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1、A letter of suggestions A letter of suggestions 假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim对于汉语产生了兴趣，来信向你咨询。请给对于汉语产生了兴趣，来信向你咨询。请给Jim写写封回信，内容包括：封回信，内容包括： 内容涵盖：内容涵盖：1. 学习汉语的好处学习汉语的好处 2. 提出学习汉语的建议提出学习汉语的建议 3. 预祝学习成功，并邀请来北京玩预祝学习成功，并邀请来北京玩. Criteria of the composition 内容的完整性 结构的清晰性 语言的准确性 交际的得体性Dear Ji

2、m,Para1:Para2: Para3:Para4: Yours, Li Hua 根据要求根据要求适度开放适度开放美好祝愿美好祝愿诚挚邀请诚挚邀请开门见山开门见山交代事由交代事由Structure . 1.内容的完整性：内容的完整性：2.交际的得体性：交际的得体性：Learning Chinese can help youYou can/ should /had better doHaving known that you are, I I hope that you cangreeting and writing purposebenefits (3-5 /30-40w)suggestio

3、ns (5-8 /50-80w)best wishes and invitation1 .Writing purpose (Which one is better? why?) . Having known that you are learning Chinese now, I am writing to give you some advice on Chinese learning, which hopefully could be helpful for you. .Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chine

4、se, I am more than delighted and I would like to tell you something about it.2. Benefits _What benefits can you think of? _3. Suggestions _1)What suggestions can you give? _ _Discuss in your group 1. writing purpose Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delig

5、hted and here I would like to share some of my thoughts with you.题目信息：你的美国朋友题目信息：你的美国朋友Jim对于汉语对于汉语产生了兴趣，来信向你咨询。产生了兴趣，来信向你咨询。background informationwriting purpose .语言的准确性及结构的清晰性：语言的准确性及结构的清晰性： Are they benefits? 1. Chinese is one of the most important language in the world . 2. Chinese is spoken by m

6、ost of the people in the world. 2. Benefits _What benefits can you think of? _ Therefore, being able to speak Chinese can help you 1. take Chinese courses 2. listen to Chinese songs& watch Chinese movies 3. make Chinese friends 4. read Chinese books 5. make a study plan and keep to it 6. practise ev

7、ery day 3. Suggestions _1)What suggestions can you give? _ _How to give suggestions in complete sentences? You can/ should /had better do doing sth can help you It is also necessary/ important for you to do It will be helpful if you can It also works if It will be a good idea if What is most importa

8、nt is that Make sentences by using the key words and the structure1.What is most important is to chat with your Chinese friends. 徐新蕾2. It also works if you try to make more Chinese friends, with whom you can practise your spoken Chinese. 李宇轩Which one is better?1. Besides, it is necessary for you to

9、make a study plan and follow it. Whats more 李清泉2. To attain a high level of fluency and accuracy in a foreign language, you should make a study plan and keep to it. 赵满怡Which one is better?What is the problem? First, youd better set achievable targets. Second, it is also necessary for you to create a

10、 rich language environment. Whats more, it is important that you must know why you are learning Chinese. 赵岩1. You had better take some Chinese classes. The teachers can create a rich language environment in the classroom. 6郑联2. First of all, it is very important for you to attend Chinese class becau

11、se the teachers in the class can give you an adequate amount of input conveyed to you through various mediums. 7贾易宁Appreciation How many suggestions should you give?How to link the suggestions together?Linkings: To start with Besides In addition Whats more Most importantly, 分值分值评分标准说明评分标准说明第一档第一档(13

12、分分-15分分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。 1内容内容完整完整，2条理条理清楚；清楚； 3交际交际得体，得体，表达时表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求充分考虑到了交际的需求； 4体现出体现出较强的语言较强的语言运用能力运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档第二档（9分分-12分）分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容内容、条理和交际等方面、条理和交际等方面要求；要求；所所用语法和词汇用语法和词汇；语法语法和用词方面和用词方面，但不影响理解。，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第三档第三档（

13、4分分-8分）分） 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。未恰当完成试题规定的任务。，语法或用词方面的，语法或用词方面的错误错误影响影响对对所写内容的所写内容的理解理解未能清楚地传达信息。未能清楚地传达信息。第四档第四档（1分分-3分分未完成试题规定的任务。未完成试题规定的任务。写写了少量相关信息；了少量相关信息；语法语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。0未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关。未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关。Possible versionDear Jim, Having known that you have a ke

14、en interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and I would like to tell you something about it. As we all know, Chinese has become one of the most important languages in the world with the rapid development of China. Therefore, being able to speak Chinese can help you stand out and get ah

15、ead both in your college and future career. Here I would like to give you some suggestions on learning Chinese. To start with, it will be of great help if you can take some Chinese courses , which can ensure you an adequate amount of input in Chinese. Besides, you can make some Chinesefriends. Being

16、 able to communicate with native Chinese frequently is how you improve your spoken Chinese. Whats more, you can set achievable targets, such as listening to Chinese songs and reading Chinese newspapers or magazines to get greater comprehension. I wish you success in Chinese learning and hope you can

17、 come to Beijing soon. I am willing to be your guide. Yours, Li Hua Dear Jim, Having known that you have a strong interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and here I would like to share some of my thoughts with you. Since Chinese is recognized as one of the oldest languages worldwide w

18、hich carries the thousand-year history of China, there is no escaping the fact that the learning process will turn out to be rewarding and fruitful. Each character has its own unique story so that what you learn is not only the polished shape and diverse combination of the words but also the hidden

19、culture behind the graceful sentences. In order to start off quite smoothly, you may need to make a learning plan elaborately. By breaking every part into pieces, you can ease the task and grasp more information efficiently. In addition, certain quantity and quality of input ensures the better outpu

20、t, which means that youd better seize your learning material in various forms and do more exercise in your spare time. Whats more, it is significant to keep practicing, which is the fundamental principle of learning. I sincerely hope my suggestions will be helpful, and here I would like to send you an invitation. Would you like to pay a visit to Beijing next month? I really hope you can succeed in learning Chinese and visit Beijing. Looking forward to your early reply.