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1、我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 提供一篇提供一篇350350词以内的短文，要求考词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇生基于该短文写出一篇6060字左右字左右的内容的内容概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：(1)(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况对原文要点的理解和呈现情况(2)(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性应用语法结构和词汇的准确性(3)(3)上下文的连贯性上下文的连贯性(4)(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况对各要点表达的独立性情况我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的

2、东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物WhilereadingWhilereadingWhilewritingWhilewriting 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Whilereading Whilereading 1.Isthepassageanarration,exposition,argumentationoradescription?2.Isthereanytopicsentenceorkeywords?Ifso,

3、underlinethem.3.Gothroughthesupportingdetailsorevidencetocheckwhetherthetopicsentenceorkeywordsyoufindisappropriate. outline topic sentence supporting details (conclusion) (以议论文为例以议论文为例)我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Whilewriting Whilewriting 1.Structure1)Topicse

4、ntence*2)Mainsupportingpoints/evidence3)About60words2.Language1)Touseyourownwords*2)Tobeconcise(leaveoutthedetails;reducetheexamples;simplifythedescriptions;eliminateallrepetitions.3)Topresenttheinformationfairly,donotgiveyourowncomments4)Tousethethirdpersontoretell5)Tense我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在

5、这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Para1：Childraisingfindouttopsentencesorwordswhichcanbestservethemainidea.Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world. Since babies do not come with child raising manuals(指南), couples, especially future mothers,

6、 have to learn from their mothers, aunts, mothers-in-law, or any other relative who is close to them.difficultTopic：Characteristics：Reasonsu找对主旨句找对主旨句Step1reading我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Para2：As children grow up, parents have to find reasonable ways in ord

7、er to help their children, advise them, punish them, lead them to achievements, and teach them. Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately. For example, they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect for their relatives. I think parents in these cases should punish their chi

8、ldren in a reasonable way. Children must know those kinds of attitudes are not good at all.Adetailedexampleu忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Para3：There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job, for example, the culture in

9、 which they live, the economic situation in their society, and the religious environment.Para4One group consists of people who dont have economical resources or education. Para 5Other groups of people are hard workers or well-educated. u例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括Evidence我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在

10、这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 outline Para1：1st sentence reason Para2: 1st sentence an example Para3: the first sentence Para 4 Para 5 evidence我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Step2writing Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Para1Childra

11、isingisprobablyoneofthemostdifficultjobsforpeopletodoallovertheworld.Tip1：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息Childraisingisadifficultjob.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Step2writing Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Bringing up a childChildraisingisadiff

12、icultjob.Tip2：转换同义词或者词性：转换同义词或者词性 is hard work/ Tip3：转换句型：转换句型It is rather tough to raise a child for people. difficult/tough. 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Step2writing Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Para2Aschildrengrowup,parentshavetofindr

13、easonablewaysinordertohelptheirchildren,advisethem,punishthem,leadthemtoachievements,andteachthem.Tip4：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举的并列词汇的并列词汇 educate their children Parents should _ to educate their children. adopt reasonable methods 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边

14、有一个活的生物Step2writing Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Therearemanyaspectswhichinfluenceparentsinthishardjob.Tip5：代词转换成具体信息：代词转换成具体信息There are many factors that influence the parents in _.bringing up their childrentwo examples are given in order to make it clear我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为

15、什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Step2writing Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Onegroupconsistsofpeoplewhodonthaveeconomicalresourcesoreducation.Othergroupsofpeoplearehardworkersorwell-educated.Tip6：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性In order to make it clear, two exampl

16、es are given, which show that _children raised in families with different economical and educational background may have different futures我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物It is rather tough to raise children for couples, especially future mothers. Parents should ad

17、opt reasonable methods to educate their children. There are many factors that influence the parents in bringing up their children. In order to make it clear, two examples are given, which show that children raised in families with different economical and educational background may have different futures.