢迎下载可不是一朝一夕推测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经受,否就这么地道标准的英语,所能写出来的；比如说： my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not le

34、ast, celebrities, catchy 和trendy 的大胆运用, list, cant wait to 简直是 perfect. 况且文章中没有一个 错误,不管是书写仍是语法；英语能够学到这种程度,不行谓不让人佩服；【江苏卷】【试题回放】 20XX年4月29日上午 10点到 11点,全国亿万同学阳光体育活动在各地大中学校 校同时进行,江苏省 1,100万同学积极参加了这项活动；训练部提倡同学：u 每天锤炼一小时 u 健康工作五十年 u 幸福生活一辈子 请你依据以上提示,用英语预备一份发言稿,向同学们表达一下阳光体育活动的有关情形,并就高三同学是否需要每天花一小时锤炼,谈谈你的看法

35、及理由；留意：1、 发言稿应包括以上全部信息,要有适当发挥；2、 词数： 120 左右；发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数；3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动a national student sports program; 训练部 the Ministry of Education Good afternoon, everyone, The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：0

36、0a.m.-11:00a.m.on April 29,2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very

37、 enjoyable. In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn the program now. Thank you. t be able to get good study records. So every one of yo

38、u, join 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 9 页,共 18 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载【名师点评】本文的结构特别明晰,同时句式使用得娴熟而精确；本文分为三段,前两段表达,后一段发 表观点,典型的作文结构；在句式使用上,作者用法多样,使用了独立结构和虚拟语气,十 分出彩；复杂的句式是本文的特点之一；积存卡片英汉互译好词 1.wage v. 发动 2.aim v. 瞄准 3. advocate v. 提倡好句 1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for

39、one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. 训练部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动,能够健康地活 50 年；评析： advocate ,其后接虚拟语气,可以省略情态动词；2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records. 假如我们不进行运动,我们的学习成果就不会很好；评析： 虚拟语气；【重庆卷】【试题回放】 据报道, 7 岁的美国女孩 Amy Bruce 得知自己身患肺癌lung cancer后处于极度的痛楚之中,美国抗癌协会 ACS打算

40、,每当 Amy 收到一封慰问信,就给她增加 3美分的治疗款；假如你是新华中学的同学李华,请你用英文给 自我介绍 得知的情形 表示勉励 准备为她做什么 祝她早日康复 留意：1. 信的格式已为你写好 2. 信中不得显现你的真实情形；3. 词数 100 左右；4. 请在答题卡上作答；Dear Amy, Amy写一封慰问信,主要内容包括：名师归纳总结 Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung 第 10 页,共 18 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - -

41、 - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease. I m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort le

42、tter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon. Yours, Li Hua 【名师点评】本文依照要求, 涵盖了全部要点； 文章使用了高中常见的句式,如I am sorry to hear that., It is reported that.等,都比较好；作者对定语从句的使用恰到好

43、处地修饰了文章,行文自然而通顺,值得学习；积存卡片英汉互译好词 1.realize v. 意识到2.promise v. 承诺3.donate v. 捐赠好句 1. I am sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌,给你带来了庞大的痛楚；评析： which 引导限制性定语从句；2. So, stand up and fight against the disease. 因此,顽强地与疾病做斗争吧 . 评析： 掷地有声,语言精确；2006 高考英语满分作文【全国卷 I

44、 】【试题回放】 假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现正在招募理想者,你期望成为其中一员；名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 11 页,共 18 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备欢迎下载 2. 个人请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信；内容应包括：1. 个人情形：年龄,性别,学历条件：英语好,爱好体育,善于交际,乐于助人,熟识本地情形 3. 承诺：供应正确服务留意：词数 100 左右,开头语已为你写好 ; 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯 ; 生词：申请 apply v. , application n.,理想者 volunteer Dear Sir

45、 / Madam: I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be cho