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1、Four short words sum up what has lifted most successful individuals above the crowd: a little bit more.-author-date高考英语作文可用的复杂句型和高级词汇高考英语作文可用的复杂句型和高级词汇高考英语作文可用复杂句型和高级词汇1表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this 2）The reasons for this are as follows 3）The reason for this is obvious 4）The reason for thi

2、s is that 5）We have good reason to believe that 例如：There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our lifeFirstly，peoples living standard has been greatly improvedSecondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or likeLast but not least，more and more people pr

3、efer to enjoy modern life 注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。 如：Great changes have taken place in our lifeThere are three reasons for this这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。2表示好处 1）It has the following advantages 2）It does us a lot of good 3）It benefits us quite a lot 4）It is beneficial to us 5）It is of great benefit to us 例如

4、：Books are like friendsThey can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizonsTherefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us3表示坏处 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages 2）It does us much harm 3）It is harmful to us 例如：However，everything divides into two

5、Television can also be harmful to usIt can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television4表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）for sbto do sth 2）We think it necessary to do sth 3）It plays an important role in our life 例如：Com

6、puters are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in businessSoon， computers will be found in every home，tooWe have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age5表示措施 1）We should take some

7、 effective measures 2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties 注意括号内高级词汇的使用。3）We should solve the problems that we are faced (confronted) with 注意括号内高级词汇的使用。 例如：The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more seriousTherefore we must take some effective me

8、asures to solve it6表示变化 1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years 2）The computer has brought about many changes in education(使发生,致使) 例如：Some changes have taken place in peoples diet in the past five yearsThe major reasons for these changes are not far to seekNowadays，more and more peopl

9、e are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins7表示事实、现状 1）We cannot ignore the fact that 2）No one can deny the fact that 3）There is no denying that 4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in 5）However，thats not the case 例如：We cannot ign

10、ore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollutionTo solve these problems，we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollutionThe government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment8表示比较 1）Compared with A(和A比起来)，B 2）I pref

11、er to read rather than watch TV 3）There is a striking (明显的) contrast (对比,对照) between them 例如：Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordableFirstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleumSecondly，they do not cause the pollution problemLast but not least，they c

12、ontribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise9表示数量1）It has increased（decreased）fromto 2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000 3）The output (产量)of July in this factory increased by 15 compared with that of January例如：With the improvement of the living s

13、tandard，the proportion of peoples income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased 再如：From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 200010表示看法1）People have（ta

14、ke，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth 注意括号内高级词汇的使用。2）People have different opinions on this problem3）People take different views of（on）the question4）Some people believe thatWhile others argue thatargue为高级词汇5) Views vary/differ from person to person. (人们对此观点不一)例如：People have different attit

15、udes towards failureSome believe that failure leads to successEvery failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavorHowever，others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers 再如：Do “lucky numbers really bring good luc

16、k？Different people have different views on it 11表示结论 1）In short，it can be said that 2）It may be briefly summed up as follows “总结” 3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that 例如：From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary，

17、however，its method should be improved 注：例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句；例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。 12套语 1）Its well known to us that 2）As is known to us， 3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about 4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that 5）As a proverb says/ Just as the saying goes, Where there

18、is a will，there is a way 例如：As is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world outside campusThe reason for this is obviousNowadays，the society is changing and developing rapidly，and the campus is no longer an “ivory towerAs college students，we must get in touch with the world

19、 outside the campusOnly in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate 英语作文这样才能写出 “亮点”要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。 一、词汇选择-标新立异 在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用大纲上有但不太常用的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。 例如:1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。 A:TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet. B:Thefl

20、atsituatesinabuildingonFangcaoStreet. 分析：isin是常见词语，而situatesin则是大纲上没有的，属于高级词汇。 2)在周末我们做很多作业。 A:Atweekends,wehavealotofhomeworktodo. B:Atweekends,wehaveendlesshomeworktodo. 分析：B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的alotof，而是使用了endless。endless就是由大纲词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。 3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。 A:Thebathroomandthekitchenaregood. B.Thebathro

21、omandthekitchenarewell-furnished. 分析：在表达要点时，B句使用了wellfurnished，这比good语气强，也显得生动。 在造句时，“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。 二、结构造句-与众不同 在造句时，既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。 1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。 例如:1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。 A:TherewasastrongearthquakeinTangshaninthe1980s. B:Aterribleearthqu

22、akehit/struckTangshaninthe1980s. 分析：大多数同学使用了therebe结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible, hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。 2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。 A: IreceivedyourletterwhichwaswrittenonAugust15ththismorning.(多数人使用的方式) B:YourletterofAugust15threached/gottomethismorning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁) 2、使用一些强

23、势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如： 3)阿福救了我妹妹。 A:AhFusavedmysister.(一般句式) B:ItwasAhFuthatsavedmysister.(强调句式) 4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。 A:Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.(一般陈述句) B:Howgladweweretoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.(感叹句) 3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可

24、使用简化句等；一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用therebe结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。 这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。 A:Itsaflatof25squaremetres.Thereisabedroomintheflat.Thereisabathroomanda kitcheninit,too.Inthebedroom,thereisabed;thereisasofa,adeskandachairaswell. B:Itsaflatof25

25、squaremetres,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair. 三、布局谋篇-独具匠心在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，2002高考范文堪称典范。请看：Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.（人们对于这个问题有不同的看法）60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelievea

26、publicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatismore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopagardener

27、sandotherworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggested,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.专家点评:1)该文使用Opinionsaredivided.作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：Theysuggested,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清

28、楚。3)范文使用了and,whatismore,however等连词，在段落之间使用了ontheotherhand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。总之，要想使自己的文章有亮点，吸引读者，在考试中获得高分，就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点，都是值得肯定的。附： 范文DearTom,Howisitgoi

29、ng?Asyouknow,ithasbeenalongtimesinceIreturnedtoChina.Ireallymissthetimethatwespenttogether.ThankssomuchforhelpingmewithmyEnglish.IthinkIwouldnothaveachievedsomuchsuccess/madesomuchprogresswithoutyourhelp.Bytheway,areyoustillintouchwithourteacherMr.Smith?Howishedoing?YouknowthatImreallyimpressedby/wi

30、thhisfascinatinglecturesandwanttocontacthim.Unfortunately,Ihavelosthise-mailaddressandtelephonenumber.Idappreciateitifyouwouldsendmehise-mailortelephonenumber.Whatsmore,theSpringFestival,oneofthemosttraditionalChinesefestivals,isdrawingnear.WouldyouliketocometoChinaandcelebratethefestivalwithme?Imsu

31、reyouwillenjoyyourholidayhereandlearnmoreaboutChineseculture.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply. Yours,LiHua“不想改善书写的理由”范文Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofcomputers,teachers,studentsandtheirparentsarepayinglessandlessattentiontohandwriting.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about85.5percentofmiddleschoolstudents

32、thinkthat theirhandwritingispoor.Yetforvariousreasons,manystudentsdontwanttoimprovetheirhandwriting.51.5percentofthestudentsthinkthattheycanjustuseacomputer,sothereisnoneedtowastetimeimprovingtheirhandwriting,and32.3percentbelievethattheyaresobusywiththestudythattheydonothavetimetopractice.10.9percentthinkthatpractisinghandwritingisuseless.Asthesayinggoes,writingstyleshowstheman.Beautifulandneathandwritingisbeneficial,especiallyformiddleschoolstudents.Therefore,inmyopinion.moreemphasisshouldbeplacedonthisaspectinfuture.-