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1、北京曲一线图书策划有限公司 2021版5年高考3年模拟A版专题十读后续写【考情探究】考点所给信息特点浙江考情分析2019.62018.112018.062017.112017.062016.10读后续写体裁故事类记叙文话题爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事和父母一块去旅游的故事和朋友一起骑车游玩,野外遇狼的故事小两口野外露营,因小事发生争执,女主人独自走进森林迷路,在野外独自过夜的故事所给文章长度320338344332标示词名词(词组)7778动词(词组)2032形容词、副词1300分析解读1.考查方式提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容和所给段落开头语进行续写(150词

2、左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。2.考查能力读后续写主要考查学生以下四个方面的能力:宏观把控语篇结构的能力:学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系,所续写的短文与所给短文及段落开头语之间要有连贯性,所续写的短文语句要连贯、有序。熟练准确运用语言的能力:学生能准确、恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构,还能够根据内容需要使用较多较复杂的词汇和语言结构,使语言表达丰富而又有感染力。把握故事情节和语言特点的能力:学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容,并通过续写短文表现出来。进行创造性思维的能力:学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容,包含详细和生动的情景、态度和感情描述。【真题探秘】真题再现On

3、e weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better s

4、pot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that s

5、he was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane

6、 wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some ber

7、ry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?Unfortunately, the

8、trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.

9、Paragraph 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.阅读点拨这是一篇情节自然,但是有冒险色彩的故事。原文讲到Tom 和Jane 因琐事吵 架,后来Jane意外迷失在森林里。根据原文及所给的段首句,续写部分的构思不会太难。 根据第一段的首句可知,本段应该描述当天晚上Jane的心态和行动。而根据第二段的提示 句可知,本段主要叙述Jane最终是如何获救的。当然,在续写中,一定要反映出Jane的坚韧和聪明,同时,最后一定要有Tom努力救援的信息,这样的续写故事结尾才有正能量。本文的矛盾冲突为 Jane 在森林中迷失这个问题,表现的是人与环境之间的冲突。故事情节围

10、绕该矛盾冲突展开。问题的产生(在森林迷路)问题如何解决(试图走出森林,试图向直升机求救)问题的解决(获救) 该矛盾冲突推动了故事情节的发展,依照Before getting lostWhile getting lostAfter getting lost 这一时间线索串联出文章的叙事逻辑主线。其中,After getting lost 为文章的重点展开部分。流程详解1.梳理记叙要素,归纳文本大意whoJane, TomwhatJane was lostwherein the forestwhenone weekend in Julywhya quarrel with Tom, her husb

11、and主旨大意Jane was lost in the forest and survived in the end.2.厘清叙事情节,助推故事高潮叙事情节beginning.started to quarrel.was lostdevelopment.kept moving.had to stop for the night.rose at the break of day.began to walk along the stream and hope.climaxheard a helicopterending待续助推高潮增加障碍让直升飞机发现Jane的困难营造冲突扩大Jane在夜晚内心的

12、冲突(后悔与丈夫吵架)渲染Jane当晚与次日与环境之间的冲突(当晚“恶劣”的环境与内心无助和恐惧的冲突;次日让直升飞机发现自己的困难与渴望被救的冲突)3.研读段落开头语,精准定位续写方向研读续写段落的开头语Para. 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.How did Jane feel then?How did Jane struggle through the night?Did she fall asleep and what did she think of?Para. 2It was daybreak

13、 when Jane woke up.Was Jane rescued and who rescued Jane?How was she rescued and how did she feel then?续写内容Paragraph 1Jane是如何熬过那一个夜晚的(所听、所思、所感)Paragraph 2Jane是如何获救的(所行、所听、所见、所感)4.添加细节描写,凸显人物情感Paragraph 1Jane的所听(frightening sound)、所思(regret)、所感(frightened and tired).Paragraph 2Jane如何被直升飞机发现和与丈夫重逢后的喜悦

14、5.恰当使用连接词和过渡语,使全文流畅连贯在续写的过程中我们可以根据情节和逻辑的需要选用but/however、although/though、unfortunately、instead、on the contrary、whats worse、worse still、so、thus、therefore、consequently、as a result等连接词使上下文衔接紧密、表意连贯。6.检查“个人佳作”,检查故事情节是否连贯,语法、词汇运用是否准确参考范文【五档作文】Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dar

15、k again. She had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. Jane was so tired and disappointed, but she didnt lose heart. She knew Tom must be trying his best to search for her. She believed that the helicopter must have been called by Tom and was sure it would come back again tomorrow. She

16、 found a place near the stream and slept.Paragraph 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place so that the helicopter could find her. She was so lucky that before long a big rock appeared, which was high above the trees. There she climbed and wai

17、ted with her yellow blouse in hand for the helicopter to come again.To her great joy,she didnt wait long before she saw the helicopter in the sky. She waved hard with the yellow blouse and the helicopter quickly found her. She was right and it was Tom who called the helicopter and saved her. 【满分作文】P

18、aragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. In the dreadful darkness, Jane heard strange sounds of wild beasts clearly, feeling extremely frightened. “If I hadnt quarreled with Tom, I wouldnt be trapped here now,” she thought to herself regretfully with tears clouding her

19、eyes. Surrounded by fear, Jane felt worn out and finally fell asleep. “Tom, is that you?”she murmured. “Tom, help!” In her dream, she saw a man extending his arms towards her at a distance.Paragraph 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Jane decided to continue forcing her way ahead. In the boundless

20、 search, she found it hard to find a way out, which threw her into desperation. Fortunately, a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. In no time did Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it eagerly. She waved her yellow blouse madly to the helicopter. To her great joy, the helicopter spotted h

21、er and came to her help. The moment Jane and Tom reunited, they hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.【五年高考】Writing 1(2018浙江6月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the W

22、ild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and

23、 Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm,”he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the c

24、hickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take

25、a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house wer

26、e out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为

27、两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.答案One possible version:Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my

28、horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I wa

29、s OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didnt know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we we

30、re at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul,” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride!Writing 2(2017浙江11月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。A Vacation with My MotherI had an inter

31、esting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my motherloving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spe

32、nd a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we

33、loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mo

34、m was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh.I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually l

35、eft behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up te

36、nt there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in

37、 the next town.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.答案One possible version:Par

38、agraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautifulthe warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up ou

39、r tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would ge

40、t off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces

41、. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.Writing 3(2017浙江6月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends ha

42、d stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行)along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing

43、 behind him. “Man, thats a big dog!”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud e

44、nveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).Mac was pedaling

45、 hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to

46、Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.

47、 He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived.答案One p

48、ossible version:Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac rushed down from his bicycle and waved at the people inside the car for help. Paul and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help him climb into the car, in spite of the danger that the fierce wolf was running near. They