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1、精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 精品资料 欢迎下载15-Sentences Solution to IELTS Writing 第 1 句：背景介绍Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university educatio n. 现在,越来越多的人关怀高校训练的目的； Explanation: Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that Nowa

2、days, an increasing number of people are concerned about thepurposes that university ed ucation serves. Nowadays, more and more students are concerned about what they will learn in the universities . Universities are one of the most important institutions in modern society. 假如很难再短时间内想出第一句内容,就直接表达观点,

3、两句话写完首段； I agree with the view that Reasons are as follows. 我赞同的观点是 缘由如下；第 2 句：交代辩论话题 A. “ 是否应当 ”However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills to graduates is a controver sial issue. 但是,高校是否应当主要供应应同学工作相关的技能是一个饱受争议的话题；B. “ 是这样 仍是应当那样 ”However, whether universities should main

4、ly provide job-related skills or pure knowledge to grad uates has caused a heated debate. 但是,高校是应当主要供应应同学工作相关的技能仍是纯粹的学问造成了猛烈的争议；Explanation: However, what kind of knowledge and skills universities should mainly provide to graduates is a c ontroversial issue. 但是,高校的应当主要供应应同学哪一种学问技能是一个饱受争议的话题；C. 一些人认为

5、 ;另一些人认为 Some people state that ; others believe thatSome people state that universities should focus on giving access to knowledge; others believe tha t the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace are more important for university graduates. 一些人认为高校应关注供应学问；另一些人认为工作所需的技能对高校毕业生更重要；第 3 句：交代你自己的写作

6、观点 In my view, , My view is that 表语从句 I agree with the view that 同位语从句 , for the following reasons. My view is that job-related knowledge and skills should be the main focus of universities. I mainly agree with the former/latter view for the following reasons. 其次段 第 1 句：本段中心句这一段的写作目的是以理服人；用 的论据；it i

7、s clear that 这个主语从句写出你认为最重要、最明显Firstly, it is obvious that for most students, the purpose of receiving university education is to obta in practical knowledge and skills which will enable them to become qualified employees in the job market in the future. 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - - -

8、 - - - - - 精品资料 欢迎下载第一,很明显对大部分同学来说上高校的目的是学习有用的学问技能,这些技能能让他们在将来的职场中成为合格的雇员； Explanation: Firstly, it is clear/obvious/true that Firstly, there is no doubt that One reason for this is that 第 2 句：对中心句进行拓展、说明、说明；因） A. This is because 这是由于（想上一句话的原This is because most of them, after graduation, will enter

9、 the workplace, earn a living, and support their own families. 这是由于大部分同学毕业之后会进入职场,挣钱谋生,建立家庭；味着（想上一句话的结果） B. This means that 这意This means that the courses focusing on jobs will become the most welcomed subjects which the majority of students will select. 这意味着那些专心于使用学问的课程会成为大多数同学挑选的热门专业；C. If not 反正中心

10、句 If universities do not pay enough attention to such skills, most graduates will not be able to find sa tisfactory positions in the workplace, leading to a higher unemployment rate. 假如高校不重视这种技能的培育,大部分同学将会很难再职场上找到工作,导致社会失业率增高； Explanation: 可用下面的短语拓展说明中心句：第 3 句 In other words, 换句话说 More specifically,

11、 详细来说 More precisely, 精确点说重申写作观点；其实是对第一段最终一句话,也就是你的写作观点进行改写表达；So universities, as service providers, have to give top priority to these customers real needs. Explanation: 推荐一个固定句型来写本句,让写作更简化：Therefore, it is necessary/crucial/important for sb. to do sth. Therefore, it is crucial for universities to

12、give top priority to the students real needs. 第三段 第 1 句首 句 仍 是该 段 中心 句 , 是你 绞 尽脑 汁 想 出 的 第 二个 原 因 论据； Moreover, focusing on the job-related skills can benefit the university itself. 另外,关注工作相关的技能能使高校本身受益； Explanation: 可选用 Moreover, In addition, Besides 等词开头；第 2 句 该段第 2 句就是举例；For example, the sci-fi b

13、lockbuster “ Avatar” has marked a milestone in the filmmaking industry and drawn massive interest in 3D technology. 例如,科幻大片阿凡达已成为电影业的一座 里程碑,并且激发了大众对 3D 技术的广泛爱好； Explanation: 假如感觉上面的句子单词太难,我们可以简化为：For example, 3D technology has become a hot topic after the movie “Avatar ” made the whole world crazy.

14、例子越详细,越国际化,越时尚流行,越好；第 3 句上一句已经举出了阿凡达和3D 的例子,为什么我们要提这个例子呢？接下来的这句话就是要写出我们举这个例子的缘由,并证明本段首句的正确性；If a university can quickly respond, and consolidate teaching resources to offer courses about 3D, not only will its graduates be more competitive in the job market, but the university itself will kee名师归纳总结 -

15、 - - - - - -第 2 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 精品资料 欢迎下载p pace with the technological development and move forward. 假如一所高校能快速反应,整合教学资源供应3D 相关的课程,那么不仅毕业生在职场上将更有竞争力,高校本身也能跟上技术进展并向前迈进； Explanation: 这里没有固定句式要用,可随便发挥,要写出例子和中心句之间的联系；当然仍可以再举一例：Another example is sth. 然后说明说明；如在考场上实在想不出好的例 子或并列例子,该段从第 2 句开头

16、参考其次段的写作框架,再讲一次道理；第四段 第 1 句 写让步段落的两大好处：大多数考生绞尽脑汁也想不出第三个缘由论据；我们何不换一个 角度, 想一想支持反方的一个缘由或例子呢,那会简洁得多； 兼顾了反方观点,不会显现 评分标准中由于 partly address the task 而丢分的情形；A. That is not to say that.not . 这并不是说（反方观点完全没有道理）That is not to say that universities should not pay any attention to developing pure science and know

17、ledge. B. It is also true that. 反方观点中的某些方面也是事实； It is also true that universities should develop pure science and knowledge. C. Those whoharbour the view that. believethat. 那些持有（反方观点）的人们认为 . 这个句型中包含了定语从句、同位语从句和宾语从句 Those who harbourthe view that the main function of universities should be to give ac

18、cess to the k nowledge believe that the theoretic knowledge is the foundation of any practical skill. Explanation : 在争论优势和劣势的文章中,我们可以直接使用以下句型： This is not to say, however, that we should neglect the problems it has caused. But to acknowledge only the positive impact would be short sighted. 第 2 句 想反方

19、观点的论据,或在特别、极端情形下的一些合理性；进一步说明该段第一句话；There are, of course, students interested in knowledge for its own sake, and they will later become scientists and scholars who will make greater contributions to our society. Explanation: 可选用 Of course 或 Indeed 开头本句；第 3 句 让步后最终转折；表达“ 即便如此,反方观点在大多数情形下仍是不行行的” 或“ 即使存

20、在上面提到的负面,正面影响仍是大于负面的” ； But unfortunately these people are few and far between. Explanation: 可选用 But, However, Yet 等词开头本句；该段为文章次要信息,可点到为止,不行花费过多时间和笔墨蛮缠；实在不知如何反对了,可用无赖写法： “ （虽然反方观点也有道理）但正方观点仍旧更有道理；” But still, job-related skills are more important for most students. ater. But still, the cos are far g

21、re其实本句仍可以不用反对,再写反方其次论据,或针对第一论据的拓展、支持、举例；不过这样处理后在结论段要表达相对中立的观点态度；第五段 第 1 句结论段；重申写作观点；这句话其实是针对首段最终一句话改写； In summary, 总之 In conclusion, 总之In summary, the major function of universities should be providing most students job-related skills, guaranteeing a high rate of employment, and thus helping the soc

22、iety function better. Explanation: 名师归纳总结 通常,考官读完一篇作文后印象最深的会是文章中的例子和结尾段；所以该句不是简洁的改第 3 页,共 5 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 精品资料 欢迎下载写,而应是递进或强调；可用强调句型：It is sth. that. 第 2 句 照料反方观点；表达“ 同时,我们不能忽视反方观点的价值,或低低估某事的负面影响”；Explanation: 模板句式 Meanwhile, we should not ignore/neglect/overlook/underestima

23、testh.s negative effects. 第 3 句 其实末段有了上面两句话已经完整了；假如要冲刺高分,我们要再加一句话,给文章画一个 有力的句号,或提升文章的思想境域,立意升华； By doing so we can ensure that. Only by doing so can we make sure that. only在句首留意倒装 15 句高级作文写作分析 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think watching

24、 TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and e xperience. Write at least 250 words. Model Essay leisure ac

25、tivities. However, discussion now c Watching TV is one of the most important chi ldren entres on whether it brings more harm than good. My view is that too much time spent on it surely has negative impacts on kids and parents should filter out the inappropriate programs and channel s for them. 首段 第

26、1 句 背景引入 第 2 句 交代辩论话题 第 3 句 作者观点,中立With the rapid development of science and technology, TV shows are designed so vivid and attract ive that not only kids but eve adults are much easier to get addicted to them. When children spend more time sitting in front of a screen, they are isolated from the re

27、al world. They do not have enou gh time to socialize, or to engage in outdoor activities which are crucial for their physical growth. Also, their eyesight will be weakened by staring at the screen for too long. 第 2 段 第 1 句 第一论据：看电视易上瘾（形式问题,对儿童身体发育不好）第 2 句 绽开支持；其实写的是：看电视上瘾的结果是什么；省掉了 第 3 句 连续绽开；其实是不良结

28、果并列 第 4 句This means that. 连续并列；由于思想充分,想说的太多,代替了 so,. 重申观点这个句子Moreover, questionable contents on TV will have negative effects on children since their minds ar e impressionable. The fact that many developing countries including China lack a TV programme rating system means that children are more easi

29、ly exposed to indecent TV scenes. So, TV is not al ways a good one in the sense that parents really cannot control what comes on the screen. 第 3 段 第 1 句其次论据：有不良的电视内容（内容问题,对儿童心理进展不好）例证 第 3 句 连续绽开；其实是不良结果并列第 2 句 绽开支持,事实名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 5 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 精品资料 欢迎下载Of course, there a

30、re many educational and inspirational TV shows, such as Disney cartoons which enable kids to have fun in the learning process, facilitate their intellectual development and help th em learn caring, sharing, courage, honesty and other virtues from an early age. These benefits of T V on a child s educ

31、ation cannot be denied. 第 4 段 第 1 句反方观点； 留意这一句话里包含了反方的观点和论据；用复杂句、看电视对儿童的诸多好处 第 2 句 重申反方有道理举例、 并列等手法列举了In sum, spending a long time watching TV is harmful and parents should either follow TV rating g uidelines or carefully choose the programs for children. 末段 第一句 一句话高度总结全文；由于感到字数已够,就不在累述名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页,共 5 页