英语书面表达2之建议信ppt课件.ppt

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1、高三英语书面表达（二）高三英语书面表达（二） A letter of giving advice 长沙市岳麓实验中学高三英语组长沙市岳麓实验中学高三英语组执教老师 朱铖写作要点：写作要点：1.建议信：建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2. 对象：对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3. 基本框架：基本框架：开头（开头（beginning）- 开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea)主体主体(body)- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(re

2、asons and evidence)结尾结尾(ending)- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)4. 注意事项：注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1、Im glad to receive your letter for asking

3、me how to /asking for my advice on .2、Im very glad to receive your letter and its a pleasure to tell you something about3、After I read your letter, I am sorry to know thatYou asked me for my advice on and I will try to make some suggestions.4、Thanks for trusting me. Its my pleasure to give you some

4、suggestions/advice.5、I am very glad to hear that you want toI know you have trouble inafter reading your letter .However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions. I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.6.I am

5、 writing to share some advice with you7.In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.B. 表达建议（表达建议（body）1.first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile, whats more2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3. I would like to suggest/recommen

6、d that4. If I were you, I would5. You may consider doing6. I would seem to me that you could7. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.8. I wonder if you have considered the following.9. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you canC.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1

7、. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.5. I fee

8、l that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.7. I am looking forward to doing sth/sth 8. I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details. D. 常见落款常见落款（complimentary closing） 开头字母要大写，末尾用逗号。结束语也称敬开头字母要大写，末尾用逗号。结束

9、语也称敬语，使用时也应因人而异，取决于发信人与收语，使用时也应因人而异，取决于发信人与收信人之间的关系或熟悉程度。信人之间的关系或熟悉程度。 1. 家人亲戚家人亲戚: Your loving mother/son/brother; Yours lovingly, With love, All my love etc. 2. 长辈或一般朋友：长辈或一般朋友：Yours respectfully/sincerely, Yours truly etc. 3. 机关、团体、学校等：机关、团体、学校等： Yours faithfully/sincerely, Yours truly etc. 写作模板写

10、作模板模板一：模板一：Dear _,You have asked me for my advice about_(问题问题)， and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_(建议内容建议内容).I hope youll find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about furt

11、her details.Good luck with your _(祝愿祝愿). Yours sincerely, Li Ming 模板二：模板二：Dear _(对象对象)，I am writing to express my views concerning _(问题问题).First and for the most _(建议一建议一); in addition_(建议二建议二);whats more _(建议三建议三).I hope youll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming三个步骤Step 1 List the

12、 key pointsStep 2 Make sentences Step3. Form a passage and polish 注意衔接词使用注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序：表先后次序： First, second, third.Finally Firstly, secondly，eventually to begin with/ to start with, at last 递进关系：递进关系： furthermore；moreover； not only.but also.； not.but.；, besides； in other words；on the one hand.，on t

13、he other hand.； meanwhile； at the same time； Last but not least如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3. Ending 小结；呼应主题假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友Jack来信说下学期要到你校学习，向你寻求建议。请你给Jack写回信，在下面几个方面给出建议，并希望他在你们学校过的愉快。1、与同学见面要主动向同学问好，并做自我介绍（姓名、国籍等）；2、多与别人交流，并友好相处；3、如果方便的话帮助同学学英语；

14、4、积极参加一些学校活动，比如艺术节、运动会等；5、其他建议。注意：1、词数100左右； 2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。HomeworkDear Jack, I am glad to know youll come to our school next term. Dear Jack, Im glad to know youll come to our school next term. Here is my advice. Firstly, please say hello to your classmates and introduce yourself about your nam

15、e and nationality. Secondly, communicate with others frequently and get on well with them. Thirdly, help others study English if it is convenient to you. Besides, you can take an active part in the school activities such as a sports meeting or an art celebration. Last but not least, if you feel puzzled to adapt to the life in China , you can come and talk with me . I will do my best to help you whenever you are in trouble. May you have a wonderful term in our school. Yours, Li Hua