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1、文本为Word版本，下载可任意编辑发电子邮件英语作文 篇一：回复邮件英语作文范文 假设你叫李华。远在英国的网友Tom想了解你对上网的看法。请根据下表提供的信息，用英语给Tom发一封100个词左右的电子邮件。 要求：1. 文章开头已给出，不计入词数； 2. 可适当增加细节以使全文流畅完整。 参考词汇：网校：net-school Advantages 1. 获得更多信息 2. 可上网校学习 3. 联系更加便捷 1. 聊天、玩游戏费时 2. 仍有有害东西 1. 善于网上学习 2. 时间不宜过长 Disadvantages Suggestions Dear Tom, I would like to g

2、ive my opinions about being on the Internet. More and more middle school students are starting using the Internet, through which they can get a great deal of the latest information. They can enjoy lessons given by the teachers of net-schools at home. And it is easy and convenient to keep in touch wi

3、th friends by sending and receiving e-mails. On the other hand, some students have spent too much time chatting and playing games on the net. And there is still something harmful to the students. At last, I suggest that students should be good at using the Internet for their studies and not be on li

4、ne for long. Best wishes, Lihua 篇二：英文电子邮件写作技巧 英文电子邮件写作技巧 随着电脑走进千家万户，一张无形的巨网也悄然织起。这就是Internet（因特网，国际互联网）。一旦连接了Internet，信息传递就成为一件非常轻松惬意的事情。在网上最常使用的服务就是E-mail（电子邮件，electronic mail，常缩略为E-mail，e-mail 或email），这是因为电子邮件不但使用方便、传播快捷、可以一信多发，而且价格十分低廉，特别适合国际间的交流。 那么e-mail有什么写作要领呢？ 首先，必须要标题（Heading）栏的“收件人（To）”框中输

5、入收信人的E-mail 地址。“主题（Subject）”框的内容应简明地概括信的内容，短的可以是一个单词，如greetings；长的可以是一个名词性短语，也可以是完整句，但长度一般不超过35个字母。“主题”框的内容切忌含糊不清。像News about the meeting 这样的表达，应改为Tomorrows meeting canceled。一般来说，只要将位于句首的单词和专有名词的首字母大写即可。另外一种较为正规的格式可将除了少于5个字母的介词、连接词或冠词之外的每一个单词的首字母大写，如：New E-mail Address Notification。视信的内容是否重要，还可以开头加上

6、URGENT或者FYI（For Your Information，供参考），如：URGENT：Submit your report today! E-mail一般使用非正式的文体，因此正文（Body）前的称呼（Salutation）通常无须使用诸如“Dear Mr. John”之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名，但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔加上姓。如：Tommy，或者Mr. Smith。 E-mail文体的另外一个特点是简单明了，便于阅读，太长的内容可以以附件的方式发出。一个段落大多仅由一到三个句子组成。信尾客套话（Complimentary close）通常也很简明。常常只须一个

7、词，如：“Thanks”，“Best”，“Cheers”，不需要用一般信函中的“Sincerely yours”或“Best regards”。称呼和正文之间，段落之间，正文和信尾客套话之间一般空一行，开头无须空格。如： Jimmy, I received your memo and will discuss it with Eric on Wednesday. Best, David 在电子邮件的使用者中还流行使用一些由首字母或读音组成的缩略词，如： d u wnt 2 go out 2nite：Do you want to go out tonight? lol：Laughing out

8、loud oic：Oh, I see. mte：My thoughts exactly. brb：Ill be right back. c u 2morrow：See you tomorrow. fanx 4 ur elp：Thanks for your help. gr8：great btw：By the way imho：In my humble opinion asap：As soon as possible. 另外，网友们为了给枯燥的文字加入感情色彩，还创造了一种表示感情的小符号，英语叫smiley.如： ：-）代表“Im smiling at this”， ：-（代表“Im sad

9、about this”。 上述缩略词和小符号要视具体情况而定，不宜滥用。 E-mail的非正式的文体特点并不意味它的撰写可以马虎行事，特别是给长辈或上级写信，或者撰写业务信函更是如此。写完信后，一定要认真检查有无拼写、语法和标点符号的误。当然Outlook Express等软件的“拼写检查”功能可以助你一臂之力。 电邮（书信）英语写作技巧 日常要处理许多信件电邮,因而运用英语上不得不留神,以下有一些个人意见,也参考了一些书本,希望大家有所得益。 A. 文法上 1.切忌主客不分或模糊. 例子: Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our repor

10、t was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.” 应改为 Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we have updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment. (We决定呀, 不是report.) 2.句子不要凌碎. 例子: He decided not to audit the last ten contracts. Because of our previous objections about compliance. 应该

11、连在一起. 3.结构对称,令人容易理解. 例子: The owner questioned the occupants lease intentions and the fact that the contract had been altered with ink markings. 应改为: The owner questioned the occupants lease intentions and ink alterations of the contract. 4.单众数不要搞乱,不然会好刺眼,看不舒服. 例如: An authorized person must show that

12、 they have security clearance. 5.动词主词要呼应. 想想这两个分别: 1.This is one of the public-relations functions that is underbudgeted. 2. This is one of the public-relations functions, which are underbudgeted. 6.时态和语气不要转变太多.看商务英语已经是苦事,不要浪费人家的精力啊. 7.标点要准确. 例如: He did not make repairs, however, he continued to mon

13、itor the equipment. 改为: He did not make repairs; however, he continued to monitor the equipment. 8.选词正确. 好像affect和effect, operative和operational等等就要弄清楚才好用啦. 9.拼字正确. 有电脑拼字检查功能后,就更加不能偷懒. 10.大小写要注意.非必要不要整个字都是大写,除非要骂人,:,例如: MUST change to OS immediately. 外国人就觉得不礼貌和喝令人一样. 要强调的话,用底线,斜字,粗体就可以了. B. 文体 1.可读性.

14、对象是大学程度的话,用高中的英文就行,不要以为人人都是语言大师.多用短句(15-20字吧), 技术性的字,就更加要简单易明. 2.注意段落的开头.一般来说,重要或强调的事情都放在信件或段落的开头,而句子就放在最尾. 例如: 1.Because he was unable to attend the meeting personally, he forwarded his congratulations on cassette tape. 2.He forwarded his congratulations on cassette tape because he was unable to at

15、tend the meeting personally. 两者强调的事情就有分别了. 3.轻重有分. 同等重要的用and来连接,较轻放在次要的句子里. 4.意思转接词要留神. 例如: but (相反), therefore (结论), also (增添), for example (阐明). 分不清furthermore和moreover就不要用啦. 5.句子开头不要含糊不清的主词. 例子: These decisions have been a big disappointment to the committee members. They have delayed further act

16、ion. They是指什么呀?开头少用this, that, it, they, 或 which. 6.修饰词的位置要小心,例如: He could only reimburse the cost after July 15. 应为 He could reimburse the cost only after July 15. 7.用语要肯定准确.切忌含糊. 例如:The figures show a significant increase.” 怎样significant呀,大哥? 改为: The figures show an increase of 19%. 8.立场观点一致. 少用被动

17、语. 例如: Partial data should be submitted by April. 改为: You should submit partial data by April.就很好了. C. 格调 1.式样和句子长度不要太单调. 千篇一律的subject-verb-object会闷死人的.有时短句跟着长句可以化解一下. 2.弱软的词(e.g. was, were, is, are.)可以加强一点. 例如: Prunton products are highly effective in . 改为: Prunton products excel in .就有力很多了. 3.亲切,口

18、语化是比较受欢迎! 用宾词和主动的词,让人家受落. 例如: 1. This information will be sincerely appreciated.” 2. We sincerely appreciate your information. 明显地,我们会喜欢第2句. D. 写信提示 1.人家的名字千万不要错.老一辈的看到名字错就干脆撵去垃圾桶. 同样, 头衔都不要错. 头衔或学位,任择其一吧.以下是一样的: Howard E. Wyatt, D.D.SPhD. Dr. Howard E. Hyatt 2.多过一个男人,用Messrs,就是Misters的意思,不过不要跟名字,跟姓

19、就行啦.例如: Messrs. Smith, Wyatt, and Fury 女人呢? 用Mesdames, Mmes., or Mses. 同样不要跟名字. 例子: Mses. Farb, Lionel, and Gray 男女一齐呢? 弄清楚称呼就行.例如: Dr. and Mrs. Harold Wright Mr. Harold Wright and Dr. Margaret Wright Mr. and Mrs. Harvey Adams-Quinn 3.有人有自己头衔就要跟紧,例如有人有荣誉学位就不喜欢用一般的头衔啊有时大头不知道对方头衔,干脆用Ms.算了. Ms. Sarah G

20、ray 4.地址要低日期至少两行.处名时,职衔短可以一行过,长就下一行吧.例如: Ken Green, President Ken Green Vice President of International Operations 但这个就显得有点。: Ken Green Vice President of Unicom China 正确应为: Ken Green Vice President, Unicom China 5.老外的名字有时有Jr. 或 Sr.,之前的逗点是随你喜欢的,以下都是正确,不要笑人: Michael J. Smith, Jr. Michael J. Smith Sr.

21、6.外国国名尽量用大写.是为尊重,也方便邮差叔叔. 7.地址上的数字直接用阿拉伯数字吧,除了One,例子: 127 Ninth Avenue, North 127 E. 15 Street 5 Park Avenue One Wingren Plaza 556 - 91 Street 书信的结尾致意要留意,弄清大家的关系才选择用词,例子: 1. Very Formal非常正规的(例如给政府大老爷的) Respectfully yours, Yours respectfully, 2. Formal正规的(例如客户公司之间啦) Very truly yours, Yours very truly

22、, Yours truly, 3. Less Formal不太正规的(例如客户) Sincerely yours, Yours sincerely, Sincerely, Cordially yours, Yours cordially, Cordially, 4. Informal非正规的(例如猪朋狗友,同事之类) Regards, Warm regards, With kindest regards, With my best regards, My best, Give my best to Mary, Fondly, Thanks, See you next week! 有时在we,

23、I, and you之间选择是很烦的事- 如果是公司代表联络生意之类,可以用: We will reimburse you for these legal expenses. Sinopec will reimburse you for these legal expenses. 如果单纯说你自己,可以用: I found the brochure very informative. 有时可以一起用啦.: We are pleased to offer you the position of sales director, and I am looking forward to our Tue

24、sday morning meeting. 那么I和you呢?好烦好烦.一般来说,收信人的利益比较重要,名义上都要这样想.给人尊重的语气就一般不会错了. 多用you有时会有隔阂的感觉. You will be pleased to learn that you have been selected to serve on our advisory board. Your prompt response will be appreciated. (好像欠你一样) Im pleased that our board has selected you as the best qualified ca

25、ndidate to serve on our advisory board. I hope youll agree to serve. (这就友善多了) Your book was well written and comprehensive. (不用你来判断我呀) I thoroughly enjoyed your book and found an answer to every one of my questions about performance appraisals. (客气一点,人家受落) 总之,语气和宾词的运用得当能决定你的礼貌程度. 开头致意 用人家的名字总好过人家的头衔

26、称呼. 如果没有名字,或者是好正规信的信件,可以考虑这些: Dear Committee Membe:r: Dear Meeting Planner: Dear Colleagues: To All Sales Reps: To Whom It May Concern: Dear Sir or Madam: 篇三：英语商务邮件范文 邮件范文 1. Dear Mr./Ms, Mr. John Green, our General Manager, will be in Paris from June 2 to 7 and would like to come and see you, say,

27、on June 3 at 2.00 p.m. about the opening of a sample room there.Please let us know if the time is convenient for you. If not, what time you would suggest. Yours faithfully, 尊敬的先生/小姐 我们的总经理约翰格林将于六月2日到7日在巴黎，有关在那开样品房的事宜，他会于六月3日下午2：00点拜访您。 请告知这个时间对您是否方便。如不方便，请建议具体时间。 您诚挚的 Back to Top 回信 Dear Mr. / Ms, T

28、hank you for your letter informing us of Mr. Greens visit during June 2-7. Unfortunately, Mr. Edwards, our manager, is now in Cairo and will not be back until the second half of June. He would, however, be pleased to see Mr. Green any time after his return. We look forward to hearing from you. Yours

29、 faithfully, 尊敬的先生/小姐 谢谢来函告知我方六月2-7日格林先生的来访。不巧，我们的总经理艾得华先生现正在巴黎，到六月中旬才能回来。但他回来后愿意在任何时间会见格林先生。 希望收到您的来信。 您诚挚的 Back to Top 2. Dear Mr/Ms, I represent the W/P Electronics Company in Dallas, and will be in Kunming from next Monday to Friday, (October 5-9). I should like to call on you to discuss our new

30、 monitor. Would 0930 hours on Tuesday, October 6 be convenient? I shall be in Beijing, at the Great Wall Hotel, from Tuesday, September 29, until Sunday, October 4, where a message will reach me. If the day is not convenient, will you please suggest another. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐 我是达拉斯W/P电子公司的代表

31、，将于下周一到周五（10月5-9日）住留昆明。我乐于请您商讨我们新的显示器。星期二即10月6日上午09：30是否方便？ 从周二，即9月29日，我将住在北京的长城宾馆，直到周六，即10月4日，在那会有通知给我。如商讨日期不方便，请另外建议。 Back to Top 回信 Dear Mr/Ms, Thank you for your letter of September 26.We shall be very pleased to see you and discuss your new monitor, but October 6 is not suitable. We will be hap

32、py to meet with you at 9:30 a.m. on Wednesday, October 7, if the time is convenient for you. We look forward to meeting you. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐 我们将很高兴与您会面并与您商谈新的显示器，但10月6日不太合适。如方便的话，我们愿在10月7日与您会面。 期待与您见面。 您诚挚的 Back to Top 3. Dear Mr. / Ms, I am at present in Hamburg visiting the harbour with

33、a view to making known our new type of container for use in Europe. I shall be in Antwerp on Wednesday, 4th June, and should like to call on you at 2.00 p.m. on that day. If I do not hear from you to the contrary, I shall assume that it will be convenient for me to call at that time. Yours faithfull

34、y 尊敬的先生/小姐 我现正在汉堡参观港口，以让欧洲了解并使用我们的新型集装箱。 星期三即六月4日，我将到安特卫普，我会于当天下午2：00打电话给你。 对此约定如不来信，我将认为于这个时间打电话是方便的。 您诚挚的 Back to Top 4. Dear Mr. / Ms, Mr. Jack Baron, our personnel director, has asked me to acknowledge your application for the post of accountant and to ask you to come to see him on Friday aftern

35、oon, 5th July, at half past two. I will appreciate your letting me know whether you will be able to come. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐 杰克巴伦先生，我们的人事主任，让我向你申请会计职位表示感谢，并请你于7月5日星期五的下午两点半来见他。 是否能来，请告知，多谢。 您诚挚的 Back to Top 回信 Dear Mr./ Ms, Thank you for your letter of yesterday inviting me to come for an int

36、erview on Friday afternoon, 5th July, at 2:30. I shall be happy to be there as requested and will bring my diploma and other papers with me. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐 谢谢昨日来信通知我面试，我将于要求的7月5日，周五下午两点半到达，并带去我的证书及其它书面材料。 你诚挚的 信息查询 Request for Information 信息查询回复样本 尊敬的 Charles Aznavour 先生： 您 7 月 16 日的查询现已收

37、到。得知贵公司对我们的产 品有兴趣，.深.感荣幸。 我们已通过 DHL 给您邮寄了我公司最新的产品目录以 及一些常用原料的样品.。 很抱歉未能寄上全套样品，但保证我公司的产品质量 确实如您所期.。 我公司业务部经理 Angela Wang 女士将于下月到法国 出差，希望到时能与您面谈并奉上全套产品样品。相 信看了这些样品之后，您也会同意我们的产品用料考 究、质量上乘、工艺精良，能吸引最挑剔的买家.。 除了您查询的产品以外，本公司还生产品种繁多的小 机具。贵公司若感兴趣，可浏览我公司网页.： /deselec.co 期待您的订单.。 顺祝商祺.， 陈国玉，总经理 达尼米克出口上海电子有限公司 g

38、chen /deselec.co Sample reply to an RFI Dear Mr. Charles Aznavour, Thank you for your inquiry dated 16 July. We are pleased to hear that you are interested in our products. We have sent you a copy of our latest catalog by DHL, together with samples of some of the materials we regularly use in manufa

39、cturing of our products. I regret to say that we cannot send you the full range of samples. You can be assured, however, that our products are of the quality you expect. Mrs. Angela Wang, our Sales Manager, will be in France next month and would be pleased to visit you. She will have with her a wide

40、 range of our products. When you see them, we think that you will agree that only the best quality materials are used, and that the high standard of workmanship will appeal to the most discriminating buyer. We also manufacture a wide range of widgets in which you may be interested. You can find a full illustration of them in our online catalog at /deselec.co We look forward to receiving an order from you. Yours sincerely, Chen Guo Yu, General Manager Dynamic Exports Shanghai Electronic Co., Ltd. gchen /deselec.co 2 发电子邮件英语作文第 32 页 共 32 页