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1、初中英语常见写作错误英语写作专题复习南模初中 2012初中英语常见写作错误n一、“汉语式”英语n例:His fathers body is strong. 他父亲身体很好。n正:His father is strong.n析:汉语说“某人的身体强弱”时,在英语中不必加 body。因此,在书面表达中要注意英语的习惯用法,否则容易杜撰出“汉语式”英语,使人难以看懂。同时不能先想汉语意思,然后再直译成英语,而要擅于直接用英语思考。n二、难词解释n例:the time fell sleeping 就寝时间n正:the sleeping timen析:同学们遇到要表达的术语有难词时,想不到用合适的单词来
2、表达,于是就闹出了这样的笑话。因此,在平时学习中学生们就要知难而进,想方设法记忆必要的单词,同时增强解释的能力,只有这样才能提高英语书面表达能力。初中英语常见写作错误初中英语常见写作错误n三、单词堆砌n例:Our go to school time is 8:00. 上学时间是8:00。n正:We go to school at eight.n析:同学们在书面表达中应尽量使用自己熟悉且有把握的习惯用语,不能凭着自己的中文习惯主观臆造句子,否则不可能做到“语言准确,得当”。初中英语常见写作错误n四、时态的误用n例:She like it very much and reads it to the
3、 class. 她很喜欢它并且读给同学们听。n正:She liked it very much and read it to the class.n析:在书面表达中,应根据上下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。初中英语常见写作错误n五、用词错误n例:He gave me a very good advice yesterday. 昨天他给我一个非常好的建议。n正:He gave me a piece of very good advice yesterday.n析:advice 表示“建议”时,是不可数名词,不能用不定冠词来修饰,而应用 a piece of。初中英语常见写作错误n六、一致性错误n
4、例1:Once one have dream, he can achieve what he want to do. 人一旦有了梦想,他就能实现他想做的事。n正:Once one has dream, he can achieve what he wants to do.n析:one 是第三人称单数,因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理,want 应改为 wants。初中英语常见写作错误n例2:Water will boil at 100。 水在100沸腾。n正:Water boils at 100。n析:表示客观真理的句子,其谓语动词应用一般现在时。初中英语常见写作错误n七、修饰语错位
5、n例:I can dance. I too can sing. 我会跳舞,也会唱歌。n正:I can dance. I can sing too. 或 I can dance and sing too.n析:too 一般位于句尾,不能用于句首。初中英语常见写作错误n八、结构不完整n例:There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV, radio, newspaper and so on. 有许多方式来了解这个社会,例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。n正:There are many ways to know the socie
6、ty, for example, by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.n析:本句后半部分 For example, by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.不是一个完整的句子,仅仅是一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。初中英语常见写作错误n九、悬垂修饰语n所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子逻辑关系混乱不清。n例:At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 在我10岁时,我祖父去世了。n正:When I was at the age of ten, my grandfather died.n析:at
7、the age of ten 只指出10岁时祖父去世了,但没有说明是“谁”10岁时。按一般的推理不可能是 my grandfather。初中英语常见写作错误n十、词性误用n“词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用,形容词当副词用,名词当动词用等。n例1:Few people can around the world. 很少人能周游世界。n正:Few people can travel around the world.n析:around 是副词,这里误当动词用。初中英语常见写作错误n例2:The place is danger. 这个地方危险。n正:The place is dangerous. 或
8、 The place is in danger.n析:danger 是名词,这里误用为形容词。初中英语常见写作错误n十一、指代不清n指代不清主要指代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。nHelp yourself to some drinks, boys and girls. 孩子们,随便喝些饮料吧。n正:Help yourselves to some drinks, boys and girls.n析:句中的 boys and girls 和反身代词 yourself指代不一致。初中英语常见写作错误n十二、间断句子n我们不能把两个或两个以上的句子简单地连结起来,应注意连结时
9、应加上适当的词。n例:There are many ways we get to know the outside world. 我们有许多方式来认识外面的世界。n正:There are many ways for us to get to know the outside world.n析:这个句子包含了两层意思:There are many ways 以及 we get to know the outside world,简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。初中英语常见写作错误n十三、不连贯n不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。n例:The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth. 淡水是世界上最重要的东西。n正:The fresh water is the most important thing in the world.n析:The fresh water 与逗号后面的 it 不连贯,同时 it 与 things 在数方面不一致。初中英语常见写作错误n十四、综合性语言错误n所谓“综合性语言错误”,是指除了上述十几种错误之外,还有诸如时态、语态、标点符号、大小写等方面的错误。
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