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1、读后续写历年高考真题！附续写七大黄金原则！2022年1月浙江高考傲娇学霸与迷糊学渣 When Dr. Henderson was assigning (指定) project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldnt assign me to work with the fiercely com

2、petitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate (命运) would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid. I went up to my ne

3、w teammate and introduced myself. He looked at me as though I werent there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasnt mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he

4、 did it alone. Needless to say, I didnt look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didnt say anything for fear that I would make things worse. The project required each team to develop a hypothesis (假说), set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do

5、 the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students. When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades the exact opposite of m

6、e. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didnt want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what. After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasnt sure wh

7、at it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.Paragraph 2:One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.参考范文1We

8、started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.At first, it seemed that he dominated our discussion for he was familiar with the topic, but I was the opposite(与原文衔接自然). However, as days passed, I gradually got involved because he started to encourage me to explain my views! I could feel his icy shel

9、l gradually melting away(背诵的但是用的很自然) and eventually I could discuss with him looking straight in his eyes. We finished the hypothesis and experiment procedure, in great harmony actually. Things came out that he was serious, indeed, but he seemed icy because he was lonely. We parted the day before an

10、alysis discussion with confidence for our project. But when I returned the next morning, he was nowhere to be found. The fact struck me feeling desperate. He didnt come either in the following days.One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.It was the day before deadli

11、ne and I drowned myself doing analysis and preparing for the presentation. Hearing the word, I dashed to the hospital and found him, my dear teammate, lying on the bed, face pale. His eyes sparkled as he saw me. Beside him I managed to finish the last tasks with his guidance-his fingers pointing at

12、certain figures. Then next day I went for the presentation in class.参考范文2We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.Serious as my teammate was, we gradually grew in good tune with each other. He had a way with technical things and approached every detail with a clear purpose. And I spared no

13、effort to do my bit, collecting data and recording results carefully, so as to make up for my academic disadvantage. I fully discussed my ideas and shared my insights with him, who was once indifferent but later listened to me with close attention. We were making steady progress with our project.One

14、 day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.The moment I saw him lying helplessly in bed, I decided I had to act alone and do my best. I assured him I would not let him down and he should concentrate on recovering. I poured more time and energy into that project than ever

15、before, and finally presented our findings to the class, which surprisingly earned us an excellent grade! When I told him about our shared success, he smiled. It had to do with trust and the joy of sharing a common prize.2021年6月新高考卷母亲节的惊喜A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as

16、 they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly w

17、hat to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some

18、milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int

19、o the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turn

20、ed off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The p

21、iece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Paragraph 2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.参考范文As the twins looked around them in disappointme

22、nt, their father appeared.“Dont panic!” hehandedeach one a wet towel,helpingthem clean the mess quickly.After that,Jeffstammered outtheir plan,his face flushing. However, Father laughed, “Sounds great! I can teach you to cook.”At this, Jenna and Jef almostjumped to their feet, joy in eyes.Under his

23、careful guidance,it didnt take long beforethe French toast and chicken porridge were ready.Everything settled,Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Meeting their smiling eyes, Mother felt confuseduntilthey presented

24、the breakfast and said “Happy Mothers Day”. Mothergave them a tight hug, “Unbelievable! You can cook! Its the biggest surprise I have received.”Her face lit up with happiness. “They have known how to take care of others.” Father saidin response toher excitement,winkingat Jenna and Jef. They couldnt

25、help giggling.It was a secret only shared between them.2021年6月浙江卷“我”的工资Mydad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didnt understand my world of school activities. From age 14, heworked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to payfamilyexpenses.I didnt

26、really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I would surpass（超过） anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football,

27、 preparing for myfutureas a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboringfarmerhired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we we

28、re off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soonlearnedto identify different grasses like cockleburs, lambs-quarters, foxtails, and the k

29、ing of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It wastiringwork, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasnt sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, A jobs a big step togrowing up.Im glad you will be contributing to the household.My dads words made merealizethat my earning might no

30、t be mine to do with as wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasnt interested. I decided it was notfairthat l had to contribute my money.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:The pay day arrived at last.Paragraph 2:I understood immed

31、iately what my parents were worried about.参考范文The pay day arrived at last.I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played

32、 had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck?. asked my mother. Three hundred d

33、ollars, but we just had two hundred left.”I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldnt afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Ste

34、pping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what Ireceived for my work. I think it would help you a little.” A little surprised at what Isaid, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.2021年1

35、月八省联考好心的墨西哥一家During this past year, Ive had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs th

36、at said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too s

37、mall for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke h

38、is tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to

39、 put a $20 bill in the mans hand, but he wouldnt take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they w

40、ould go home.注意：续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.Paragraph 2:After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.参考范文1When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.I shookmy head and said no, wonderin

41、g why she asked such a question was shegoing to treat me to lunch or something? “Wait a minute,” said the girl, andthen she went back to the truck. After a few minutes she came back with apaper bag. “Here are some Mexican snacks and you can have some whenyou are hungry,” the girl smiled. I was so su

42、rprised and touched that wordsalmost failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead of a “Thank you!” when Itook the bag.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.When I sawwhat was in the bag, I was overcome with a mixture of respect andgratefulness. In addition to the snacks, there was

43、 the $20 bill. What a kindand respectable family! They are a perfect example of what kindness reallymeans. And Im sure I will pay it forward.参考范文2When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.Of course not, for I had been trapped there for quite a few hours. She then had a word wit

44、h her parents and went back to their truck. A few minutes later she came back with a paper bag. “Thats Mommys hand-made taco,” explained the girl. “Its so yummy that you must love it.” I was starving to death after all that exhausting work so I took the Mexico-originated food, grateful and deeply mo

45、ved. Then we waved goodbye to each other.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.Inside the bag was a chicken taco. The next few minutes saw my wolfing down the delicious food. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those i

46、n need, there are some kind-hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. The good deed the foreign family did will never escape me. I am going to pass it down to create a much friendlier world.2021年1月浙江卷尴尬的万圣节Pumpkin(南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every

47、October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. Mydadhas a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage I carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize

48、 or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother,Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with mymomfilming the annual event. Im unsure now why I thought forcing myheadinside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes an