2020中考英语六大类作文高分秘笈专题四咨询建议类.doc

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1、专题四 咨询建议类四步法写出给建议的短文1. 首先要知道给出建议的格式：常用书信格式。2. 然后写出提建议的原因。3. 最后根据具体的情况给出明确的建议。4. 写出希望。英语中咨询建议类作文通常以书信的形式呈现，英语书信类作文的常用表达：开头部分：Hownicetohearfromyouagain.Letmetellyousomethingabouttheactivity.ImgladtohavereceivedyourletterofApril9th.ImpleasedtohearthatyourecomingtoChinaforavisit.Imwritingtothankyouforyo

2、urhelpduringmystayinAmerica.结尾部分：Withbestwishes.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Idappreciateitifyoucouldreplyearlier.Weshouldtakemeasurestocontrolpollutioninordertosavetheworld. Wedbettertakeeffectivemeasurestopreventstudentsfromcheatingonexams. Thegovernmentdecidedtotakestrongmeasuresagainstdrugabuse.

3、Urgentmeasuresshouldbetakentopreventterroristsfromcarryingoutfurtherattacks. Why not./Why dont you.You can have a try./Try to do.Dont be afraid of.I believe you can do it. Good luck.Inoneaword/Generallyspeaking 解决方法类作文模板Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblem_A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,_（说明

4、A的现状）. Second, _（举例进一步说明现状）.ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething, _（解决方法一）.Foranother_（解决方法二）.Finally,_（解决方法三）.Personally,Ibelievethat_（我的解决方法）.Consequently, Imconfidentthatabrightfutureis waitingusbecause_（带来的好处）.典例一 (2019 南京中考 假如你是李华，在网上看到英国B公司为正

5、在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集网友建议.请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件.IDEAS NEEDEDBritech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas， organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed!Here s what to do：Write to share your ideas! Feel f

6、ree to be creative!Please let us know： Whats the name of the app? What problem does the app solve? What does the app do?Contact us at appdesign Britech com注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥.2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数).3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等.Dear Sir or Madam，Thanks for designing an app for English writing._Yo

7、ursLi Hua 【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam，Thanks for doing an APP for English writing. Id like to share my ideas here. Could its name be right made easy？Many of us have difficulty in writing. We dont know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hope it can solve these problems. Here is my advi

8、ce on what the APP does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read，the better we write. Second, the APP should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions. I hope my advice

9、 is worth taking. YoursLi Hua名师点评本题要求给英国某公司写一封信，就该公司要开发的一款提高英文写作能力的app写一封信，并提出自己的看法和建议。这是一封书信，要注意书信的基本格式，注意书信的语言选择。根据短文提示，本文就从两个方面来写作，一是我们在英文写作中常遇到的问题，主要用第一人称，一般现在时态进行表达；二是自己的建议和看法，用一般现在时态。亮点回放本范文层次清楚，条理分明。短文分为三部分，第一部分是就app的名字给出建议right made easy。第二部分介绍我们在写作中常遇到的问题，Many of us have difficulty in writi

10、ng. We dont know how to organize ideas，use proper words，and so on. 。第三部分就该app的功能提出建议，Here is my advice on what the APP does. First，it should. ; Second， The APP should have . ;Third，there should be . 条理清楚，中心突出。本文精彩句子:Thanks for doing sth.感谢某人做了某事;Could its name be right made easy？使用了疑问句,显现出作者的礼貌和修养;T

11、he more we read，the better we write. 越多.越好.句式既使用准确，也增添了文章的亮点。 典例二（2019 贵州安顺） 请你结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。提示：1. 谨慎交友。2. 不参与打架斗殴。3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。参考词汇：1.self-protection(自我保护)2. bully(n./v.欺凌)3. personal safety(人身安全)4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴)H

12、ow Can We Protect Ourselves at School?【参考范文】How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.We are supposed to stop any school bu

13、lly when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because o

14、ur personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and cant have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.Im hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future ,do you think so?名师点评 本文叙述了校

15、园中存在的欺凌现象，就这些现象作者提出了一些预防和阻止办法，因为是通常发生的事情和建议，所以本文的主要时态是一般现在时和将来时。句子的主语一般用第一人称，用适当的连词，要注意上下文的衔接，使用自己熟悉的句式，所写的句子符合英语语法。亮点回放短文用了一些短语和句式，如it is bad for sb.to do sth;We are supposed to stop do sth; be in the trouble of sth等，用了and连词，用了Firstly,Secondly, Finally,使文章更叫有层次感 ，也增加了文章的亮点。A 【黑龙江省哈尔滨市69中2019年校内模拟测试

16、】假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Alex来信说他要来中国做交换生。请根据以下信息给Alex写一封回信，介绍一下你的近况，并给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。写作要点：1. 欢迎他来中国。2. 介绍你的近况： （1）大多数时间忙于复习备考。（2）有时在户外做运动。（3）很少有时间外出娱乐。3. 给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。写作要求： 1、不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2、可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3、字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4、至少80词。Dear Alex, How are you doing? _Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming B【

17、安徽合肥市庐阳区42中2019年中考一模考试】每个人的生命只有一次。请你以How to Protect Our Lives为题，从安全和健康的角度入手，写一篇如何珍惜和保护我们生命的短文，要点如下：1. 交通安全，校园安全2. 健康的饮食和生活3. . .参考词汇：treasure（v.）珍惜注意：1. 词数80100；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。How to Protect Our Lives_ A Dear Alex, How are you doing? You said that you would come to China as an

18、exchange student in your last letter. Welcome to China. You want to know about me. Let me tell you. I have been spending most of my time reviewing for exams these days. Sometimes I do sports outdoors. But I seldom have time to go out for fun. You said you will worry about how to get along with stude

19、nts when you are in China. In fact, you dont have to be worried about it. Chinese people are friendly. You should take an active part in all kinds of activities in school. If your friends have some questions, you should help them. Theyll thank you for your help. You can bring some small gifts to you

20、r classmates when you are invited to their homes. I hope you can get on well with your classmates. Best wishes! B How to Protect Our LivesIt is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our lives.First of all, we should obey the traffic rules and pay attention to traffic safety.Secon

21、dly, we should not chase and fight in school. Dont climb trees, dont play dangerous games.Thirdly, we should eat some healthy foods, such as vegetables, fruits, and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.Finally, a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life.