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1、中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家教育是一项良心工程深圳龙文教育1 龙文教育学科导学案教师:刘琳学生:詹俊逸日期: 2011- 星期:时段:至课题作文练习学习目标与考点分析学习重点学习方法学习内容与过程英语书面表达在高考中日益显得重要，高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清楚，把意思表达完整，而是要给我们的句子润色，让我们的句子靓起来。如何让我们的英语句子靓起来呢？很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平。但这种方法需要一定的积累，也需要一定的基础。通过对低级句型的改造，可以迅速到达这一目的。1.强调句：可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。, It was not

2、 until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter. It was then that I realized the importance of English. 2.倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me. Only by this means can he escape from the big fire. 3.with 引导

3、的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with 结构。With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits He always likes to sleep with the windows open. 4.巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。Hearing that, the drivers wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense aft

4、er drinking. (低级形式： When he heard that, ) 5.恰到好处的被动句： 适合应用于较简短的句子， 这样显得语言简洁生动， 宾语一般是 nothing、精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页，共 6 页中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家教育是一项良心工程深圳龙文教育2 anything、everything 等不定代词。Searched all my pockets, but nothing was found 。6.感慨句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，但凡“I feel ”之类表达感情的句子皆可如

5、此改造。How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam. 7.高级定语从句：假设定语从句中的动词带有介词，只需将介词移至先行词后。We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before. 8.进行时态：有时会含有一定情绪，尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus. 9.婉转表达：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫画型作文题。I could find nothin

6、g but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter. 10.what 引导的名词性从句：将动宾结构转化为此结构。What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it. 11.“数词 +名词”变为“ as many as+ 数词+名词” 。As man

7、y as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests 12.适当加一些不关痛痒的插入语：一些连词、 副词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语，如 I guess 、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, whats more等，有时可以考虑几个插入语连用，就更像英美人士的文章了。13.独立主格：将主从句去掉连词，前句动词变为分词即可。The weathe

8、r being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. 14.把简单句改成复合句：适当的时候把两个简单句改成“too.to”或者“ sothat”等高级一点的复合句。例如：I was very tired. I couldn t keep up with them.我们可以改成：I was so tired that I couldn t keep up with them.或：I was too tired to keep up with them. 这样一来，英语基础不是很好的学生只要能够写出最基本的句

9、子，然后再对这些句子进行加工、改造、润色，慢慢的，就会让句子靓起来，在高考中就可以得到比较满意的成绩。一, 高考英语书面表达基本策略:1. 仔细审题2. 写要点- 造句五种基本句型 /简单句复杂的简单句复合句并列句3. 查错漏4. 卷面整洁精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页，共 6 页中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家教育是一项良心工程深圳龙文教育3 简单句 -复杂的简单句It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flower

10、s. Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden. (2).A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide. A pretty girl was crossing a wide road 用以下各招可给句子润色, 让句子靓起来。一. 使用定语从句1.I study in Chunhui Middle School. Chunhui Middle School has a long history. 使用 “ 介词+关系代

11、词 ” 引导的定语从句。2.中国的茶叶有很多种 , 其中龙井茶是世界著名的Therere many kinds of tea in China,Longjing Tea is famous all over the world. 3. I got on a bus. There were already too many people on it.( 定语从句 ) 二，使用 with 复合结构1.Our headteacher is a man of medium height. He wears a pair of glasses on his nose. Our headteacher i

12、s a man of medium height with a pair of glasses on his nose. 2. - 随着社会的发展,It is quite necessary that we (should) have a good knowledge of English and computer. 3.- 由于那噪音的持续 , I couldnt go on studying. with的复合结构 4. -(随着科学和技术的发展 )，the world is changing every day 三通过非谓语来改写句子. 5.She lay on the beach. Sh

13、e felt comfortable 6.I was defeated by Tom. I felt angry. 7.I was cleaning the window. I hurt my finger. 做下练习1.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, - 一路上有说有笑2.At about 1 o-clock this afternoon，Tracy called,- 说他明天上午不能在咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)同你见面 as she has something important to atte

14、nd to. 3.- (参加英语演讲比赛 )is a helpful way to learn English. 4.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries- 是为了确保我们没有卷入任何麻烦事精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页，共 6 页中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家教育是一项良心工程深圳龙文教育4 5.- 被他的话所感动， I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song-( 名叫“ 母亲” 的一首歌 ) for t

15、he students. 四利用介词短语改写句子1. Upon arrival/On arriving (一到达 ), we began to work immediately. 2. -( 做完那些工作之后 ), we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees, and- ( 在离开之前 ), we took some photos to record our green action. 3. -(在比赛的过程中 ), you should finish your speech in five minutes and try y

16、our best to express yourself in English fluently. 4. -( 一听到铃声 ), students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. 五巧用 There be 结构1. 曾有一位非常勤劳的农夫。There was once a farmer_who worked very hard. 2. 一般说来 , 我作出这个决定有两个原因。Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. 3. 沿途 800长的大街 , 有 3

17、00 多家商店。Along this 800 meter street,there are more than 300 shops 。六 .句子润色：简单句的高级形式简单句其实也可以不简单,假设将简单句与非谓语动词短语、形容词短语、介词短语、同位语、独立主格结构等巧妙地合并在一起,不但可以表达更丰富的内容,而且也使句子变得更精彩,充分显示你在英语表达上的实力。1. 同位语I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similar to mine. 我想有一个笔友 ,

18、 希望是一个二十出头且兴趣相投的女孩子。(同位语中又有两个并列的介词短语修饰 ) 2. 形容词短语Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. 出生于美国的托马斯 爱迪生是一个伟大的科学家和发明家。3. 不定式短语In order to study well, we need to do sports. 为了学习好 , 我们需要做体育运动。4. 现在分词短语In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, watching he

19、r babies flying away. 在这幅图中 , 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里, 观看她的鸟仔飞走。5. 过去分词短语, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. 与信件和公用相比, 和网络更快也更方便。6. 介词短语精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页，共 6 页中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家教育是一项良心工程深圳龙文教育5 , he encourages us to think by ourselves. 他鼓励我们独立

20、思考 , 而不是马上告诉我们答案。即时练习 按括号中的提示翻译以下句子。1. 我是李华 , 四川的一个学生。 (同位语 ) 1. Im Li Hua, 2.与其他老师相比 , 摩尔先生更注意教学方法。(用过去分词短语 ) , Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. 3. 北京动物园 , 建于 1906 年, 有 100多年的历史了。 (用过去分词短语 ) The Beijing Zoo, , has a history of more than 100 years. 4. 李华在公共汽车站等601 公车上去学。 (现在分词短语

21、 ) Li Hua was at the bus stop, 6.我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。(介词短语 ) 6. 合并句子 : The moon travels round the earth once every month. The moon is a natural satellite of the earth.( 现在分词短语 ) 7. 合并句子： He was well known for his expert advice. He was able to help a great number of people with their personal a

22、ffairs.( 过去分词短语 ) 8. 已经有许多作家利用他们手中的笔同错误的事情作斗争。many writers who used their pens to fight things that were wrong. 9.似乎每分钟都有这种笑话被克隆出来。a new joke (clone) every minute. 10. 前门大街是步行街(pedestrian street), 但是那里有当当车 (trolley car)带你去商店、茶馆和剧院。Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, (take) you to the shops, teaho

23、uses and theatres. 11. 有许多人在观看足球赛。_ people _ (watch) the football match. 12. 然而, 有一个错误我想指出来。13. 与传统课堂比起来 , 毫无疑问 , 在网络上学生可以得到更多的学习资源。Compared to a traditional classroom, _children can get more learning resources on the Net. 14. 可能会有一个更聪明的方法来做这件事。精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页，共 6 页中小学 1 对 1 课外辅导专家教育是一项良心工程深圳龙文教育6 _a cleverer way to do this. 15. 我完全理解我们为此事感到不快, 但是没有必要感到太难过。I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but _ _. 课内练习与训练精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 6 页，共 6 页