中考英语作文专题复习指导.ppt

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1、Writing 中考作文指导中考作文指导Learning aims: 1. 学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。2. 能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。 3. 通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。组句成篇。 中考英语写作评分标准中考英语写作评分标准 一档文（一档文（17-2017-20分）分）写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构，至少有复杂结构，至少2-32-3个，个，基本无语法错误，只有基

2、本无语法错误，只有1-21-2个，个，或有少量由于使用复杂结构或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。但不影响意义理解。 How can we write a good composition(作文作文)?第一步：第一步：都要都要认真审题认真审题，明确写作，明确写作体体裁裁、要求要求和提示和提示要点要点How can we write a good composition? (Have a discussion!)具体做法：具体做法：用笔勾画用笔勾画 假 如 你 是 王 林 。 你 所 在 学 校 的假 如 你 是 王 林 。 你 所 在 学

3、校 的 “ 爱 心 俱 乐 部爱 心 俱 乐 部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。自荐信。 姓名姓名王林王林性别性别男男本人特点本人特点身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处与同学友好相处“爱心爱心”表表现现（见图片）（见图片）加入目的加入目的 1. 2. 1.要求：要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，要点须包括表格和四幅图

4、片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；但不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中表格中“加入目的加入目的”一栏内容由考生一栏内容由考生自拟；自拟； 4. 词数：词数：70左右。左右。第二步：第二步：列出写作提纲（列出写作提纲（Outline）。）。具体做法：具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要不要遗漏要点！点！Write an OutlineIntroduction Main bodyConclusionI want to join 本人特点本人特点 “爱心爱心”表现表现加入目的加入目的 看表格看表格看表格看表格看图看图自拟自拟I hope you will agre

5、e with me. 可以用英文或中文可以用英文或中文姓名姓名/性别性别易漏掉的易漏掉的要点！要点！自荐信自荐信What will you write？王林王林Who are you in this letter?人称人称: IWhats your purpose ? 加入该俱乐部加入该俱乐部时态：时态：一般现在时为主一般现在时为主Thinking:Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard a

6、t my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. 扣分原因一扣分原因一词数不够！词数不够！Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work

7、 hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. Introduction本人特点本人特点加入目的加入目的扣分原因二扣分原因二遗漏要点！遗漏要点！Write an OutlineIntroduction Main bodyConclusionI am a boy Id like to join 本人特点本人特

8、点 “爱心爱心”表表现现加入目的加入目的I hope you will agree with me. 无法拿满分！无法拿满分！Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates If I join the club, I will be abl

9、e to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin少了少了两个两个重要部分，扣重要部分，扣5-6分，只得分，只得9-10分！分！缺少缺少“爱心爱心”表现表现也缺少也缺少Conclusion“爱心爱心”表现表现(examples)Picture 1 helpwithhelp classmates with lessons我的我的I often help classmates with lessons. 看图看图Picture 2helpcross“爱心爱心”表现表现(examples)看图看图 hel

10、p old people cross the road I help old people cross the road on my way home.Picture 3“爱心爱心”表现表现(examples)看图看图give my seat to give my seat to people in need I often give my seat to people in need on a bus.“爱心爱心”表现表现(examples)看图看图Picture 4clean up the park help clean up the park I often help clean up

11、the park.“爱心爱心”表现表现(examples)1. I often help classmates with lessons.2. I help old people cross the road on my way home.3. I often give my seat to people in need on a bus.4. I often help clean up the park.ConclusionIll be glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me.Dear Chairperson,I

12、am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others I get on well with my classmates .If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang LinIll be gl

13、ad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me. and often help classmates with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the road. On a bus, I always give my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park.不但要点完整了，词数也够了。不但要点完整了，词数也够了。写作：写作：第一步就是要第一步就是要认真审题

14、认真审题，明确写作，明确写作体裁体裁、要求要求和提示和提示要点要点第二步就是要第二步就是要列出写作提纲列出写作提纲，根据，根据段落段落整理整理写作写作要点要点。写作前：写作前： 确定确定人称、时态人称、时态写作后：写作后： ？Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from class1 Grade 9. Id like be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hardly at my lessons. I like helping others. and often help cl

15、assmates with their lesson . On my way home, I often help old people cross the road. On a bus, I always gave my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, he can do more for others.Ill glad if I can join the club.

16、 I hope you will agree with me. Yours Wang Lin CtolessonsgiveIbe1分分其它六处错扣其它六处错扣2分分只得只得12分分作文中作文中应避免应避免的几种常见的几种常见语言错误语言错误：1.时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。分左右）。2. 中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整整句不得分句不得分）。）。3.单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要要过关过关）。）。4. 介词介词, 代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的代词，非谓语动词或

17、形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的不正确使用（对单词的词性词性要要熟悉熟悉）。）。5. 名词单复数（名词单复数（细心细心就可以避免的错）。就可以避免的错）。写作：写作：第一步就是要第一步就是要认真审题认真审题，明确写作，明确写作体裁体裁、要求要求和提示和提示要点要点第二步就是要第二步就是要列出写作提纲列出写作提纲，根据，根据段落段落整理整理写作写作要点要点。写作前：写作前：确定确定人称、时态人称、时态写作后：写作后： 检查检查另外另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分分的卷面整洁分的卷面整洁分，这两分，这两分不能丢！不能丢！

18、）。）。解决方法：解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。涂改。Lets Lets practice!practice!你将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是你将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是Learning to get along with our parents. Learning to get along with our parents. 请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下。 要求：要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；）表达清楚

19、，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3）词数：）词数：100词左右（演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）词左右（演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数） 4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。 现象现象经常跟父母发火，甚至几天不讲话经常跟父母发火，甚至几天不讲话原因原因1 父母过分关注分数父母过分关注分数 2 我们我们措施措施（不少于三点）（不少于三点）1. 我们应该和父母沟通我们应该和父母沟通 2. 我们我们 3. 我们我们Lets enjoy our own compositions!Sample

20、 writing Good morning , ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is learning to get along with our parents . These days , most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents .We easily get angry for no reason and even dont talk to them for days. I think the causes are as follows .First , our parent

21、s only care about our marks and it makes us stressed . Second , we are unwilling to communicate with them . Its time for us to change. First，we can communicate with them , by sharing our joys and worries with them .Then , we can help do some housework to show our love for them . Finally , we should

22、achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they wont feel worried about us. Thats all for my speech .Thank you ! 抄抄组组集集连连抓抓审审作文作文组段成篇，组段成篇，加主题句加主题句审清题意，审清题意，构建框架构建框架连词成句，变连词成句，变换句式换句式抓住要点，抓住要点，列关键词列关键词Summary集句成段，集句成段，添连接词添连接词抄写规范，抄写规范，避免错误避免错误Homework After class, self-edit your own compositions.Secrets of learning English:Practice makes perfect.Hard work leads to success.Thank you !