2020年中考英语考点专项突破题专题39书面表达一（含解析）.doc

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1、专题39 书面表达1、 江苏淮安. 书面表达76.为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：1你看到或参加过一次活动（包括时间、地点、经过）；2你对该活动的感受以及对祖国的热爱之情；3你今后如何为建设祖国贡献力量。注意:1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名; 2. 词数在80100, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland（祖国），_【答案】To celebrate the 70th birthday of our mo

2、therlandIn order to welcome the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colorful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October, my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. Its the greatest museum Ive ever seen.We saw many weapons tha

3、t used by the the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life. there are all kinds of samples that used during the war are presented in front of us. We learn that our new life is not easy to get and we should cherish. I am proud of my motherland. Now I want to study hard and mak

4、e contributions to my motherland in the future.【解析】为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。二、江苏连云港76.书面表达76. 减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示，以“How To

5、 Make Our Spare Time MoreMeaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。注意： (1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯; (2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数; (3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。(4)参考词汇：提升素养promote literacyHow To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time m

6、ore meaningful?_【答案】Nowadays we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First its good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world

7、 by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. Whats more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.In a word, lets make full use of our

8、spare time and promote our literacy.【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达如何让课外生活更有意义。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, whats more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及“比较级an

9、d比较级”等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。三、江苏苏州第七部分书面表达56.假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历用英语回信开导他。To：From：Subjects： Learning from mistakes Dear Su Hue, Im unhappy that Ive made some mistakes recently. Theyre troubling me a lot these days. I really need your hel

10、p. Would you please share your experience with me?u Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?u Can you tell me one of your mistakes?u How did you deal with your problem?u What have you learned from the mistake? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best,Nathan注意：l.词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计

11、入总词量；2回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Nathan,Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. _ I hope my experience can help you out.Best wishesSu Hua【答案】Dear Nathan, Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You neednt worry too much. Its true that everyone makes mi

12、stakes. Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. It doesnt matter whether or not you make mi

13、stakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better. I hope my experience can help you out.Best wishes.Su Hua【解析】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say s

14、orry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和Its true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesnt matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富

15、了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。四、江苏泰州81.书面表达为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。活动内容：1上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。你的感想：1师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；2倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；3. （考生自己发挥）要求：1词数100左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。2所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息

16、，并可作适当的发挥。3不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。参考词汇：市民广场Civic SquareIn order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it._【答案】In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our schoo

17、l organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the Peoples Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their

18、help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizens Square. In Peoples Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country.【解析】这

19、是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；（自己在发挥一些）。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，

20、符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。该句话用到了would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。【高分句型二】In Peoples Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们看了70年来的摄影展，

21、了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来郎朗上口。五、江苏宿迁七、书面表达81.某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app，邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示，用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。名称Happy English Learning内容英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等。好处1. 便于和同学一起学学习；2. 帮助学生扩大词汇量；3. 有利于提高英语听力；4. （自主发挥，至少一点）其他方面（自主发挥，至少一点）注意事项：1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数;2.内容要包括表中要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使

22、短文连贯通畅;3.文中不得出现真实的人名，校名、地名等;Here is my design for the new app. _【答案】例文Here is my design for the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English games and so on. It can make it easy for students to study together. It is true that voc

23、abulary is very important in English study. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly improved. They can also practise their spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning Engl

24、ish by using this app.I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.【解析】这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如and so on，make it easy，in English study，watch films，in a word，have fun，be suitable for等。而固定句型It can make it easy for students to study together.和It is true that vocabulary is ve

25、ry important in English study./ I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。6、 江苏镇江七、书面表达66.假如你是阳光中学的李华，每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修课(elective course),请介绍必修课Travel of Science, 根据个人情况选择一门

26、选修课并说明理由；同时，对你的选择的课程提出建议。Required courseElective CourseSubjectTravel of sciencel introducing scientistsand inventionsSubjectPhotographyl taking photosGardeningl growing flowersTeachera professorTeachera young reporter4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m. Schools gardenTime & Placel 2:30 p .m.- 3:15 p.m.l school hallT

27、ime & Placel 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m.l City ParkAn old gardenerTiptake notebooks and pensTipTake camerastools offered by school要求：1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息；2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由，并对其提出建议；3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。【答案】Every Friday afternoon, our school offers requ

28、ired and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustnt miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the s

29、chool hall. Youd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a

30、young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。审题可知，短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称为主来叙述。内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍必修课程Travel of science，题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、地点以及小

31、提示，学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可；接下来应根据个人情况，从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个，阐述自己的理由，并对该课程提出一些建议。这一部分需要学生们展开想象，结合自己的实际生活，补充具体的内容，再用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点，而且注意分清层次和结构，使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容，主次分明。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达自然

32、。文中较好的短语和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、Youd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may have si

33、milar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。7、 江苏南通八、书面表达81.假如你是李明，请参考南通市初中学生综合索质评价方案的相关指标，对你本学期的突出优点和明显不足进行总结，举例佐证优点并针对不足提出改进措施，完成一份自评小结。注意：1. 图表中的内容不需要面面俱到，不要逐条翻译。2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Self-assess

34、ment Im Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think its necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term._【答案】Self-assessment Im Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think its necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term.I

35、think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running. I have a good study habit. I can listen to the teacher and review carefully after class. I am a helpful person. I like to interact with my classmates. I have a good citizenship. I try to innovate knowledge. I also hav

36、e a good sense of aesthetics. I think I am a good student.【解析】假如你是李明，请参考南通市初中学生综合索质评价方案的相关指标，对你本学期的突出优点和明显不足进行总结，举例佐证优点并针对不足提出改进措施，完成一份自评小结。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如

37、: I think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running.8、 江苏扬州B. 写作81.俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为”My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假如你是李雷，住在花园社区，根据以下流程图提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。Conditions Neighbourhood What is your neighbourhood like? Neighbours What are your neighbours like? How do they help

38、others?(give two examples)What did you do for your neighbours? (give one example)Feelings How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood? 要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括流程图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。My neighbourhoodMy name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. _【答案】My neighbourhoodMy name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is very beautiful and clean. There is a big garden with all kinds of