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1、Four short words sum up what has lifted most successful individuals above the crowd: a little bit more.-author-date高分必备：新托福写作加分点Administrator高分必备：新托福写作加分点一、句式变化1. 变换句子的开头结构名词做主语介词短语作状语副词作状语状语从句分词短语作状语形容词短语作状语主语从句不定式短语做主语或状语动名词做主语To begin with, even in such areas as computer science, where it is esti

2、mated that much of what a student learns today will be obsolete in just five years, an advanced degree and the education it represents will continue to be of benefit. Unlike undergraduate education, which is divided into a number of small educational units every term, post-baccalaureate education is

3、 concentrated on deeper learning in fewer areas. Moreover, most graduate education requires extended, critical focus on complex issues or research projects. And even if the technical information relevant to completing a graduate-level project becomes outmoded, the learned critical methods and proble

4、m-solving approaches will not.2. 使用不同的句型结构Todays education system places too much emphasis on students desires rather than their needs. Accordingly, students are searching for the easy way out, and educators are willingly conspiring with them. As opposed to this trend, I would argue that students sh

5、ould study what is presented to them rather than what is desired by them. Not only should educators determine the curriculum, but also they should strive to insure that each individual student truly gains from his/her education, rather than just breezes through it.二、承上启下1. 表示结论in conclusionin sumto

6、concludeto sum up2. 表示肯定程度certainlyclearlyobviouslyplainlyapparentlysurelyundoubtedlynaturallyfor certainfor sureof courseneveralwayspossiblyperhapslikelyprobablypotentiallypresumablyto some extendin a large sensegenerally speakingin a sensegenerallyin some sensenormallyideally3. 引出新观点firstsecondthi

7、rdfinallyin the first placein the second placelast but not leastfirst of allnextanotherIn additionadditionallyfurtherfurthermoremoreoveralsolikewisesimilarlymore importantlyimaginesupposemost importantlyfor one thingfor another4. 引出详细解释specificallyparticularlyfor examplefor instancein this casein th

8、at caseas well asin thatsuch asin addition to5. 表示对照或其他观点otherwisehoweverneverthelessthoughalthoughyetmeanwhilewhileButinsteadstillanywayunlikeon the contraryby contrastby comparisonin any caseat any ratein spite ofrather thanon the one handon the other handeven ifapart frominstead ofeven so6. 表示证据出

9、现sincebecauseactuallyin factas a matter of factas a resultdue toowing to7. 表示推理as a resultaccordinglyconsequentlyhencethusultimatelytherebythereforeas a consequenceif soif notaccording to8. 表示反复说明in other wordsbrieflythat is三、巧用修辞1. 排比对称结构Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate weather

10、global warming exists, how extensive the problem is, what the likely effects will be and whether any remedy is possible.Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate the existence of global warming, the extent of the problem, its likely effects and any possible remedy.2. 比喻(1)明喻：比喻词出现：as, lik

11、e, as ifIn many ways, no doubt, our world grows more and more complex, sputniks cannot be simple; yet how many of our complexities remain futile, how many of our artificialities false. Simplicity too can be subtle-as the straight lines of a Greek temple, like the Parthenon at Athens, are delicately

12、curved in order to look straighter still.(2)暗喻：比喻词不出现。America has given the Negro people a bad check, which has come back marked insufficient funds.3. 对照：加深印象Extremism in defense of liberty is no vice; moderation is the pursuit of justice is no virtue.4. 类比The Negro has a callus growing on his soul

13、and it is getting harder and harder to hurt him here. That is a simple law of nature. Like a callus on the foot in a shoe that is too tight. The foot is natures and that shoe was put on by man. The tight shoe will pinch your foot and make you holler and scream. But sooner or later, if you do not tak

14、e the shoe off, a callus will form on the foot and begin to wear out the shoe.It is the same with the Negro in America. That shoe-the white mans systemhas pinched and rubbed and squeezed his soul until it has almost destroyed him. But it did not. And how a callus has formed on his soul, and unless that system is adjusted to fit him, too, that callus is going to wear our that system.5. 拟人Dawn was beginning to prowl about the sky and put out the starts.6. 夸张For she was beautifulher beauty made the bright world dim, and everything beside seemed like the fleeting image of a shade.-