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1、精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 本文档可编辑修改,感谢大家下载Writing 1阅读下面短文,依据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要；Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly. I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began

2、organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items ,I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience she had placed on me. But then I wat

3、ched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change,ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she asked if she had enough to buy a reusable bag,he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this emp

4、loyee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind. As I was watching him,I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman,watching the employee count the change.I realized I hadnt been inconvenienced at all.That my daughter was instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this

5、 valuable lesson by a complete stranger. When the woman was finished,the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience and kindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through the store trying to

6、 find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employees kindness and patience and how much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her,we left Target with a cart full of consumable items,but what is more,a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson. If you are ev

7、er in the Glendale Target ,give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him. _ _ _ 【写作指导】要写好记叙文的概要,先要找到以下两个问题的答案：1谁做了什么？ 2结果如何？假如是夹叙夹议文,仍要加上这个故事给人们的启示或训练意义；就该题而言,本文的概要 应当包含：作者购物的时间、地点、结果以及从本次购物中得到的启示,最终用自己的语言串联起来；【参考范文】The passage tells us an experience of shopping.要点 1One day

8、,the author with two children went to Target for shopping.要点 2While waiting in line,she found an old lady was troublesome,but the young employee treated her patiently.要点 3Seeing that,the author was touched by his kindness and patience and she thought her children would learn a lot from this experien

9、ce.要点 4 Writing 2阅读下面短文,依据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要；Sugars are popular in the processed food industry because they add taste,colour and thickness to food products. The studies have shown that sugars can provide a source of energy.The body breaks down the sugar into simple forms that can be readily used in t

10、he body.But too much sugar can contribute to health problems like obesity and tooth disease. 本文档可编辑修改,感谢大家下载名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页,共 4 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 本文档可编辑修改,感谢大家下载Having too much sugar is not the only reason for obesity or being overweight,but it does add to the amount of kilojoules

11、in food.Eating too much of any food,without doing enough exercise,will cause you to become overweight. Governments in the United States and United Kingdom are waging a war on sugar in the interests of public health.Both countries claim that the overconsumption of sugar by much of the population is h

12、armful to people health.On Thursday,the US.government issued new dietary guidelines that strongly recommend people receive less than 10 per cent of their daily calorie intake from added sugar.On the same day,British Prime Minister David Cameron said he has not ruled out the idea of a tax on sugar to

13、 encourage consumers to buy food with reduced levels of the sweet.Politicians in the UK.are debating how a reduction in the intake of sugar could help reduce Britains rising rates of obesity. The American and British governments both refer to a study conducted in Mexico that showed a tax on sugary,c

14、arbonated drinks led to a reduction in consumption.The tax was carried out on January 1,2022 and purchases of the taxed drinks went down by 12 per cent by December of that year.Sales of mineral water increased by 4 per cent over the same period.An alternative to taxing sugared drinks is to reduce th

15、e level of sugar in them.Researchers at Queen Mary University in London say that reducing the sugar content in sugarsweetened drinks by 40 percent over five years could prevent one million cases of obesity in the UK.Researchers say people might not even notice the changes. _ _ _ 【写作指导】本文是一篇说明文,叙述了人体

16、摄入过多糖分会影响健康；英国和美国政府都号召人们不要摄入过多糖分,甚至考虑通过增收糖税来削减糖的食用；读懂原材料是写好概要的关 键,在懂得原文的基础上,用完可能简洁的语言集中概括原文的主要观点及思想,但不能简单重复原文,同时,对各要点的概括要详略得当,结构严谨,表达明确,语义精确简练,避免空泛、含混之词；【参考范文】Sugar is useful for our body,but too much sugar does harm to our health,which probably leads to health problems.要点 1As for this,governments i

17、n the United States and United Kingdom call on people not to take in too much sugar.要点 2British Prime Minister even planned to put a tax on sugar.要点 3A study showed that the tax on sugar helped reduce the consumption of sugar.要点 4Researchers also think reducing the sugar content slightly would not b

18、e noticed.要点 5 Writing 3阅读下面短文,依据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要；Dieters have long sworn that grapefruit helps them lose weight.The Grapefruit Diet,also called the Hollywood Diet,dates back to the 1930s and has a host of celebrity fans including singer Kylie Minogue.It involves having grapefruit or grapefruit jui

19、ce with every meal while cutting back on calories. Now,scientists are beginning to believe them. A study has found that drinking grapefruit juice when eating fatty food lowers the amount of weight put on by up to a fifth. The research also suggested that grapefruit could be as good as prescription d

20、rugs at keeping blood sugar levels under control 本文档可编辑修改,感谢大家下载a key part of managing diabetes. 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页,共 4 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 本文档可编辑修改,感谢大家下载The experiments were conducted on micebut researchers say the results justify studies on humans.Professor Joseph Napoli,of the Unive

21、rsity of California ,Berkeley,said,“ We see all sorts of scams about nutrition. But these results,based on controlled experiments,warrant further study of the potential healthpromoting properties of grapefruit juice.”The researchers found that when the mice were fed fatty food for three months,those

22、 given grapefruit juice to drink gained up to 18 percent less weight than those given water. They also had lower blood sugar and insulin levelsdespite eating the same number of calories and doing the same amount of exercise as the mice who drank water. In fact ,grapefruit juice was as good at contro

23、lling insulin as the widely used diabetes drug metformin ,the journal PLOSONE reports. However,the fruit juice only had an effect on weight when the animals ate fatty food.The researchers said they did not know how grapefruit stops the pounds from piling on. Spokesman Mariette Abrahams,a dietician,s

24、aid until then it is too early for people to try grapefruit diets.“ Grapefruit should be part of a healthy balanced diet,but it shouldnt be the focus of the diet,” she said. _ _ _ 【写作指导】本文是一篇科普类说明文,主要介绍了葡萄柚的减肥功效；第一段介绍了葡萄柚用于减肥的历史背景；其次至七段的内容是：讨论说明,葡萄柚对人的身体健康有许多好处；第八段介绍了葡萄柚汁减肥的局限性；最终一段对葡萄柚饮食提出了不同的看法；考生

25、在作答 时,应留意条理清楚,防止纷乱性语句；语言简洁,要点全面,可将原文中涉及的人名、地名等非重要信息忽视,以节省词数；另外,考生在作答时应留意语言的精确性和语句间的衔接性；【参考范文】Dieters think grapefruit juice helps lose weight and the Grapefruit Diet or the Hollywood Diet was a popular way of losing weight in the 1930s.要点 1The experiments conducted on mice,which can also apply to hu

26、mans,shows that grapefruit juice benefits the loss of weight and the control of blood sugar and insulin levels.要点 2However,the fruit only takes effect when the animals eat fatty food.要点 3The opposite view doesnt think eating grapefruit can be the focus of the diet.要点 4 Writing 4阅读下面短文,依据其内容写一篇60 词左右

27、的内容概要；In fact ,great white sharks are not white. The name is thought to have come about because these sharks are white in one circumstance when they are lying dead on the deck of a boat. It would be more proper to call this species the “ black shark ”They have a dark upper surface,which means their

28、prey猎物 are difficult to spot them approaching from the dark depths. Speaking of prey,they have been recorded dining out on a wide range of species,including whales,squid鱿鱼 ,turtles and occasionally penguins. “ If you make a list of everything thats been found in a white shark,yous stomach variety of

29、 things,”says marine biologist George Burgess of the University of Florida in s clear is that their tastes change as they age. Gainesville.But what“ They are almost just fisheaters until they are 7,8,9 feet long ,” says Burgess.“ As they get bigger,they will begin to start eating mammal prey if they

30、 get the opportunity.”These older sharks prefer seals,sea lions and walruses.When they strike from below,at 本文档可编辑修改,感谢大家下载名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 4 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 本文档可编辑修改,感谢大家下载speed,white sharks can clear the surface by as much as 3 m. To locate their prey,white sharks use almost e

31、very trick in the book.“ They have a series of senses,” says Burgess. In a 1963 study,researchers hung a speaker over the edge of their boat off Miami to see if they could attract sharks with sound. No great white sharks were spotted in this study,but its reasonable to assume they have good hearing

32、too. As a great white shark gets closer to its prey,its sense of smell begins to kick in.A study of the brains of different species of sharks shows that the great white olfactory bulb 嗅球 is especially large. Their vision is not bad,either.“ They see particularly well,” says Burgess. They also have t

33、wo less familiar senses.Their lateral lines,which run along their sides,can s movements. detect changes in water pressure that reveal their prey _ _ _ 【写作指导】本文是一篇说明文；说明文的概要写作一般有三种参考模板：1描写某事物的性质功用；即 “ 对象性质功用利好” ：In the passage the writer introduces.to us,especially its.,from which we know.2 针对某个问题提出解

34、决方法或措施；即“ 问题解决方法 ” ：The passage tells us.,including.3介绍某现象及其缘由和结果；即“ 现象缘由结 果” ：The author/writer said/talks about.of.,because/but.；本文可以采纳第一种模板；【参考范文】The passage introduces something about white sharks,such as the origin of the name and how they get their prey.要点 1When they are lying dead on the deck

35、 of a boat,they are white,but they have a dark upper surface.要点 2What they eat are various,including a wide range of species.When they are small they eat fish.As they become bigger,they eat mammal prey.要点3Their senses such as hearing,smell and vision are good.要点 4 本文档可编辑修改,感谢大家下载名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 4 页