2022年高考英语作文范例及评分标准 .pdf

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1、普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准评分总则：1、此题总分为 25 分，按 5 个档次给分。2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否到达及格线15 分，然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于 80 和多于 120 的，从总分中减去2 分。4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5、假设缺少要点，分数降一档处理。6、 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将

2、其分数降低一个档次。评分细则：优秀 22-25：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。良好 18-21：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。一般 15-17：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确；基本到达预期写作目的。较差11-14：要点不全， 内容不完整， 行文不够连贯； 语言错误较多， 半数句子基本正确。差6-10：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。极差 0-5：只能写出与内容

3、相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。高考命题组提供的参考范文：Dear Peter, I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures ” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home co

4、untries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting an

5、d informative.400 words wouldbe fine. Could we have your article before June 28? I m looking forward to hearing from you. 95wordsYours, Li Hua 【点评】该参考范文语言简练，表达准确，但从高考考场作文考虑应提示学生词数再增加一些，句式可再丰富一些，这样才更有利于得高分。精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页，共 8 页各档次打分参考范文例如：1.阅卷组确定的 24 分作文范例Dear Peter

6、, I d like to ask you to write an article for our school s English newspaper. Recently a refreshing program has been established in our school s English newspaper which is named “The Foreign Culture ”. I m inclined to invite you to write an article. The importance concerning this issue is listed as

7、follows. This program is aiming to introduce the festivals and habits in America, especially including the life of students in high school. Consequently, I intend to inquest you to write some matters.Such as what the individuals tend to do when significant events are forthcoming. Additionally, it s

8、universally acknowledged that American students have extremely active thoughts. Considering that how they study in school is what we indeed intend to attain. Whats more, it must be beared in mind that the articles are supposed to be around 400 words. Meanwhile, I anticipate you can finish it before

9、28th, June. I m looking forward to your conclusive reply. (140 words)2. 阅卷组确定的 22 分作文范例Dear Peter, I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. It will be put on the part of Foreign Culture, which aims to introduce many other countries culture. This article needs to be

10、concerned with America festival custom and middle school students life. As you are American student, its certain that you can teach us a large amount of knowledge about it. As is known to all, only if we learn American Culture well, can we truly understand the country. Therefore, Id appreciate it if

11、 you write article.There are some requirements below. The essay is around 400 words. Besides, it has to be sent before June, the 28th. If you have other questions, please write to me as soon as possible.(112 words) 3. 阅卷组确定的 18 分作文范例Dear Peter, I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools

12、 English newspaper. We have an area named “Foreign Culture”. Its used to introduce Americas customs and students daily life. Could you write an essay for me. Initially please write some traditional festivals to enlarge our horizons. Some interesting things in your school life is also fine. Moreover,

13、 please write more than 400 words. So we can edidate is better. Eventually, the deadline is 6,28 because our work must be finished in these days. Dont be late please ？Here are my words. Thanks for attention. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(92 words) 4. 阅卷组确定的 15 分作文范例Dear

14、 Peter, 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页，共 8 页I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The English newspaper have a “foreign culture” program. If your article is written well, it will be select in newspaper. The article is about American festivals

15、and customs, besides inclouded media school students life. There is no doubt that you can make it. Because you is familiar with them. In opinion, you can also increase students how to study. Most importantly, your article can help us broaden horizon and let us know more American culture. You need to

16、 write about 400 words. Last but not least, you must hand in it before June, 28th. I m looking forward to your early reply.(101 words)5. 阅卷组确定的 12 分作文范例Dear Peter, I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The English newspaper has a show which is made describes for

17、American Traditional Day Culture and middle school students school life.I think you had much knowledge about them. Therefore, I want to that you could write a paragraph for them. You can write about 400 words. In addition, the paragraph should finished and put on before June, 28th. I believe you are

18、 able to do well. I m looking forward to your information.Thanks about your favour.(77 words) 6. 阅卷组确定的 9 分作文范例Dear Peter, I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The newspapers “Foreign Culture ” part plan add an article of product the USA s festival and student s

19、 life. Then, I tell some about it. First of all, the article must about the USAs Festival and students life, you can write the students study behaviour. And write the USAs festival behaviour. In addition, the article you need take 400 words. Dont write a very large artist. You can make a simple prod

20、uction. At last the articles deadline is before 28th, June. I believe you can finish better. Best wishes.(87 words) 7. 阅卷组确定的 4 分作文范例Dear Peter, I d like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. My name is Li Hua. I need you help. thank you. I hope you write the USA style an

21、d student live. I need you help. I need you letter. letter need to 400, in 6,28. need to your letter. thank you. (41 words) 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页，共 8 页1. 感谢信假设你是李华， 梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。【优秀总分值范文】Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my g

22、ratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University. Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. You not only wrote a recommendation 推荐 for me to Professor Wells who works i

23、n the Sydney University but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. It is your unreserved(无保留的 ) help that enables me to obtain this splendid 极好的opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study ha

24、rd to reciprocate回报 your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades. Yours truly, Zhang Ying 2. 抱歉信假设你是李华，你上星期参观伦敦，当时你爸的一个朋友Rogers先生对你照顾有加，请写封信表达你对他的感谢。【优秀总分值范文】Dear Sarah, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening. That is owing to

25、 因为 the fact that 同位语从句 my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning. I have to go there immediately and take care of him. As told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave. I really regret that I c

26、annot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends. I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes. Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party. Co

27、rdially, sincerelyLi Hua 3. 申请信假定你是李华， 将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B 公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣，要写一封求职信，包括以下要点：1年龄： 1822. 学习情况：班级前5，英语口语好3兴趣和特长：打字快，喜欢阅读，听音乐4性格特点：积极向上【优秀总分值范文】精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页，共 8 页Dear Sir/ Madam, I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an Englis

28、h secretary. Im really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it. I m18 years old and will graduate from Xin xing Foreign Languages School this July. I m an excellent student, among t he top 5 in my class of 50 students. Im good at English, especially spoken English. I often use th

29、e computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, Im easy to get along with and I like to make friends.I hope I may be granted 授予 an interview, when I can e

30、xplain my qualifications资格，条件 more fully. I am looking forward to your reply. Sincerely/Yours, LiHua 4. 通知假设你是校学生会主席。 新年即将到来，为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化，学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示，用英语向他们发出口头通知。时间：下周五 6：008：00 地点：教学楼 101室内容： 1唱中国歌2比赛用筷子3学习包饺子注意： 1词数不少于 50；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【优秀总分值范文】Good aftern

31、oon, everyone. May I have your attention, please? I m the chairman of the Students Union. As the New Year is around the corner 即将到来, we are going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture. During the party, not only can you si

32、ng a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks. Whats more, youll learn at the party how to make dumplings. Sounds great, doesnt it? The party is scheduled计划于 in Room 101of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday. Ple

33、ase make sure you wont miss it. Thank you for your attention.5. 邀请信你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris 写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：1. 时间： 8am5 pm；2. 集合地点：校门口；3. 交通工具：公交车；4. 携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。【优秀总分值范文】Dear Chris，精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页，共 8 页I m writing to tell you that we intend to climb the F

34、ragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class. We are supposed to gather at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am sharp. The bus will serve as our transportation. We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some

35、food with you as lunch. At about 2:00 pm. We will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about5.00pm. You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain. Please spare some time

36、 to join us. Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement. Yours, Joe 6. 建议信假定你是李华， 你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1说明你是该报的忠实读者2说明该报优点： 1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事3提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章【优秀总分值范文】Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulati

37、ons on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! I m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy. There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important th

38、ings that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world. As a young student, I wish that I can be a m

39、aster of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us. Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time! Sincerely yours, Li Hua 7. 求助信假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom 上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech cont

40、est) ，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给 Tom 写一封电子邮件：1.询问 Tom 的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请 Tom 帮助；3.告诉 Tom 你打算赛后去看他。【优秀总分值范文】精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 6 页，共 8 页Dear Tom，How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in

41、 China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are. Let me tell you a piece of good news: Im going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the c oming summer vacation. So Im busy preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information

42、and using proper English word to express my thoughts. Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation 语调. Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions. In addition, Im going to visit you after the contest. Im sure we will h

43、ave a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! I am looking forward to your early reply. Li Hua 8. 投诉信你是李华，两周前你从网上一套书虫系列读物BookwormSeries昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：1. 介绍购物情况2. 反映存在问题3. 提出解决方案可能用到的生词：投诉complaint n. 【优秀总分值范文】To whom it may concern, I am one of your cus

44、tomers( 顾客). I ordered订购 a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didnt receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book m

45、issing. I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, Id like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint. Looking forward

46、to your reply. Sincerely, Li Hua 9. 祝贺信假设你是李华，你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括： 1. 表达你的愉悦心情； 2.向她表示祝贺；3.请她介绍成功的经验。参考词汇：英语演讲比赛the English Speech Contest 【优秀总分值范文】Dear Wei Fang, I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I m writing to

47、 give my sincere congratulations.精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 7 页，共 8 页You don t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression. It came as no surprise to me that you won

48、the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning. I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 10. 求职信假设你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构MidSenior ESCH面

49、向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。ASSISITANTS WANTED Valuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at EnglishTheir work is to tend the senior students during the break Requirements attached ：1Good at English2Experienced priorityContact us by e-mail：nglishtec163com【优秀总

50、分值范文】Dear Director: I d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me. I ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my